Bhai appki angraizi he samjh ni aati tu main kiya keh skta hun.

Secondly, I'm also just another aspirant like you.

In my opinion, your treatment of essay is disorganized, a desperate attempt to look unconventional and flawed.

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Democracy is the government of the people, by the people, for the people (PMS-2012)
1. Introduction
1.1. Democracy is the best form of government among all the available options of ruling
1.2. Yes: Democracy is the government of the people, by the people and for the people
2. Why democracy is the government of the people, by the people and for the people
2.1. Representatives of government are elected by way of voting
2.2. Representative of majority of people
2.3. Representatives are well familiar with the problems of people
3. Essential features of democracy which make it representatives of people
3.1. Equal distribution of resources
3.2. Freedom of speech and expression
3.3. Rule of law
3.4. Access on information
3.5. Participation
3.6. Transparency and accountability
3.7. Devolution of power(local bodies election)
3.8. Promotion of bilateral and multi-lateral trade agreements among democratic nations(TAPI gas pipeline, CPEC, Iran-Pakistan peace pipeline)
4. Way forward
4.1. Ensure good governance
4.2. Sustainability of rule of law
4.3. Process of ballot should be more transparent
4.4. Need more coordination and consensus among the institutions at national and international polices
4.5. Opposition is the real essence of democracy---stop the politics of friendly opposition
5. Conclusion
5.1. Panacea of all socio-economic, political and legal ills of a common man are lies in a strong democratic system
5.2. Worst form of democracy is better than the best form of dictatorship

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Safeer may be you are choked with numbers or the way I mentioned numbering in subheading..i wonder you call it a desperate attempt...really shocked!!! .

any senior member please!

Apart from flawed numbering ....without justification deliberately assume to consider an essay a desperate attempt is other thing but comparitively as a fail attempt ..like those failed CE 2015 candidates did with their essay and you are doing same thing..justifying things not thing..the way you are dealing essays are no more than jokes .they can't give you more than 10 or 20 believe me....simple but basic is better ...but sometime too much clarity create complexity...

You can proffer headings in your outline only.
However, Including headings in an essay -- rather than outline -- is a heinous atrocity so it should be avoided.

If you're perplex in giving coherent shape to your outline, you can start writing directly.

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I am talking about all of you...

NOT ECONOMY, BUT POLITICS IS THE KEY TO SUCCESS

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Introduction:

In the pursuit of happiness and success, politics has an advantage over economy.

[A] The broad concept of success, beyond the measure of wealth and riches:


[B] Comparison of politics and economy in terms of their ability to yield success:

1- Politics has a wider scope than economy, thus its capacity to bring success is also greater.

2- Politics incorporate reliable tools, (negotiations and participation) to reach at a solution. Whereas, economy use taxes, interests and loans which may backfire.

3- Political gains are real and sustainable. But economic achievements are mere numbers and often deceptive.

4- Politics protect the weak and the most vulnerable. Economy, ironically, believes in the survival of the fittest.

5- If economy is a "zero-sum game", then politics is a positive sum game.

6- Economy is in fact a hurdle to successfully deal with environmental and climatic issues. Only politics can provide assurance of success at this frontier.

7- Even for individuals, politics is a gateway to success because political leaders are regarded as heros while economists are often seen with suspicion.

[C] Policy implications of the above findings:

1- Political reforms first; Econmic reforms later.

2- Politics must dictate the economy and not otherwise.

3- A crown is not a cure for headache.

Conclusion:

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NOT ECONOMY, BUT POLITICS IS THE KEY TO SUCCESS

-------------------------Outline--------------------------

Introduction:

In the pursuit of happiness and success, politics has an advantage over economy. a good thesis statment

[A] The broad concept of success, beyond the measure of wealth and riches:


[B] Comparison of politics and economy in terms of their ability to yield success:

1- Politics has a wider scope than economy, thus its capacity to bring success is also greater.

2- Politics incorporate reliable tools, (negotiations and participation) to reach at a solution. Whereas, economy use taxes, interests and loans which may backfire. excellent

3- Political gains are real and sustainable. But economic achievements are mere numbers and often deceptive. good idea

4- Politics protect the weak and the most vulnerable. Economy, ironically, believes in the survival of the fittest. excellent

5- If economy is a "zero-sum game", then politics is a positive sum game. zabardast approach

6- Economy is in fact a hurdle to successfully deal with environmental and climatic issues. Only politics can provide assurance of success at this frontier. convincing point

7- Even for individuals, politics is a gateway to success because political leaders are regarded as heros while economists are often seen with suspicion.

[C] Policy implications of the above findings: change this heading it's not clearly giving your message,not looking good

1- Political reforms first; Econmic reforms later. good job

2- Politics must dictate the economy and not otherwise.

3- A crown is not a cure for headache.

Conclusion:

a comprehensive outline, diversity in ideas; on the whole checker will never ignore such a good essay.

with good expression you can surely take 45plus,

Please check my outline too.
Waqarabbasi,Safeer khan,boneparte,mustansar Hussain.
Where is Ambivalent busy?

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