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"Tough challenges reveal strengths and weaknesses" Challenges help us in knowing what we are and lead us to adversity. Hardship helps us to examine us and it recognizes that what is important in our life.

Synopsis

1-Introduction

2-Tough Challenges
a)example of Pakistan;
-socio-economic & political challenges
i-social challenges
-poverty
-illiteracy
-injustice
-unemployment
-crimes; extremism; terrorism etc..
ii-economic challenges
-lack in FDI
-overpopulation
-decline in growth rate
-imbalance in Forex
iii-Political challenges
-dearth of honest leadership
-incompetency of institutions

b) Challenges of an individual
-ranging from trifling issues to colossal problems

3-Challenges revel our strength
a) We incorporate our strength to achieve the challenges
b) Pakistan's strength to achieve the challenges
c) An individual's strength to attain the targets

4-Challenges reveal our weaknesses
a) Challenges become mountains to scale
b) Having fragility in achieving challenges our incompetency is exposed
c) We get weaker on account of the nature of challenges

5-Challenges disclose our reality
a) Bitter realities of Pakistan; dark & bright ages
i-Since inception to 1971; debacle of Dhaka
ii-Vulnerable picture of Pakistan before world since
iii-Indopak wars; 1948, 1965, 1971, 1999
iv-Are we really great in term of individuality? NO, NEVER!!! No one is perfect
b) Super natural truth of man

6-Challenges put us into the cold water
a) In the time of adverstity nearly no one is at our disposal
i-US was not at our disposal after disowning SEATO & CENTO
ii-US withdrew after decline of USSR
iii-Friends but not masters; Ayoub Khan
iii-Sino-Pak; Game of national interest
iv-Every body is selfish in the world-YES it is true!
b) Our beloved can leave us in the lurch--bitter truth!

7-Eventually Hardship recolonize our stance, reality & juncture
a) In hardship we come to know our our real stance
b) The hardship of Pakistan & ultimate realities to know our juncture
c) Man is born to face hardship bravely
d) Though it is hard to bear hardship, yet it can be tackled; the last message of father of nation

8-Finally we come to know what is important in our life!
a) Pakistan is a nuclear power
b) Abundant in natural resources
c) Human capital;
d) Brave protectors~world's first ranking agency
e) We need to no we are enough strong to achieve our challenges on our own
f) Existentialism finally tells us the aim of our life

9-Conclusion

Paragraphs-11
I left only last page unwritten
15 minutes for brainstorming & topic selection
1 hour in drafting rough outline
And I attempted 11 paraphrases within 1.1/2 hours

Please comment on my attempt. Thank You.
No, doubt you have written an attractive and detailed essay. However, I am afraid you have become too specific in your ideas as the topic was general in nature. Moreover, I am amazed that how you were able to cover such a vast essay in two hours
To sum up, good attempt....
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