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Originally Posted by safeer khan
A few minor things I've mentioned above. Apart from that, I think you could have discussed the idea in terms of other phenomena as well. For example, you could have argued that a bright individual student seeks for appreciation from teachers in terms of good grades ((shaied yeh parh examiner ko reham b ajaye)). And when society is unable to provide positive nourishment for mind, its energies can be diverted to Criminal activities. And more energetic individuals want a higher level of activity and stimulation, hence they must be provided adequate opportunities in the Army and sports. These are just a few raw ideas.
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I think the idea is the brains going toward appreciation then how good brains can get appreciation in crimes. although social neglect of people can contribute to crimes , the crimes cannot be made the part of the essay on migration;thora confusing ne ho jae ga. what you say?