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Originally Posted by ursula
your first sentence correction is absolutely right , and explanation is also fine.
But second sentence has another error as well,which is known as error of dangling modifiers.in such type of sentences what reader perceive is quite awkward like
Your sentence is read as a letter is enclosed along with other paraphernalia; in order to correct such a type of errors we place immediately modifier along with modified.
Hence correct sentence would be; This letter enclosed a signed affidavit and a carbon copy of his request to our main office.
If there is any discrepancy than come up with proof.Hope it will fix the issue.Tuck it!
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DEAR URSULA
the writer in the second sentence has stressed the enclosure of the papers. you cannot prove it wrong by any means. you can consult with someone expert in English grammar. there is only one mistake in the sentence and that is of the singular form put in place of a plural form.
regards. any feedback will be highly appreciated.