Originally Posted by waqarabbasi

We have to learn to be our own best friends because we have fallen too easily into trap to be our enemies.
Thesis statement
Success of humanity is determined by the level of its self friendship. Disasters have been invited by none but by humanity’s enmity against its own self.
A. Self- friendship determines success
B. Humanity suffers because it becomes its own enemy
1. Security and armaments
2. Green revolution and health hazards
3. Industrialization and challenged existence of life on earth
4. Nuclear power and endangered peace
C. Friendly approach towards itself can save humanity
1. End of insecurity and perpetual peace
2. Universal efforts to save the life on earth
There were two more headings which I can’t recall
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D. Humanity is a victim of its own enmity
E. Salvation lies in being our own friend
Conclusion
Details; my outline consumed two pages and the essay took 16 pages.
It was connected and coherent but I have done one blunder I wrote the word ‘enemity’ instead of enmity.
Please give your opinion about essay, marks , pass, fail ,whatever you feel; introduction and conclusion both were solid .one thing more which I did wrong as writing own self as ‘ownself’