hey guy nice efforts you have composed a good nazim but ab meri bhi eak nazem gosh guzar ha

" ye teri our meri muhabbato
ke bheech
jo faslay aur musafatey ha
ea eak tapti hoee sihra ki manind ha

tu oos paar khara ha ma eas paar khara hoon
tu qadam barae tu
aabla pher jal uttahe
ma qadam baraon to majburyea rasta roke

to kia kare sanam ke mil kar gea
ease gea keh kabhi na bichrae

tu aao ham dono qismat ke der pa jaa ker

apni naakam muhabbat ka gilla kar de

ya nikale koee rah wo hamare mellon ki

ya zindagi bher ham dono ko judda ker de.

Tariq Afridi

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Tariq Afridi