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Mulaqat
main nay aik choti si nazam likhi hai ummeed hai kay muazzaz shohra is ko pasand farmain gay or tareef or tanqeed say mustafeed farmain gay
App sab kay liey yeh aik choti si nzam Mulaqat Sadion bad wo mila muj ko main nay bas ik sawal kia ousay batao tou yaad kabi kia muj ko Hans kar ous nay jawab dia Dair takkkkkkkkk... Ummedd hai aap ko pasand aay g |
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Mellon or Judda
hey guy nice efforts you have composed a good nazim but ab meri bhi eak nazem gosh guzar ha
" ye teri our meri muhabbato ke bheech jo faslay aur musafatey ha ea eak tapti hoee sihra ki manind ha tu oos paar khara ha ma eas paar khara hoon tu qadam barae tu aabla pher jal uttahe ma qadam baraon to majburyea rasta roke to kia kare sanam ke mil kar gea ease gea keh kabhi na bichrae tu aao ham dono qismat ke der pa jaa ker apni naakam muhabbat ka gilla kar de ya nikale koee rah wo hamare mellon ki ya zindagi bher ham dono ko judda ker de. Tariq Afridi
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good effort
kahan jaoo gey mujhay chorr ker key main yeah pooch pooch key thuk gaee woh jawab mujh ko na dai saka woh tu khud sarapa sawal tha woh mila jo sadiyoun key baad meray lub pey koiee gila na tha ussay chup nain meree rula dia jissey guftagu main kamal tha SELF-CONTENTMENT IS ONLY WITH THE REMEMBRACE OF ALLAH |
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