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Originally Posted by peerlessqurrat
I am new here practicing essay .
Beggars are not the chooser...
beggars always implore to others. He consistently wait for someone to give him helping hands . He has to depend on others . He cannot be chooser because chooser makes his own decission based on his own intetest to select the things whereas beggar has to accept what has given to him . Morever , he has to bear humiliation and tauting of people . Everybody sees beggars with contempt . Once begging becomes habbit , it will never fade away .
Pakistan always has begging bowl in its hands . It always implore from IMF , America , Saudia Arabia , China etc . In return , they exploit Pakistan as one can see in case of America when Raymond Davis gunned down two Pakistani .So , America gave money to shut up the mouth of Pakistan . On the other hand , many innocent people are being killed due to drane attack . For this , Pakistan is being paid . In short , pakistan begging bowl is becoming larger and larger day by day .
There are money countries in the world who never ask alms to others . For example , in 2003 Iran experienced earthquack . But it never asked help from other country . In addition , china is the greatest example who never begs to others that is why it is successful .
Pakistan is blessed with many things like four seasons , good land , rivers , natural resourses etc . Inspite of this , it always request others to help . It must not forget that self reliance is the key to unlock the door of success . One should believe in this maximum that help yourself heaven will help you
It takes a lot of courage, hard work, and many sacrifices to reach the pinnacle.
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In continuation of what has already been said...
> Whenever you prepare for essay, try to make drafts and improve them. This way, your final essay will be grammatically flawless. Vocabulary issues specifically spelling mistakes will be lesser and you will have a better grip over the overall structuring of the essay. Practicing this will so improve your essay writing skills that when the time comes (i.e. CSS Essay paper) you won't need to prepare one or many drafts.
> Focus on grammar (don't burden yourself with the complex grammatical rules - just the basic ones). Basic grammatical mistakes for example mistakes of Subject-Verb Agreement, Tenses, Syntax etc. give a very bad impression of the overall essay. Your attempt has quite a few basic grammatical mistakes.
> Essay is not all about the content that you are presenting. It is equally important that the "tool" (language) which you are using to convey your content is also at-most clear and comprehensible. You may have extraordinary thoughts and ideas but with flawed language you won't be able to communicate those thoughts and ideas to the reader (in this case the examiner) and vice versa (i.e. Having impeccable writing skills and crafty linguistics choices up your sleeve and no worthy ideas is also of little avail).
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