Thread: Another poem by me
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Old Sunday, July 17, 2016
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Originally Posted by zahida noor View Post
Jal thal krna hai ankho ko..
kaho kia inki aas bano gy?
Jal thal kerne kleay aas banna zaroori nai hota balken ye 2 opposite khayalat lagtay hain, jahan tk main samjha.

Any way, nice poetry, pyara takhayul hy, keep it up.
Also pay some attention to the evils of this society, ye bhi 1 section hy poetry ka. I am dead sure, you can do it.
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