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[bureaucarate]

Since 2013,better economic,political,social,and diplomatic changes can be seen in Pakistan.But,unfortunately ,corruption ,one of the major problem of our country has increases rather than decreased.

Day-by-day corruption moving bad to worst,but unfortunately no effective policy materialized,yet, to curb it.

Panama Leaks is the major evidence against corruption-riddled rulers but,unfortunately, no consensus among political parties to set up an independent commission to investigate such matter.

Not only Panama ,virtually all government officials are involved in such viral disease .
Despite NAB,Anti Corruption department and other law enforcement agencies no implementation done to recover looted money,or to bring culprit under the law.

[Khola Bokhari]

Originally Posted by bureaucarate

Since 2013,better economic,political,social,and diplomatic changes can be seen in Pakistan.But,unfortunately ,corruption ,one of the major problem of our country has increases rather than decreased.

Day-by-day corruption moving bad to worst,but unfortunately no effective policy materialized,yet, to curb it.

Panama Leaks is the major evidence against corruption-riddled rulers but,unfortunately, no consensus among political parties to set up an independent commission to investigate such matter.

Not only Panama ,virtually all government officials are involved in such viral disease .
Despite NAB,Anti Corruption department and other law enforcement agencies no implementation done to recover looted money,or to bring culprit under the law.

Instead of using 'but' as a conjuction, use however.
One of the major problems*
Has increases is wrong. Has shall be followed by third form of the verb.

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[Assasin]

Originally Posted by bureaucarate

Since 2013,better economic,political,social,and diplomatic changes can be seen in Pakistan.But,unfortunately ,corruption ,one of the major problem of our country has increases rather than decreased.

Day-by-day corruption moving bad to worst,but unfortunately no effective policy materialized,yet, to curb it.

Panama Leaks is the major evidence against corruption-riddled rulers but,unfortunately, no consensus among political parties to set up an independent commission to investigate such matter.

Not only Panama ,virtually all government officials are involved in such viral disease .
Despite NAB,Anti Corruption department and other law enforcement agencies no implementation done to recover looted money,or to bring culprit under the law.

Use comma where its use is mandatory.
Changes have been witnessed is more appropriate than can be seen.
One of the major problems (not problem)
Increased (not increase)
....there are many other minor mistakes also .keep reading DAWN .these mistakes will be ironed out automatically !

[infinite optimism]

Originally Posted by bureaucarate

Since 2013,better economic,political,social,and diplomatic changes can be seen in Pakistan.But,unfortunately ,corruption ,one of the major problem of our country has increases rather than decreased.

Day-by-day corruption moving bad to worst,but unfortunately no effective policy materialized,yet, to curb it.

Panama Leaks is the major evidence against corruption-riddled rulers but,unfortunately, no consensus among political parties to set up an independent commission to investigate such matter.

Not only Panama ,virtually all government officials are involved in such viral disease .
Despite NAB,Anti Corruption department and other law enforcement agencies no implementation done to recover looted money,or to bring culprit under the law.

Since 2013,better economic,political,social,and diplomatic changes can be witnessed in Pakistan except the increase in corruption ,which is one of the major problems of our country.Day-by-day corruption is going from bad to worst.No policy,however,has been devised yet to stem it.
Panama Leaks is the major evidence against corrupt rulers, but unfortunately,there is a lack of consensus among the political parties to set up an independent commission to investigate such matter.
Not only Panama ,virtually all government officials are involved in such viral disease .Don't get it?
Despite NAB,Anti- Corruption department and other law enforcement agencies,no action has been taken to recover looted money or to bring the culprits to justice.

[infinite optimism]

Originally Posted by bureaucarate

Thanks

There are few more points to be corrected.

After "since 2013" there should be no comma because when prepositional phrase at the start contains three or less than three words,no comma should be placed.

Before Except comma should be put because it is a non-essential phrase,not required for the meaning of the sentence to make sense

Lastly,there should be no dashes in day by day,which is an idiom.
Day-by-day=wrong
Day by day=correct