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Default Plz help: The violence of war can be diluted with love
Does anyone know what we were supposed to write in this?? i want to just to make sure.
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I wrote as such

Love is a a human emotion that can do away with the evil of war. war is caused by a human emotion of hatred and aggression, and only the emotion of love can counter it.

First example was of arabia, where arab tribes had been in a constant war with each other. Holy Prophet(PBUH) taught the same people the message of love and brotherhood, and the same people went on to become united nation that rather than waging war against each other, ruled from spain to far east.

Seconly, european nations had been waging war against each other for long. Only once they decided to live with love and tranquility did they became an economic giant.

Hence, love is one such power that can help eradicate bad of war.
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Does anyone know what we were supposed to write in this?? i want to just to make sure.
I started with a quotation of Chaucer;

Amor Vincit Omnia(love conquers all)
I compared the effects of war with that of love.
I discussed that the pleasure achieved by war is temporary while the one achieved by love is eternal and everlasting.
I gave example of Holy Prophet(P.B.U.H).
I wrote hadith;
"The one who killed a man(without cause),in fact he killed the whole humanity"
I wrote;As a disease is cured by medicine same like the effects of violence can be diluted with love.
I discussed that the base of all religions is love for humanity not violence.
Love breeds peace and tolerance while war breeds violence and restlessness.
In the end I quoted Iqbal;
"Love,the conqueror of world"
Overall it was nice attempt.
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Does anyone know what we were supposed to write in this?? i want to just to make sure.
It was a good topic to attempt.

I started with the central idea of the topic that how love can decrease the menace of war and hatred. Then i gave three examples
1- Prophet PBUH and Conquest of Makkah. He forgave all the enemies and won their hearts with love. Consequently most of the ppl embrace Islam and started respecting and following him.

2- France and Germany
3- India and Pakistan. Like when Indian Cricket team visited Pakistan the ppl received them with love and when in Common wealth games Pakistani delegation received a warm welcome , such acts decrease the hatred and sentiments of good will , friendship and love replace the enmity .
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Default voilence of war.....diluted with love..
FRIENDS THE TOPIC I HAD SELECTED FOR MY PRECIS NOTE WAS OF VIOLENCE, BUT STILL TO END OF LAST EXAM I WAS NOT CONFIRM IS THAT THE SIMPLE THAT IS REFLECTING OR IT HAS SOME HIDDEN MEANING.
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FRIENDS THE TOPIC I HAD SELECTED FOR MY PRECIS NOTE WAS OF VIOLENCE, BUT STILL TO END OF LAST EXAM I WAS NOT CONFIRM IS THAT THE SIMPLE THAT IS REFLECTING OR IT HAS SOME HIDDEN MEANING.
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I wrote as such

Love is a a human emotion that can do away with the evil of war. war is caused by a human emotion of hatred and aggression, and only the emotion of love can counter it.

First example was of arabia, where arab tribes had been in a constant war with each other. Holy Prophet(PBUH) taught the same people the message of love and brotherhood, and the same people went on to become united nation that rather than waging war against each other, ruled from spain to far east.

Seconly, european nations had been waging war against each other for long. Only once they decided to live with love and tranquility did they became an economic giant.

Hence, love is one such power that can help eradicate bad of war.
That is precisely what I wrote!
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Default violence of war can be diluted with love.... please have a look and comment
I did it as...
love begets love and smile engenders smile.
water moulds rocks and love melts the hearts...explaination
emotions can not be suppressed by tanks and bombs....
emotions understand the voice of love...
reference from Quran about Prophet(SAW)..the greatest revolution in history of mankind with love.
current situation of world and need for a change in policies of hatred and aggression..
reference of balochistan package and modified AFPak policy..
concluding remarks"the rules and language of love are universal and simple...they can end the wars forever"
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Default Violence of war can be diluted by love.
I started it as,
Love is the finest balm for the pangs of disappointment caused b violence.

Then I explained the above statement in a couple of paragraphs, supported the sentences by various logics, i.e, I answered the questions like How, Why ,etc.

My two examples included M.B. Qasim's conquest of Sindh, where the violence of war was defused by love, and that of conquest of Makkah and love shown afterwards by Mohammed(SAWS).

Finally, I finished it with a concluding paragraph.

Seniors plz suggest if i walked on the correct path. Waiting . . .
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