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Title:- Developments in Rural Society.
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"As a kind of foot-note I should comment that there are those who doubt whether it is within the power of science to ensure over a prolonged period freedom from destitution and famine for mankind. The argument -is the old one of Malthus, that in the race between increasing population and increasing production, population must eventually win. Those of us who decline to accept this pessimistic view recognize the difficulty of the practical problem of meeting the needs of an ever-expanding population. We have, however, greater faith in human resourcefulness. We note that it is not only in the technology of production and medicine that the present generation differs so greatly from the one before. A similar rapid change is likewise occurring the thinking of masses of people. This change is brought about partly by experience with technology by more widespread education. Here lies a new realm in which dramatic advance is being made. The hope for the longer future lies in a growing understanding of the
conditions for the good life of man in a world of science and technology, and the acceptance of a morality that is consistent with these conditions. With the widespread thought now being given to such problems by persons whose thinking is schooled to rely on reason and tested fact. It is
evident that advance from this angle will also appear. Youth may, for example, consider these remarks as an effort to see in truer perspective the type of ideals that are appropriate to the age of science. Many are those who are now sharing to this exploration of human values.
The great question is whether such understanding of human goals and the corresponding development of morals can be achieved before the forces seen by Malthus, and emphasized so forcefully by recent writers, overwhelm the efforts of the pioneers in this new and critical field. I do not believe that this is inevitable. Jam confident of man’s ability to meet and solve this ethical problem that is so vital to the success of his effort to achieve physical and spiritual freedom. It is relevant that as I analyse the reasons for my faith in man’s eventual ability to meet this critical problem. I find that prominent in my mind is the confidence that God who made us holds for us an increasing density, to be achieved through our own efforts in the world setting that he supplies. This observation is significant in the present setting because it is my strong impression
that most of those who have the firm faith in man’s advancement likewise have a religious basis for their faith. If this impression is valid its consequence is clear. It means that it is men and women of religious faith on whom we must primarily rely to work strongly toward achieving a
favorable world society. It means also that those of religious faith because of their faith have a better chance of survival, a fact that has a bearing on the attitude that may be expected in the society of the future".


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It is misconception that science proves itself as beneficial at all levels for humanity. The rapid increase in population has absorbed the power of production. Social Change and creative thinking has presented a new looks of generation ever before by exploring in the field of technology. The secret of better future for man lies in the hands of advance technology but it's vital to think that can man achieve the peaks of technology and oust problem of ever expending population. It seems impossible but as super creature his determinations are high to achieve solace both physical and spiritual. Reason behind man's ability to solve mammoth problems is his believe in God. It is the strongest argument as the reality shows that those who have achieved success they are religiously strong. It results in before advancement towards goals one should relies on ones faith for success. In other words those with belief can find a better way of existence for this world.

Title:- "Religion is at the back of Social Change"

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Will someone check my precis too?
this is of the very first paragraph

the gift of knowledge

Intellectual gifts are better in comparison to material gifts.Material gifts are short lived and make the person dependent. Intellectual bequeathings,in addition to inducing independence are lifelong. Also,to own a material object,one does not have to work hard and thus one never gets to realize its worth.However in case of knowledge one has to open one's mind in order to absorb it.This alters one's character in a way that could be helpful throughout one's life
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To enhance production developments in rural society is need of the hour. Comparing with urbanization, rural population is increasing but they lag in earning bread and butter. Brain drain could be seen from the past many decades but they were lesser in number who succeeded and this increased urban population. Urban residence attracts rural society to enhance the scale of business. Agricultural developments have increased the significance of rural society, added to this advanced infrastructure has facilitated rural areas with social changes. Reasons behind all these developments is to increase productivity by giving strength to rural individuals and keeping their traditions secured

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brother,(who wrote this precis) you need a good grip on basics of english. ive highlighted few mistakes i could point out. please dont take this as criticism
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The best aid to give is intellectual aid, a gift of useful knowledge. A gift of knowledge is infinitely preferable to a gift of material things. There are many reasons for this. Nothing becomes truly one’s own except on the basis of some genuine effort or sacrifice. A gift of material goods can be appropriated by the recipient without effort or sacrifice; it therefore rarely becomes his own and is all too frequently and easily treated as a mere windfall. A gift of intellectual goods, a gift of knowledge, is a very different matter. Without a genuine effort of appropriation on the part of the recipient there is no gift. To appropriate the gift and to make it one’s own is the same thing, and ‘neither moth nor rust doth corrupt’. The gift of material goods makes people dependent, but the gift of knowledge makes them free. The gift of knowledge also has far more lasting effects and is far more closely relevant to the concept of ‘development.’ Give a man a fish, as the saying goes, and you are helping him a little bit for a very short time, teach him the act of fishing, and he can help himself all his life. further, if you teach him to make his own fishing net, you have helped him to become not only self-supporting, but also self-reliant and independent, man and businessman. This, then should become the ever-increasing preoccupation of aid-programmes to make men self-reliant and independent by the generous supply of the appropriate intellectual gifts, gifts of relevant knowledge on the methods of self-help. This approach, incidentally, has also the advantage of being relatively cheap, of making money go a long way. For POUNDS 100/ - you may be able to equip one man with certain means of production, hut for the same money you may well be able to teach and hundred men to equip themselves. Perhaps a little ‘pumppriming’ by way of material goods will in some cases, be helpful to speed the process of development.(E. F. Schumacher)


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Title: Worth of intellectual gift
A material gift is acquired without toiling is less esteemed. An intellectual gift, on the other hand is acquired by rendering efforts and is highly valued. A material gift results in dependence and an intellectual gift makes one free from dependent fetters. As one cannot make a fisherman self-reliant until he is taught the act of fishing, one cannot become intellectual until he realizes the value of intellectual gift. More a man is given a gift of knowledge, more he is able to be self-reliant. The cost of intellectual gift is verily cheaper than the cost of material gift and which in turn makes more intellectual men if it is proposed. The worth of intellectual gift has long-lasting effects than that of material gift.
As far as your precise is concerned, its an impeccable. But, you cannot add examples in precise otherwise your precise in no-doubt perfect.
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As far as your precise is concerned, its an impeccable. But, you cannot add examples in precise otherwise your precise in no-doubt perfect.
We cannot add examples by ourselves, but we can repeat the passage example in our precis, no offence.
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That's a good effort, try to use phrases and make it to the point. You are doing extremely good job. Title is more or less less perfect but make your write up more concise. Rest, you have done it good.
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