@Adil Memon

i realy appreciate your support to rectify me.

I welcome even if you would be harsher than this because you have extended real support and your comments are guiding stars for me.

Even I cant express myself knowing that you are from PSP and empowered enough to apply any clause of PPC (Pakistan Penal Code) on me. :laugh: :laugh: :) :)


I have rectified the mistake as much i can.If still there reamins any flaw ,please mention it.

Harmful effects of adversity can be transformed into sweet results by developing a positive perspective and optimistic approach. The realities of life, its evil nature, and harsh truths can be felt only when one passes through the phase of adversity. It shakes us out of routine thinking and encourages introspection. It reveals one’s flaws and shortcomings. Once confronted with the failures, one can learn to tackle the odds.

The glorious wins of great people remind their persistent struggle in the wake of hardships. Sir Nelson Mandela spent 27 years in jail and emerged as a potent symbol of freedom and liberty. His struggle in the adverse conditions earned him honor and respect across the globe.

Quid e Azam Muhammad Ali Jinnah had to cross swords with the dominant Congress-British alliance during Pakistan Movement. They left no stone unturned to prevent him in materializing the dream of Pakistan. Nevertheless, all the conspiracies and black mailing tactics strengthened his commitment. He leveraged the adversities to the benefit of his cause and realized the Muslims of Subcontinent that only Muslim League can guard their rights.

Adverse situation offers the best opportunities to prove one’s mettle. Those who master the art of endurance under the worst circumstances, always win the laurels. Unfavorable condition always carries positive aspects, but under the veil. One should strive to unveil the positive sides and continue the journey instead of laying down the arms. In this way, adversity may prove a blessing in disguise.

hahaha, this was an amazing reply. honestly, this ppc idea never crossed my mind. you're really creative. and we must have some section of ppc to punish students who repeat mistakes. :)

after reading the reformed passage, i have realized that you were able to spot most of the mistakes and correct them. it's really impressive. there is trouble only when we have to explain the learner 'what' the mistake is and 'why'.

you have been given some reputation points for this. good job.

regards,
strict (not harsh) teacher :)

I opine that you should go ahead with the idea of implementing PPC on the forum. You must assume the charge of IG at forum. Although it will take considerable time in professional career to reach that "zenith of majesty" :haha :haha :haha
I am sure honourable forum is ready to provide you this oppurtunity in response to your extended support and you could enjoy that status so long before the time.

Here goes my new topic and would be eagerly waiting for your master comments.

[COLOR="blue"][B][SIZE="4"]Cowards dies many times before their death[/SIZE][/B][/COLOR]

Cowards are scared of death thus live in constant dread. Their heart sink over the thought of death and their imagination take them near to it. A terrible news or thought make them shudder. This fear governs their lives and crafts them to be the silent participant. They are unable to exercise God-gifted freedom and are compelled to compromise their desires and wants.

Cowards are unable to grow morally thus lack the courage to withstand the truth and justice. It is approved fact that one who lacks moral courage can never be straight forward so prefer to bend before the power. Cowards make no contribution to the society therefore, their existence is meaningless.

Life is trust of God and man is obliged to live it gloriously. Allah has bestowed man with uncountable blessings and ordered him to explore the universe to the best interest of mankind. The real beauty of life lies in its adventurous exploration however, cowards commit the breach of trust by keeping their capabilities dormant.

Death is an undeniable fact and every born has to taste it. It is therefore vain to pity oneself at the thought of death. Courage and Resolution may help a fine escape. Instead imagining oneself as the first causality in a riot one must have practical approach to deal with it. Real life does not lie in the longevity of body but it’s the spirit that keeps one alive for long. Those who encounter life bravely and face it eye to eye earn eternal name for them. There are few among millions who made their life eternal with their brevity. Muhammad bin Qasim, Tariq bin Ziyad and Rashid Minhas are such names that are still alive although many years have passed.

Here goes my next attempt..please comment
 

[B][COLOR="blue"]my last post remained un-cheked ,however i am posting the new one with the hope of being honored by the comments of worthy qualifiers ,especialy Brother Adil Memon and Sajid A Baloch[/COLOR][/B].


[B][COLOR="Red"][COLOR="Navy"][SIZE="4"]Capital is the fruit of labour[/SIZE][/COLOR][/COLOR][/B]
Theoretically economic activity is interplay of four factors of production namely capital, labour, land and organization. However this notion stands unjust and unfair being a deliberate attempt to belittle the importance of labour. Infact it is human labour that generate economic activity and produce capital while other factors just support it.

The emergence of capitalism has undermined the worth of labour, in order to patronize the capitalists. The concept of interest has inflated the value of capital. It has been portrayed as the prime factor in the business process. However this myth is instrumental to exploit the labour rights. They are forced to accept less proportionate reward in comparison to their role in capital generation. The corporate share holders get lion share in company profits on the expanse of workers reward. The capital providers without direct involvement reap the real benefits of business activity in form of dividend and capital accumulation.

Islamic economic and financial system duly recognizes the essentiality of labour and discourages the concept of capital accumulation and interest. Islam acknowledges the worth of labour to produce the real economic activity. In capitalist economy capital may be produced without happening of the real economic activity. This has caused uneven distribution of wealth in the society accompanied with other economic evils such as poverty. An economic system that duly recognizes the vitality of labour as a core element of economic activity during the reward distribution can lay down the foundation of a prosperous society.

saleeqa batool,

barring a couple of minor grammatical and usage mistakes, it was a fine attempt. i guess you'll be able to point out the mistakes if you read it and look up the dubious words again.

apart from that, i find you associating islam with the socialist philosophy which is the anti-thesis of capitalism. i don't think islam prohibits profit generation through private business or investment. and islam does not accept labour as the only factor of production. it does take into account the importance of capital in profit generation. it also has the sanction for worker-owner relationship. moreover, at some point the capitalist was also worker. the system of capitalism makes the most efficient use of resources and generates a lot of wealth.

i think the islamic system is somewhere in the middle of both systems.

regards,

@ dear saleeqa, as already sugested by fellows, you have tried well to write that paragraph/note and adil memon has very rightly adressed some problems. you need to follow those guidelines and try to practice a lot. simultanously you should read dawn newspaper regularly.

The child is father of the Man
 

here is my next attempt.Looking forward the kindness of all seniors especialy brother Adil Memon ,Sajid Balouch and TS Awan.


[B][COLOR="blue"][SIZE="3"]The Child is father of theMan[/SIZE][/COLOR][/B]


[COLOR="Purple"][B]A child of today is father of tomorrow. Infancy is origin of life .The process of acquaintance to world commences with the birth of a child .It start learning the basics of life such as fulfillment of biological needs, relationships, emotions, language, culture and religion. During the early years of life, a kid develops certain beliefs and thoughts that play an important role in its attitude during the rest of life thus a child is the one who build a man.

A glance at history reveals that early years played an important role in the life of great People. Hazrat Abdul Qadir Jillanai changed the life of a dacoit and converted him in to a pious man. He learned the ethical values of truth and honesty from his childhood that earned him a great place in the Muslim History. Muhammad bin Qasim started walking by holding the cradle of Horse. He mastered the warfare-arts in his childhood and proved himself a great and youngest general of his age. Napoleon Bona Part spent his childhood in a terrible building besieged with full storm and fury .It made him daring and he turned to be a great conqueror of the world. The pages of history are replete with innumerable such examples where the early age experience held a decisive effect in latter life.

Freud, a renowned psychologist, has said that first five years of life determines one’s attitude during next forty five years. This follows that Children must be provided with sufficient opportunities of education, recreation and character building for their personality development. Moral and ethical values should be inculcated to them. A child grown in a good environment will add an upright man to the society.[/B][/COLOR]