SENIORS R REQUESTED TO CHECK MY EXTNTION AND GIVE THEIR VALUEABLE SUGGESTIONS. [LEFT][/LEFT]STRUGGLE IS AS GOOD AS SUCCESS. FOR most people life is a difficult stuggle.it is a bed of throns rather being a bed of roses as most people associate a bed of roses with comfort.we go on stuggling for different aims.Many people struggle in improper,objectionable ways.for example there are dishonest traders who try to become rich through black marketing.these traders struggle in cheating others in different ways. there are other people who struggle in unsuitable ways,for noble cause,like those who earn money through corruption than spend a major part of it on building mosques,churchesor temples.still there are people who struggle for noble causes.leaders like quaid,social worker like abdul sattar edhi and so forth.we ought like struggle in positive ways for noble cause.those struggling in negative ways stand condemned even in their own eyes.we should go on strugglig success or no success. struggle is its own reward.

When you say struggle is as good as success, you are not going to demean it by referring to people who use unjust/corrupt methods. Here you will have to exalt the process of struggle. This you can do in many ways, like for instance.

1. Struggle is a new learning experience even if it leads to failure.
2. Only through persistent struggle can success be achieved.

Here Edison's example should work, wherein on some failure he commented that he had not failed, but had rather had discovered 10,000 methods that DO NOT work. This is a learning experience.

Also struggle here has nothing to do with life. All you have to do is focus on proving struggle equal to success. Remember, words are limited, focus on proving your point through valid logic, don't beat about the bush.

Plus you need to work on your English a bit.

Remember, exalt the process of struggle, do not demean it by referring to instances of corrupt nature.

Also, never use I or we in the essay or the expansion. Use more formal language.

Hi, I am sorry to say but I don't find any relavant argument to prove that "struggle is as good as success". You just explained who struggle what and why.Further, you didn't explain the meanings of the words 'struggle' and 'success' in the context.I think you really need to do the brain storming thing first. Take a piece of paper and write whatever comes into your mind for a couple of minutes. The condition is to stick to the topic. I hope the ideas would then be relavent.

In second line, u have written rather instead u should have written rather than. Keep on instead of go on, abnoxious is a good replacement of objectionable, we ought to instead of ought, struggling for success should have been used and struggle is reward in it,s own.
Further more, the words and sentences used are not concise and it could have been better.