variation is the only thing which makes life interesting and worth living. Life needs constant variation without it life becomes boring and stagnant. New innovations, technologies and knowledge are the ingrediants of variety. Experiancing new ideas and innovations broaden one's vision and increase efficiency. When a person will have new ideas. He will also make them part of his life and try to avail benefits from them.
For example a person want to bring some change in his life then the first of all he will adopt new fashion. People get bored of same trends in fashion and search for new trends in fashion. This attitude effects the designer's business that is why they always try to introduce new ideas regarding fashion to get the attention of people. Same case is with education sector. Till a school introduces new education trends, people dmit their childern in that school. When a new school opens with new education trends then people attract towards that school.
It is the common human behaviour that they always attract towards new things and these innovations emerge from exploring things. If people stop exploring the ideas then life will become stagnant and no thrill and excitment will remain in life.

Your style of writing esp. expressing your ideas is really admirable.But should work on your Grammar.You are making so many grammatical mistakes.Although they are minor, yet they can create problems and can put a negative effect on the mind of reader.So they must be mastered. Regards..

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Man is [a perpetual] Anguish !

1.When a person has new ideas, he will also make them part of his life and try to avail himself benefits of them.
2.wants
3.bored with, Fed up with
4.Affect (verb) effect (noun)
5.dmit (I think admit)

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Man is [a perpetual] Anguish !

very nice dear... keep it up .... to me there lies some minor mistakes, although i am not much qualified as my other brothers are. i am pin pointing some here if i am wrong plz let me know.. thanks


variation is the only thing which makes life interesting and worth living. Life needs constant variation, without it life becomes boring and stagnant. New innovations, technologies and knowledge are the ingrediants of variety. Experiancing new ideas and innovations broaden one's vision and increase efficiency. When a person will have new ideas,(not a fullstop) He will also make them a part of his life and try to avail himself of the benefits from them.
For example a person want to bring some change in his life then the first thing (omit of all or remove then with and ) he will do, is adopt new fashion. People get bored of same trends in fashion and search for new trends in fashion. This attitude affects (effects) the designer's business that is why (they) if u want to use they then use designers not designer's always try to introduce new ideas regarding fashion to get the attention of people.same is the case with the education sector (Same case is with education sector.) Till a school introduces new education system(not trends), people admit ( writing mistake dmit) their childern in that school. When a new school opens with new education system(trends) then the (u are referring to the people)people get attracted towards that school.
It is the common human behaviour that they always get attracted towards new things and these innovations (use sprout, it looks attractive ) (emerge) from exploring things. If people stop exploring the ideas then life will become stagnant and no thrill and excitment will remain in life.

sorry spelling mistakes are typing mistakes. And thanks for suggesting me new verb in lieu to previous one. I think first me himself nai aey ga.

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Variation is the only thing which makes life interesting and worth living. Life needs constant alteration without it life would become boring and stagnant. New innovations, technologies and knowledge are the ingrediants of variety. Experiancing new ideas and innovations broaden one's vision and increase his/her efficiency. When a person will have new ideas. He will also make them part of his life and try to avail benefits from them.

For example a person who wants to bring some change in his life then the first of all he will adopt new fashion. People often get bored with the same style of dressing and therefore they quickly move into new trends and fashions. This attitude effects the designers’ business steer them to introduce new ideas regarding fashion to draw the attention of people. The same case is with education sector. Till a school introduces new education system, people admit their children in that school. When a new school opens with new education system then people attract towards that school.

It is the common human behavior that they are always drown towards new things and these innovations emerge from exploring things. If people stop exploring the ideas, life will become stagnant and no thrill and excitment will remain in life.






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We always see the point of an iceberg. I’ve always accepted the idea that people don’t necessarily know everything I am