[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;458832]@ zuhaib and usman ,

thanx a lot for pointing out my mistakes .There are synatax and grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences which should be cared now.And ,surely i will do it . I published my expansion without revision and now I have seen numerous mistakes . Well , I am obliged and thankful . So , will write an other one hoping it will present a clear picture .IA,...


Ra Hamat Ul Alameen 'is a title ,no doubt conferred by Allah.but there is a reason of it.Our beloved prophet(S.A.W) faced all the mis deeds of coffers and never decided to avange .and this quality of good attitude is heroic .That's why i have said like that.


@last para
i want to say ''life plays a crucial rule in the making of a hero ,implying he has to face more above then average person ''[/QUOTE]

Right! But you better rephrase that particular sentence involving 'Rahmatal lil aalameen' because its meaning sound confusing. Note the correct spellings of [B]'Rahmatal lil aalameen'[/B]

The phrase 'hard done by' doesn't seem suitable here. Its meaning is: 'to feel that you have been treated unfairly'. I think its better you rephrase this sentence.

[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;458832]@ zuhaib and usman , [COLOR="Magenta"][/COLOR]

thanx a lot for pointing out my mistakes .There are synatax and grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences which should be cared now.And ,surely i will do it . I published my expansion without revision and now I have seen numerous mistakes . Well , I am obliged and thankful . So , will write an other one hoping it will present a clear picture .IA,...


Ra Hamat Ul Alameen 'is a title ,no doubt conferred by Allah.but there is a reason of it.Our beloved prophet(S.A.W) faced all the mis deeds of coffers and never decided to avange .and this quality of good attitude is heroic .That's why i have said like that.


@last para
i want to say ''life plays a crucial rule in the making of a hero ,implying he has to face more above then average person ''[/QUOTE]

Thanks. :) I am waiting for next one.

Dear, Usman Khalid.

The very two sentences are interconnected.
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The one who aims high, gets destined heaven. It seems as if life has choosen them in order to examine what they can do .[/COLOR]

The subjects should be either in singular or plural.

First sentences carries singular subject and 2nd one plural. So, it creates confusion.

Speech is the gift of all, but thought of few,,,
 

[B][COLOR="Magenta"]Speech is the gift of all, but thought of few[/COLOR]


Barring people who are deaf and dumb, human beings have been blessed with the gift of speech. But while almost every body talks; few people take the trouble of thinking. Talking comes naturally to human beings but thinking requires mental exertion. Every body gifted with reason, but very few persons make use of this faculty. Man is a rational animal, but all man do not benefit by the rational faculty. Thinking is indeed, foreign to most people. The result is that words are spoken, decision is taken, and action is performed by people without any pervious thinking. The want of thinking in most such cases leads to unpleasant and even disastrous consequences. If an individual says or does something thoughtlessly, he may pay heavily for it.

If a politician makes a speech without giving due thought to what he says, he may cause a tumult, an agitation, and even a riot. Politicians are indeed the worst sinners in this respect. They have the gift of the gab but little capacity for thinking. They often blurt out words without realizing the implications of what they are saying. They are reckless in speech they are copious in speech; they are glib-tongued: but they are deficient in thinking power.

If a mob is excited or inflamed, it will not pause to think. It will merely shout slogans and make a lot of noise. Cool thinking is essential part of a wise man’s mental equipment. Indeed, a wise man speaks less and thinks more. And whatever he speaks is the result of his thinking. But wise men are in minority in this world. The world is inhabited largely by talkative people who consider thinking to be hard thing and who, therefore, prefer talking to thinking …
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[B][COLOR="Navy"]seniors check it and point out my mistakes [/COLOR][/B]

[SIZE="3"][COLOR="Magenta"][FONT="Arial Black"]Hope is way of life

life is ground of difficulties and defeats _garden of blessings and beauties. One falls and stands again, the source which makes one stand is HOPE. Ant falls dozens of times while climbing up the wall, but after every fall, hope makes it go upward. Hope is the essence of life. It sustains the existence. Where every thing is lost there hope dwells. On every step of life's stairs there is a carpet of hope and hope is way of life.

Philistine, Kashmir and Iraq _people of these countries are living in the valley of deaths but there is a hope in everyone's heart which makes them strike for peace and freedom. They live in tortures, tragedies, tensions and torments but sun of hope rises over them and gives strength to fight. Surely, where there is no way hope makes outlet there.

If we peep into history; we find, those were the heroes who had hope. They did all with hope; even after each mishap and misfortune , they won. As Gandhi said, "“First they will ignore you, then they will laugh at you, then they will fight you and then you will win.” The great scientist, Thomas Edison, stood insurmountable to make Electric Bulb. He tried for thousands times. And, he did it . He fought, struggled and did what he wanted. It is all because Hope shouldered him in all hurdles and pessimistic ideas .

Allah says “Hopelessness is infidelity.” Surely, without hope life becomes no more and worthless. Hope is single way which changes one's world. Disappointment is not way of life but its step unto absurdity. One must be optimist and live with power of hope.

By;

Xuhaib Ahmed pirzada the traveler….
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[B][COLOR="DarkRed"]My Dears, Check it critically.[/COLOR][/B]

[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;459152][SIZE="3"][COLOR="Magenta"][FONT="Arial Black"]Hope is way of life

life is ground of difficulties and defeats _garden of blessings and beauties. One falls and stands again, the source which makes one stand is HOPE. Ant falls dozens of times while climbing up the wall, but after every fall, hope makes it go upward. Hope is the essence of life. It sustains the existence. Where every thing is lost there hope dwells. On every step of life's stairs there is a carpet of hope and hope is way of life.

Philistine, Kashmir and Iraq _people of these countries are living in the valley of deaths but there is a hope in everyone's heart which makes them strike for peace and freedom. They live in tortures, tragedies, tensions and torments but sun of hope rises over them and gives strength to fight. Surely, where there is no way hope makes outlet there.

If we peep into history; we find, those were the heroes who had hope. They did all with hope; even after each mishap and misfortune , they won. As Gandhi said, "“First they will ignore you, then they will laugh at you, then they will fight you and then you will win.” The great scientist, Thomas Edison, stood insurmountable to make Electric Bulb. He tried for thousands times. And, he did it . He fought, struggled and did what he wanted. It is all because Hope shouldered him in all hurdles and pessimistic ideas .

Allah says “Hopelessness is infidelity.” Surely, without hope life becomes no more and worthless. Hope is single way which changes one's world. Disappointment is not way of life but its step unto absurdity. One must be optimist and live with power of hope.

By;

Xuhaib Ahmed pirzada the traveler….
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[B][COLOR="DarkRed"]My Dears, Check it critically.[/COLOR][/B][/QUOTE]

other seniors can check that deeply but i want you to replace absurdity with obscurity, thats relevant and polite..b/w nice use of gandhi's quote...:49:

[B][FONT="Arial Black"][COLOR="DarkGreen"]THE WINDS ARE ALWAYS ON THE SIDE OF ABLEST NAVIGATOR:[/COLOR][/FONT][/B]
[B][SIZE="4"]It is wisely quoted by EDWAR GIBBON that “The winds are always on the side of ablest navigator.It unveils the universal truth that man is the architect of his own destiny.It is pure determination and contented toil,which leads him to the culmination of success with flying colours.It is the deligent hardwork,which makes the man second to none.
Life is an integral part of one’s luck. “The harder I work the more luck I seem to have.” This quote depicts that luck or destiny is not something static,It keeps on changing with one’s strives.If we have a glance in the history,then it will be crystal clear to us that only those people names are written with golden words ,who had always sticked to their constant strives and only those were able to pull the winds on their sides.Quaid-e-Azam ,who strived for his nation and was with them through every thick and thin,which resulted in the freedom of a separate nation as Pakistan.
Mughal Empire,which lasted for more than thousand years was the result of many deligent emperors.Thomas Elva Edison, who lighted the whole world with his noble invention,did not sat idle but instead it was his true faith and contented toil which made him to be a navigator who had been able to pull the winds at the ablest side.
By sitting idle and lethargy,we can only jeopardize ourselves.The experiences and examples of the world history proves that the winds and waves are always at the side of ablest navigator.[/SIZE][/B]

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[FONT="Arial Black"][B][U] KNOWLEDGE IS POWER :[/U][/B][/FONT][/COLOR]
[FONT="Arial"][B][SIZE="3"]It is wisely stated that knowledge is power. It is the knowledge which distinguishes human from the animal. By dent of knowledge man had proved to be the most powerful creature of the present world.It is ostensible that knowledge is the ultimate power but unfortunately,we have not yet been able to utilize the power of knowledge in true a manner.It is implicit that knowledge had provided us ineffable inventions that eases our lives but we must not also forget the deadliest wars.America the super power claims to be the most civilized country with the power knowledge but he had attacked Hiroshima-Nagasaki with the most destructive weapon,the atom bomb which devastated the lives of the innocents.
If we use our knowledge wisely then it will be the greatest power in a true sense.It is the knowledge which has enabled the man to step on the moon and travel the distant places with no time.The primitive knowledge has enabled to know about our ancestors and make our today’s generation better.
The last Prophet of Islam ,Muhammad(P.B.U.H) made the ignorant people to come along the true path of Islam with the power of His knowledge and made half of the world to embrace Islam.Many centuries had passed but His followers are still present,this is only because of the power of knowledge.
Death may cease the life but the everlasting knowledge remains forever by influencing the people from time to time,because knowledge is the only power that is not destructible.[/SIZE][/B][/FONT]

[B][FONT="Arial Black"][COLOR="Green"] Religion is the greatest benefactor of human race:[/COLOR][/FONT][/B]

[B][FONT="Arial Black"][SIZE="5"]
[FONT="Arial"][SIZE="4"]It is wisely said that religion is the greatest benefactor of human race.Human psychology has compelled themselves to be guided by others.So religion can be used as a true mean of guidance .There are many religions existing in the present world for making it a better place for living.Every religion may have different perspective but they meet at the same point which is for the benefit of human race.
If we come along the true path of islam,it gives the complete code of life which is based not on fallible and limited human intellect but on the guidance of the omnipotent.These codes of conduct break in the political,social,economical matters concerning man. His public and personal life ,which could be proved as the greatest benefactor for human race. Religion has made them fully stable.
Lets say, The religion Islam has left behind the HOLY QURAN, as a true sense of guidance, in which every aspect of human lives has been elaborated.If we come along with religion with full determination,so it has and is the greatest benefactor of human race.[/SIZE][/FONT][/SIZE][/FONT][/B]

[QUOTE=alihashmatkhoso;459029][B][COLOR="Magenta"]Speech is the gift of all, but thought of few[/COLOR]


[COLOR="Magenta"]Barring people who are deaf and dumb, human beings have been blessed with the gift of speech.[/COLOR] [B](Either this sentence makes no sense or I can't understand, having tried a lot.)[/B] [COLOR="Magenta"]But while almost [/COLOR] [B](Same for this)[/B] every body talks; [COLOR="Magenta"]few[/COLOR] [B](A FEW or FEW)[/B]people take the trouble of thinking. Talking comes naturally to human beings but thinking requires mental exertion. Every body [B]IS[/B] gifted with reason, but very few persons make use of this faculty. Man is a rational animal, but all man [COLOR="Magenta"]do not[/COLOR] [B](DOES NOT)[/B]benefit by the rational faculty. Thinking is indeed, foreign to [COLOR="Magenta"]most[/COLOR] [B](??)[/B] people. [COLOR="Magenta"]The result is that[/COLOR] [B](kiss ka result)[/B] words are spoken, decision is taken, and action is performed by people without any[COLOR="Magenta"]previous[/COLOR] [B](What does it mean here)[/B] thinking. The want of thinking in [COLOR="Magenta"]most such [/COLOR] [B](??)[/B] cases leads to unpleasant and even disastrous consequences. If an individual says or does something thoughtlessly, he may pay heavily for it.

If a politician makes a speech without giving due thought to what he says, he may cause a tumult, an agitation, and even a riot. Politicians are indeed the worst [COLOR="Magenta"]sinners[/COLOR] (Which sin do they commit) in this respect. They have the gift of the gab but little capacity for thinking. They often blurt out words without realizing the implications of what they are saying. [COLOR="Magenta"]They are reckless in speech they are copious in speech; they are glib-tongued: but they are deficient in thinking power.[/COLOR] [B](Avoid repetition. Simply write it, like; They are reckless, copious and glib-tongued in speech but deficient in thinking power.)[/B]

If a mob is excited or inflamed, it will not pause to think. It will merely shout slogans and make a lot of noise. Cool thinking is essential part of a wise man’s mental equipment. Indeed, a wise man speaks less and thinks more. And whatever he speaks is the result of his thinking. But wise men are in minority in this world. The world is inhabited largely by talkative people who consider thinking to be hard thing and who, therefore, prefer talking to thinking …
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[B][COLOR="Navy"]seniors check it and point out my mistakes [/COLOR][/B][/QUOTE]

Good efforts. Dear, try to use correct sentence structure. Many of your sentences, I couldn't comprehend easily not because of language but expressions and sentences structure.
Try to follow unity and brevity. Further, Usman Khalid can tell you well.

Overall, good.

[QUOTE=~BraveHeart~;459200][COLOR="Green"]
[FONT="Arial Black"][B][U] KNOWLEDGE IS POWER :[/U][/B][/FONT][/COLOR]
[FONT="Arial"][B][SIZE="3"]It is wisely stated that knowledge is power. It is the knowledge which distinguishes human from the animal. By dent of knowledge man [B][COLOR="Magenta"]had[/COLOR][/B] (HAS) proved to be the most powerful creature of the present world.It is ostensible that knowledge is the ultimate power but unfortunately,we have not yet been able to utilize the power of knowledge in [COLOR="Magenta"]true a manner[/COLOR] [B]IN A TRUE MANNER)[/B].It is implicit that knowledge [COLOR="Magenta"]had[/COLOR] [B]HAS)[/B] provided us ineffable inventions that [B][COLOR="Magenta"]eases[/COLOR] [/B][B] EASE)[/B] our lives but we must not also forget the deadliest wars.America the super power claims to be the most civilized country with the power [B]OF[/B] knowledge but [COLOR="Magenta"]he[/COLOR] [B]SHE)[/B] had attacked Hiroshima-Nagasaki with the most destructive weapon,the atom bomb which devastated the lives of the innocents.
If we use our knowledge wisely then it will be the greatest power in a true sense.It is the knowledge which has enabled the man to step on the moon and travel the distant places with no time.The primitive knowledge has enabled to know about our ancestors and make our today’s generation better.
The last Prophet of Islam ,Muhammad(P.B.U.H) made the ignorant people to come along the true path of Islam with the power of His knowledge and made half of the world to embrace Islam.Many centuries [B][COLOR="Magenta"]had[/COLOR][/B] [B]ARE)[/B] passed but His followers are still present,this is only because of the power of knowledge.
Death may cease the life but the everlasting knowledge remains forever by influencing the people from time to time,because knowledge is the only power that is not destructible.[/SIZE][/B][/FONT][/QUOTE]

[COLOR="DarkRed"][B]Good one. Try to write precisely and with unity. You could do better. Overall quite well. Keep it up:)[/B][/COLOR]

[QUOTE=~BraveHeart~;459197][B][FONT="Arial Black"][COLOR="DarkGreen"]THE WINDS ARE ALWAYS ON THE SIDE OF ABLEST NAVIGATOR:[/COLOR][/FONT][/B]
[B][SIZE="4"]It is wisely quoted by EDWAR GIBBON that “The winds are always on the side of ablest navigator.It unveils the universal truth that man is the architect of his own destiny.It is pure determination and contented toil,which leads him to the culmination of success with flying colours.It is the deligent hardwork,which makes the man second to none.
Life is an integral part of one’s luck. “The harder I work the more luck I seem to have.” This quote depicts that luck or destiny is not something static,It keeps on changing with one’s strives.[COLOR="Magenta"]If we have a glance in the history,then it will be crystal clear to us that only those people names are written with golden words ,who had always sticked to their constant strives and only those were able to pull the winds on their sides.[/COLOR] [B](Try to write simple sentences precily, avoid complex sentences.)[/B]Quaid-e-Azam ,who [COLOR="Magenta"]strived[/COLOR] [B](Past simple is STROVE)[/B] for his nation and was with them through every thick and thin,which resulted in the freedom of a separate nation as Pakistan.
Mughal Empire,which lasted for more than [B][COLOR="Magenta"]thousand years [/COLOR][/B] [B](ITNA BERHA JHOT it didn't last more than 400 years.)[/B] was the result of many deligent emperors.Thomas Elva Edison, who lighted the whole world with his noble invention,did not [B][COLOR="Magenta"]sat[/COLOR][/B] [B]SIT[/B] idle but instead it was his true faith and contented toil which made him to be a navigator who had been able to pull the winds at the ablest side.
By sitting idle and lethargy,we can only jeopardize ourselves.The experiences and examples of the world history [COLOR="Magenta"]proves[/COLOR] [B]PROVE[/B] that the winds and waves are always at the side of ablest navigator.[/SIZE][/B][/QUOTE]

[B]Good one. You have done well. But, learn to use tenses correctly. [/B]

Dear, Braveheart.
One more thing to be noted. Your very sentence;
[B]It keeps on changing with one’s strives.[/B]

Strive is a [B]verb[/B] only. You can't use it as a noun. Do tell me if I am wrong.

And,

Quaid-e-Azam ,who strived (Past simple is STROVE) for his nation and was [B]with them[/B] through every thick and thin,which resulted in the freedom of a separate nation as Pakistan.

You better rearrange it too.

Thanks

1. The Bough that bears most bend most''

Life should be ordained on the principle of ,''moderation''.Excessive of every thing is bad leading the way towards choas.Often ,it is said humbleness fruits creating peace among societies and clans.But ,prolonged inhumane attitude and brutality originate sense of deprivation.This phenomenal act of tolerance first lead towards bending in order to rise against oppressant .so the bough that bends most often break .


We have witnessed changes through the course of history ;evolution and revolution.The most abrupt ,bloodiest changes were revolutions.people were massacred ,fired ,bombed in Iranian revolution like wise in the Age of Renaissance.we have also observed the most recent Islamic revolution in Muslim countries that underwent cold blooded murders and genocides .These violent attitudes have been sprung because every action has a reaction.

The Tyrants have their self -interests and lust ;that governed their attitudes and direct them to gain by whatever means ,right or wrong .so their ambitions direct them to oppress people .some of the people knee down to what ever they ask and demand .but a few people rise against these cruelities.These lead towards a conflict leading a society towards chaos.

In general , bending never give fruit because its ultimate ending is violence.so societies ,families and clan are in conflict with each other . These conflicts result in violence .

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Do write on it.

Action Speaks Louder Than Words.[/COLOR][/B][/CENTER][/SIZE]

[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;459416]1. The Bough that bears most bend most''

Life should be ordained on the principle of ,''moderation''.[COLOR="Magenta"]Excessive [/COLOR] [B](Excess)[/B] of every thing is bad leading the way towards chaos.Often ,it is said [COLOR="Magenta"]humbleness fruits creating [/COLOR] [B](???)[/B] peace among societies and clans.But ,prolonged inhumane attitude and brutality originate sense of deprivation.This phenomenal act of tolerance first lead towards bending in order to rise against [COLOR="Magenta"]oppressant[/COLOR] [B][COLOR="Black"]Oppressor?[/COLOR][/B] .so the bough that bends most often [COLOR="Magenta"]break[/COLOR] [COLOR="Black"]BREAKS[/COLOR].


We have witnessed changes through the course of history ;evolution and revolution.The most abrupt ,bloodiest changes were [B]OF[/B] revolutions.[B]P[/B]eople were massacred ,fired ,bombed in Iranian revolution like wise in the Age of Renaissance.we have also observed the most recent Islamic revolution in Muslim countries that underwent cold blooded murders and genocides .These violent attitudes have been sprung because every action has a reaction.

The Tyrants have their self -interests and lust ;that governed their attitudes and [B]directed[/B] them to gain by whatever means ,right or wrong .so their ambitions direct them to oppress people. [B]S[/B]ome of the people knee down to what ever they ask and demand .but a few people rise against these cruelities.These lead towards a conflict leading a society towards chaos.

In general , bending never [COLOR="Magenta"]give[/COLOR] [B]GIVES)[/B] fruit because its ultimate ending is violence.[B]S[/B]o societies ,families and clan are in conflict with each other . These conflicts result in violence .[/QUOTE]

Quite well, done. Some grammatical mistakes are coloured and written in bold.
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The Tyrants have their self -interests and lust ;that [B]governed[/B] their attitudes and direct them to gain by whatever means ,right or wrong .so their ambitions direct them to oppress people .some of the people knee down to what ever they ask and demand .but a few people rise against these cruelities.These lead towards a conflict leading a society towards chaos.[/COLOR]

Write this Para Either in Past or Present. It creates confusion.

You could have done better.
[B]
Overall Well Done.[/B]

Cut Your Coat according to your Cloth''[U][/U]


Contentment is an Islamic junction prescribed to Muslim Ummah for multi-purpose benifits .This implies that one should have to remain in between the limits of profligacy and hoarding.when a person keeps his expenditure according to his income ,he remains satisfied .The materialism provokes among masses lust to buy above then their purchasing power .This situation has caused lending on the basis of interest , that in turn has created in-debted society.That's why Islam has taught us moderation ,the key element spending a prosperous life.


The rule of moderation is applicable in all the institutions of government; family,politics,economy and religion. It forbids extremes in a particular system.And it also applies to the individual of society.one should have closer ties with neighbours but never give away secrets to them .


Hazrat Ali (R.A) had taught to his subjects that one should restrained between these two extremes . He ( R.A) remained contented through out his life and never aimed to get more and more wealth or power . Infact ,greed ,lust are theirselves evils but lead towards other sins like murder ,forcination and devastation of community .That's why ambition is considered a moral sin.

"The Tragical History of Dr.Faustus'', by Christopher Marlowe lights on this paricular theme. The hero of that play had wanted unlimited power and wealth and stood against Might .And negated the power of Might and made fun of Holy scriptures .In the end ,he had to face disappointment which hindered him to ask for forgiveness.And the state of hopelessness destined hell for him .

"Till swollen with the cunning of self- conceit,
His waxen wings could not mount above his reach,
And melting heavens conspired his over throw.
"
The theme of greed ,ambition and lust have lessons for us .These characters in man creates hoplessness and extremes.And man becomes insane for his ambition.He tries to get all the things by wrong means .so contentment is blessing in guise which creates humane attitude in man.

Suggested corrections have been coloured.

[QUOTE=alihashmatkhoso;459029][B][COLOR="Magenta"]Speech is the gift of all, but thought of few[/COLOR]


Barring people who are deaf and dumb, human beings have been blessed with the gift of speech. But while almost every body talks; few people take the trouble of thinking. Talking comes naturally to human beings but thinking requires mental exertion. Every body gifted with reason, but very few persons make use of this faculty. Man is a rational animal, but all [COLOR="Magenta"]men do not get benefit of [/COLOR]the rational faculty. Thinking is indeed, foreign to most people. The result is that words are spoken, decision is taken, and action is performed by people without any pervious thinking. The want of thinking in most such cases leads to unpleasant and even disastrous consequences. If an individual says or does something thoughtlessly, he may pay heavily for it.

If a politician makes a speech without giving due thought to what he says, he may cause a tumult, an agitation, and even a riot. Politicians are indeed the worst sinners in this respect. They have the gift of the gab but little capacity for thinking. They often blurt out words without realizing the implications of what they are saying. They are reckless in [COLOR="Magenta"]speech. They[/COLOR] are copious in speech; they are glib-tongued: but they are deficient in thinking power.

If a mob is excited or inflamed, it will not pause to think. It will merely shout slogans and make a lot of noise. Cool thinking is essential part of a wise man’s mental equipment. Indeed, a wise man speaks less and thinks more. And whatever he speaks is the result of his thinking. But wise men are in minority in this world. The world is inhabited largely by talkative people who consider thinking to be hard thing and who, therefore, prefer talking to thinking …
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[B][COLOR="Navy"]seniors check it and point out my mistakes [/COLOR][/B][/QUOTE]

Well done :)

Suggested corrections have been coloured.

[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;459152][SIZE="3"][FONT="Arial Black"]Hope is way of life

[COLOR="Magenta"]Life[/COLOR] is ground of difficulties and defeats_garden of blessings and beauties. One falls and stands again, the source which makes one stand is HOPE. Ant falls dozens of times while climbing up the wall, but after every fall, hope makes it go upward. Hope is the essence of life. It sustains the existence. Where every thing is lost there [COLOR="Magenta"]dwells hope[/COLOR]. On every step of life's[COLOR="Magenta"] stairs, [/COLOR]there is a carpet of hope and hope is way of life.

Philistine, Kashmir and Iraq _people of these countries are living in the valley of deaths but there is a hope in everyone's heart which makes them strike for peace and freedom. They live in tortures, tragedies, tensions and torments but sun of hope rises over them and gives strength to fight. Surely, where there is no way hope makes outlet there.

If we peep into [COLOR="Magenta"]history, we find that those who had hope were heroes.[/COLOR]. They did all with hope, even after each mishap and misfortune, they won. As Gandhi said, "First they will ignore you, then they will laugh at you, then they will fight you and then you will win.” The great scientist, Thomas Edison, stood insurmountable to make Electric Bulb. He tried for [COLOR="Magenta"]thousand times and, he did it[/COLOR] . He fought, struggled and did what he wanted. It is all because Hope shouldered him in all hurdles and pessimistic ideas .

Allah says “Hopelessness is infidelity.” Surely, without hope life becomes [COLOR="Magenta"]no more[/COLOR] (Is 'no more' any adjective? I don't think it properly fits here) and worthless. Hope is single way which changes one's world. Disappointment is not way of life but its step unto absurdity. One must be optimist and live with power of hope.

By;

Xuhaib Ahmed pirzada the traveler….
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[B][COLOR="DarkRed"]My Dears, Check it critically.[/COLOR][/B][/QUOTE]

Qutoe sayings of Holy Quran and Hadis before any other reference.

Overall very well done :)

[QUOTE=usman khalid;459683]Suggested corrections have been coloured.



Qutoe sayings of Holy Quran and Hadis before any other reference.

Overall very well done :)[/QUOTE]

[B]Thanks, Dear. Yes, NO MORE is an adjective. And, Is HOPE DWELLS wrong? [/B]

[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;459710][B]Thanks, Dear. Yes, NO MORE is an adjective. And, Is HOPE DWELLS wrong? [/B][/QUOTE]

Are you sure? Isn't it an adverb? In my opinion, 'no more' should be followed by some other word. 'No more' means 'no longer'. Now 'life becomes no more' doesn't making much sense. It may be like: 'Life becomes no more attractive'

'There hope dwells' is right but 'There dwells hope' is a better expression. Follow the link below to observe the use of this expression .

Suggested corrections have been coloured:

[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;459416]1. The Bough that bears most bend most''

Life should be ordained on the principle of ,''moderation''.[COLOR="Magenta"]Excess [/COLOR]of every thing is bad leading the way towards [COLOR="Magenta"]chaos[/COLOR]. [COLOR="Magenta"]Often, it is said that humbleness fruits creating peace among societies and clans[/COLOR]. (Meaning is not clear) [COLOR="Magenta"]But prolonged[/COLOR] (Don't use commas unnecessarily after 'But') inhumane attitude and brutality originate sense of deprivation.This phenomenal act of tolerance first [COLOR="Magenta"]leads[/COLOR] towards bending in order to rise against [COLOR="Magenta"]oppression.[/COLOR] [COLOR="Magenta"]So the bough that bends most often breaks.[/COLOR] (Take care of tenses. In present indefinite tense, third person takes s/es after verb)

We have witnessed changes through the course of history ;evolution and revolution.The most abrupt ,bloodiest changes were revolutions. [COLOR="Magenta"]People[/COLOR] were massacred ,fired ,bombed in Iranian revolution like wise in the Age of Renaissance. [COLOR="Magenta"]We[/COLOR] have also observed the most recent Islamic revolution in Muslim countries that underwent cold blooded murders and genocides .These violent attitudes have been sprung because every action has a reaction.

The Tyrants have their self -interests and [COLOR="Magenta"]lust that govern[/COLOR] their attitudes and [COLOR="Magenta"]direct[/COLOR] them to gain by whatever means, right or wrong. (Don't use different tenses for same idea. If 'direct' is in present, 'govern' should be used instead of 'governed')[COLOR="Magenta"] So[/COLOR] their ambitions direct them to oppress people. [COLOR="Magenta"]Some [/COLOR]of the people knee down to what ever they ask and demand. [COLOR="Magenta"]But[/COLOR] a few people rise against these [COLOR="Magenta"]cruelties[/COLOR].These lead towards a conflict leading a society towards chaos.

In general , bending never [COLOR="Magenta"]gives[/COLOR] fruit because its ultimate ending is violence. So societies ,families and clan are in conflict with each other . These conflicts result in violence .[/QUOTE]

Good work :)

[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;459710][B]Thanks, Dear. Yes, NO MORE is an adjective. And, Is HOPE DWELLS wrong? [/B][/QUOTE]

I forgot to mention the link for showing the use of 'There dwells hope' in my earlier post. Here it is:

[url]http://www.miamiproject.miami.edu/document.doc?id=249[/url]

Suggested corrections have been coloured.

[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;459637]Cut Your Coat according to your Cloth''[U][/U]


Contentment is an Islamic junction prescribed to Muslim Ummah for multi-purpose benifits .This implies that one [COLOR="Magenta"]should remain[/COLOR] in between the limits of profligacy and hoarding. ('Should have to' is not a correct expression/tense) when a person keeps his expenditure according to his income ,he remains satisfied .The materialism provokes among masses lust to buy above [COLOR="Magenta"]than[/COLOR] their purchasing power .This situation has caused lending on the basis of interest , that in turn has created in-debted society.That's why Islam has taught us moderation ,the key element spending a prosperous life.


The rule of moderation is applicable in all the institutions of government; family,politics,economy and religion. It forbids extremes in a particular system.And it also applies to the individual of society.one should have closer ties with neighbours but never give away secrets to them .


Hazrat Ali (R.A[COLOR="Magenta"]) taught[/COLOR] to his subjects that one should [COLOR="Magenta"]be restrained[/COLOR] between these two extremes . He ( R.A) remained contented [COLOR="Magenta"]throughout[/COLOR] his life and never aimed to get more and more wealth or power . [COLOR="Magenta"]Infact greed and lust[/COLOR] are [COLOR="Magenta"]themselves[/COLOR] evils but lead towards other sins like murder , [COLOR="Magenta"]fornication[/COLOR] and devastation of community .That's why ambition is considered a moral sin.

"The Tragical History of Dr.Faustus'', by Christopher Marlowe lights on this paricular theme. The hero of that [COLOR="Magenta"]play wanted[/COLOR] unlimited power and wealth and stood against Might. [COLOR="Magenta"]He negated [/COLOR]the power of Might and made fun of Holy scriptures .In the end ,he had to face disappointment which hindered him to ask for forgiveness.And the state of hopelessness destined hell for him .

"Till swollen with the cunning of self- conceit,
His waxen wings could not mount above his reach,
And melting heavens conspired his over throw.
"
The theme of greed ,ambition and lust have lessons for us .These characters in man creates [COLOR="Magenta"]hopelessness[/COLOR] and extremes. Man becomes insane for his ambition.He tries to get all the things by wrong means .[COLOR="Magenta"]So[/COLOR] contentment is blessing in guise which creates humane attitude in man.[/QUOTE]

[B]Some Suggestions:[/B]

Use past indefinite tense to describe/mention past events.
Take care of spellings.
Don't use 'And' frequently in beginning of a new sentence. You may either combine the next sentence with previous one and thus converting two sentences into one sentence or make a separate second sentence by using 'Also' in place of 'And'.
For example, here are two lines from your expansion:

These characters in man creates hopelessness and extremes.And man becomes insane for his ambition.

You can write it in one sentence as:
These characters in man creates hopelessness and extremes and man becomes insane for his ambition.

Or you can write it in two sentences as:
These characters in man creates hopelessness and extremes. Also man becomes insane for his ambition.

Hope you get my point.

Overall very well written. :)
Try avoiding repeated mistakes of grammar/tenses/sentence structure.

[COLOR="Magenta"][B][SIZE="4"][FONT="Century Gothic"]Make hay while sun shines.

Every work suits at accurate time. One should hit the iron when it is hot. In Pakistan, Farmer sows seeds of wheat in the month of November and harvests in the Month of June or March. Every crop has its particular season. So, every work has its particular time. If one hastes or delays, he loses the chance and time. Once, time is lost, it never comes back.

In winters; the birds come from North, to spend time in different wetlands and deserts of Pakistan. These birds start flying on this way in month of November. February is the high time and By march they start flying back home, towards their native habitats. It shows, their Particular timing. Indeed, Nature follows the time.

Farmer makes its hay while the sun shines. If he doesn't do so. His cattle shall starve and die of hunger. And, he shall regret his delay and idleness. On the contrary, if business man doesn't sell his stock in particular timing and season. He will be lost and face disadvantages. As Golda Meir says, "I must govern the clock, not be governed by it."

Pakistan is going through critical crises. It is because, people of Pakistan didn't make their hay when the Sun was shining.One knows worth of water when well is dry. Day follows day. New sun is arising. Pakistan should make its hay. Otherwise, lost time never comes and History loves to repeat itself.

By: Xuhaib Ahmed recently written by 5:15 [/FONT][/SIZE][/B][/COLOR]

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Everyone is requested to check it, Specially Usman Khalid.
Dear, Check it and Give MARKS. [/SIZE][/B][/COLOR]

[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;459793][COLOR="Magenta"][B][SIZE="4"][FONT="Century Gothic"]Make hay while sun shines.

Every work suits [COLOR="Black"]at[/COLOR][B][COLOR="Black"](suit at.Is it a phrasal verb.I have not come across such a verb before)[/COLOR][/B] accurate time. One should hit [COLOR="Black"]the[/COLOR] iron when it is hot. In Pakistan, Farmer sows seeds of wheat in the month of November and harvests in the Month of June or March. Every crop has its particular season. So, every work has its particular time. If one hastes or delays, [COLOR="Black"]he[/COLOR][B][COLOR="Black"](use of indefinite pronoun with personal. Can we use them together?)[/COLOR][/B] loses the chance and time. Once, time is lost, it never comes back.

In winter[COLOR="Black"]s[/COLOR]; the birds come from North, to spend time in different wetlands and deserts of Pakistan. These birds start flying on this way in month of November. February is the high time and By march they start flying back home, towards their native habitats. It shows, their Particular timing. Indeed, Nature follows the time.

Farmer makes its hay while the sun shines. If he doesn't do so. His cattle shall starve and die of hunger. And, he shall regret his delay and idleness. On the contrary, if [COLOR="Black"]business man[/COLOR][COLOR="Black"](a businessman) [/COLOR]doesn't sell his stock in particular timing and season[COLOR="Black"]. He(,he)[/COLOR] will be lost and face disadvantages. As Golda Meir says, "I must govern the clock, not be governed by it."

Pakistan is going through critical crises. It is because, people of Pakistan didn't make their hay when the Sun was shining.One knows worth of water when well is dry. Day follows day. New sun is arising. Pakistan should make its hay. Otherwise, lost time never comes and History loves to repeat itself.

By: Xuhaib Ahmed recently written by 5:15 [/FONT][/SIZE][/B][/COLOR]

[COLOR="DarkRed"][B][SIZE="3"]
Everyone is requested to check it, Specially Usman Khalid.
Dear, Check it and Give MARKS. [/SIZE][/B][/COLOR][/QUOTE]

Dear Zohaib you have written very nicely.But while writing, you have made some slight mistakes .Do improve them, for a little mistake can put a very negative impact on the mind of readers.Overall well.

[QUOTE=usman khalid;459752]Suggested corrections have been coloured.



[B]Some Suggestions:[/B]

Use past indefinite tense to describe/mention past events.
Take care of spellings.
Don't use 'And' frequently in beginning of a new sentence. You may either combine the next sentence with previous one and thus converting two sentences into one sentence or make a separate second sentence by using 'Also' in place of 'And'.
For example, here are two lines from your expansion:

These characters in man creates hopelessness and extremes.And man becomes insane for his ambition.

You can write it in one sentence as:
These characters in man creates hopelessness and extremes and man becomes insane for his ambition.

Or you can write it in two sentences as:
These characters in man creates hopelessness and extremes. Also man becomes insane for his ambition.

Hope you get my point.

Overall very well written. :)
Try avoiding repeated mistakes of grammar/tenses/sentence structure.[/QUOTE]


thanx a lot dear usman brother for explainig it in detail.

Why we have to use past indefinite instead of past perfect ? Any rule? Because it indicates long time ago past where past perfect is used.


You have explain how we can join these two clauses . I got it . You can point out types of these clauses ? Or we can put them in to the box of independant and sub-ordinate clause.

Othet mistakes are acknowledged !

Thanx being here....

Man is architect of his own fortune

many of us believe that everything is predetermined in life and nothing can ever change it.But its not so, man is the masterpiece created by Allah, Allah SWT has bestowed man with various capabilities, he as given the power of reasoning, he is enabled to design and groom his own fate. its he himself who chooses that what he wants in his life.
those who wait for change to occur itself without putting any effort will never be exalted in life and will suffocate to death in dark pit of woe and disappointment.but those who work steadfastly will surely be confronted with felicity. it is very obvious that when one adheres to the hard work, determination and devotion, these take him to the throne of success. the larger the effort one comes up with the higher are the chances of his success, as Thomas jefferson said "i am a great believer of luck and i find the harder i work the more i have of it".
so a man can surely turn himself into whatever he wants to be those who are brave and venturesome will definitely succeed while others will suffer with the glumness and compunction of their own choice!!
so it is very true to say that a man's fate is solely in his own hand and it totally depends on him that what and how he wants in his life.

i am not satisfied with this at all :( eventhen m posting it here, members plx check and point out my mistakes!
and can any one plx translate it in english 4 me??
TU MUSALMAAN HO TOU TAQDEER HY TADBEER TERI!!

[QUOTE=Anum Bashir;459867]Man is architect of his own fortune

[B]M[/B]any of us believe that everything is predetermined in life and nothing can [B]ever[/B] change it.But [B]it's[/B] not so, man is the [COLOR="Magenta"]masterpiece [/COLOR] (Write, man is crown of creatures.) created by Allah[B].[/B] [COLOR="Magenta"]Allah SWT has bestowed man with various capabilities, he as given the power of reasoning, he is enabled to design and groom his own fate.[/COLOR] [B](Re-arrange it.)[/B] [B]it's[/B] he himself who chooses that what he wants in his life.
[B]T[/B][COLOR="Magenta"]hose who wait for change to occur itself without putting any effort will never be exalted in life and will suffocate to death in dark pit of woe and disappointment[/COLOR] [B]Try to make simple sentences.)[/B] .[B]B[/B]ut those who work steadfastly will surely be confronted with felicity. [B]I[/B]t is very obvious that when one adheres to the hard work, determination and devotion, these take [B][COLOR="Magenta"]him[/COLOR][/B] [B]one)[/B] to the throne of success. The larger the effort one comes up with the higher are the chances of his success[B].[/B] As Thomas jefferson said "I am a great believer of luck and i find the harder i work the more i have of it".
[B][COLOR="Magenta"][B]S[/B]o a man can surely turn himself into whatever he wants to be those who are brave and venturesome will definitely succeed while others will suffer with the glumness and compunction of their own choice!![/COLOR][/B] [B](Make short and simple sentences.)[/B]
[B]S[/B]o it is very true to say that a man's fate is solely in his own hand and it totally depends on him that what and how he wants in his life.



i am not satisfied with this at all :( eventhen m posting it here, members plx check and point out my mistakes!
and can any one plx translate it in english 4 me??
TU MUSALMAAN HO TOU TAQDEER HY TADBEER TERI!![/QUOTE]


Quite well done. Do use correct sentence structure. When you start new sentence, keep first letter of word capital. You could give examples of great personalities.
Keep posting your expansion, you will learn a lot by this way.

Translation:

[B]You are Muslim, you are destiny and destiny is yours,[/B]

[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;459829]thanx a lot dear usman brother for explainig it in detail.

Why we have to use past indefinite instead of past perfect ? Any rule? Because it indicates long time ago past where past perfect is used.


You have explain how we can join these two clauses . I got it . You can point out types of these clauses ? Or we can put them in to the box of independant and sub-ordinate clause.

Othet mistakes are acknowledged !

Thanx being here....[/QUOTE]

Refer to the following links for difference between ‘Past Indefinite’ and ‘Past Perfect’ tense:

[url]http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/simpas-pasper[/url]

[url]http://wiki.answers.com/Q/What_is_the_difference_between_a_past_tense_a_past_perfect_tense[/url]

Refer to the following links for detailed information about clauses:

[url]http://www.learnenglish.de/grammar/clausetext.htm[/url]

[url]http://www.cliffsnotes.com/study_guide/Types-of-Clauses.topicArticleId-251364,articleId-251289.html[/url]

Suggested corrections have been coloured:

[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;459793][B][SIZE="4"][FONT="Century Gothic"]Make hay while sun shines.

Every work suits at accurate time. One should hit the iron when it is hot. In Pakistan, Farmer sows seeds of wheat in the month of November and harvests in the Month of June or March. Every crop has its particular season. So, every work has its particular time. If one hastes or delays, he loses the chance and time. Once, time is lost, it never comes back.

In winters[COLOR="Magenta"],[/COLOR] the birds come from [COLOR="Magenta"]North to[/COLOR] spend time in different wetlands and deserts of Pakistan. These birds start flying on this way in month of November. February is the high time and [COLOR="Magenta"]by[/COLOR] march they start flying back home, towards their native habitats. It [COLOR="Magenta"]shows their[/COLOR] Particular timing. Indeed, Nature follows the time.

Farmer makes its hay while the sun shines. If he doesn't [COLOR="Magenta"]do so, his[/COLOR] cattle shall starve and die of hunger. And, he shall regret his delay and idleness. On the contrary, if business man doesn't sell his stock in particular timing and [COLOR="Magenta"]season, he [/COLOR]will be lost and face disadvantages. As Golda Meir says, "I must govern the clock, not be governed by it."

Pakistan is going through critical crises. It is [COLOR="Magenta"]because people [/COLOR]of Pakistan didn't make their hay when the Sun was shining.One knows worth of water when well is dry. Day follows day. New sun is arising. Pakistan should make its hay. Otherwise, lost time never comes and History loves to repeat itself.

By: Xuhaib Ahmed recently written by 5:15 [/FONT][/SIZE][/B][/COLOR]

[COLOR="DarkRed"][B][SIZE="3"]
Everyone is requested to check it, Specially Usman Khalid.
Dear, Check it and Give MARKS. [/SIZE][/B][/QUOTE]

Good one!

Brother I cannot claim authority on English Expansion thus am not in a position to award marks to anyone. What I can do is to pinpoint mistakes which I feel should be corrected. I may not be right always but I try my best to deliver to the best of my knowledge and abilities.

Kindly check my expansion.

[CENTER][B][U]Life is tragedy to those who feel and comedy to those who think[/U][/B][/CENTER]

This statement makes a point that those who are courageous and those who use their intelligence well always try their level best to overcome problems of their life and they eventually make their life a happy life and those who don't have courage make their life a hell.

Life is a mixture of happiness and sorrows and every person's life contain some problems.There is not a single person in this world whose life either contains sorrow or happiness.Although some person's life contain more sorrows and some have more happiness,yet God has given equal mind to all persons.It depends upon person whether he wants to fight with his problems or not.

There are many persons in this world who lived a miserable life in their early ages.They had all sorts of problems.But they were courageous and determine.They had courage to solve their problems.Einstein,Bill Gates, Edison and Stephen Hawking are the prime examples of those persons who changes their lives through their courage,determination and talent.They had the courage to fight with their problems.That courage helped them to use their talent brilliantly.

Lives of revolutionary persons gave us a lesson that through courage and determination person can change his life.He can made his life happy and prosperous or he can make his life full of sorrows,griefs and miseries.

Those who don't fight with problems of life ultimately make their life a tragedy.And those who fight make their life a comedy because

"God help those who help themselves"

[QUOTE=m.furqan08;461658]Kindly check my expansion.

[CENTER][B][U]Life is tragedy to those who feel and comedy to those who think[/U][/B][/CENTER]
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This statement makes a point that those who are courageous and those who use their intelligence well always try their level best to overcome problems of their life and they eventually make their life a happy life and those who don't have courage make their life a hell.[/SIZE] (Tr to make simple sentences)

Life is a mixture of happiness and sorrows and every person's life [B]containS[/B] some problems.There is not a single person in this world whose life either contains sorrow or happiness.Although some person's life contain more sorrows and some have more happiness,yet God has given equal mind to all persons.It depends upon person whether he wants to fight with his problems or not.

There are many persons in this world who lived a miserable life in their early ages.They had all sorts of problems.But they were courageous and determine.They had courage to solve their problems.Einstein,Bill Gates, Edison and Stephen Hawking are the prime examples of those persons who changes their lives through their courage,determination and talent.They had the courage to fight with their problems.That courage helped them to use their talent brilliantly.

Lives of revolutionary persons gave us a lesson that through courage and determination person can change his life.He can made his life happy and prosperous or he can make his life full of sorrows,griefs and miseries.

Those who don't fight with problems of life ultimately make their life a tragedy.And those who fight make their life a comedy because

"God help those who help themselves"[/QUOTE]

Is this the meaning of TOPIC? I don't think so.
[B]Dear, Usman.[/B] Please evolute it.

[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;462839]Is this the meaning of TOPIC? I don't think so.
[B]Dear, Usman.[/B] Please evolute it.[/QUOTE]

Frankly speaking, I myself don't exactly know the meaning of this proverb!

Ok, so this is my very first piece of writing..

''A great deal of talent is lost for the want of a little courage''

Unnecessary criticism ,restrictions and demoralization suppress the potential and ambition of a person.while,a little encouragement and motivation nurtures the mind and soul; it braces one to over come the odds and obstacles of life.hence,providing the perseverance to stand against the adversities of time.
Thomas eddisson is a renowned scientist;an inventor who has more than a thousand inventions to his credit.but,a few people know that in his early life,eddison was a dumb student and a slow learner.his mother gave him the courage and support which eventually transformed him into the most prolific inventor of all times.
Thus, talent is like a plant,which needs proper attention and care.if it is not encouraged,then it might never get a chance to bloom.

[QUOTE=Dr saad;462958]Ok, so this is my very first piece of writing..

''A great deal of talent is lost for the want of a little courage''

Unnecessary criticism ,restrictions and demoralization suppress the potential and ambition of a person.while,a little encouragement and motivation nurtures the mind and soul; it braces one to over come the odds and obstacles of life.hence,providing the perseverance to stand against the adversities of time.
Thomas eddisson is a renowned scientist;an inventor who has more than a thousand inventions to his credit.but,a few people know that in his early life,eddison was a dumb student and a slow learner.his mother gave him the courage and support which eventually transformed him into the most prolific inventor of all times.
Thus, talent is like a plant,which needs proper attention and care.if it is not encouraged,then it might never get a chance to bloom.[/QUOTE]

[B]Dear, word limit for expansion is 250-300. You have written only 130 words. Please, expand further. Get them around 270. [/B]

bro, next time i will...
lekin zara is pe bhe roshani daal dain pehlay..

[QUOTE=usman khalid;462848]Frankly speaking, I myself don't exactly know the meaning of this proverb![/QUOTE]

[B][COLOR="DarkRed"]"Life is a comedy to those who think; a tragedy to those who feel."

Sir, man is hurt by feelings not by thinking. When one feels life, he feels tragedy. The tragedies of life, like; death, horror, war, terrorism etc. But, one who thinks life, life is comedy for one. One laughs at life. One who knows everything is temporary; enjoys life like a comedy.
in other words.

If one uses mind, world is funny and if one uses heart, world is tragic.

Regards,[/COLOR][/B]

IT IS HARD FOR EMPTY BAG TO STAND UPRIGHT

An empty bag lying in a shelf has no ability to stand upright same is case with human beings, the people having no courage and faith on their skills can never achieve anything in their lives and without knowledge even they can't take stand for their rights. If they are unable to achieve anything in their life just because of lack of their faith, skill and knowledge, they los heart and never bother to improve themselves. Contrary to this people having proper knowledge, faith on their skills and tremendous courage don't find anything in the world which they can't achieve. Due to their knowledge they also possess the ability to stand for their rights and fight for it if neccessary.
A man like Quaid e Azam whose "bag" was full of courage, knowledge, wisdom , faith on his abilities and Allah and devotion took stand for the rights of his nation. He presented his point of view in front of british with the great valour and stood firmly on his stance and finally got the seperate homeland for the Muslims of India. It was his faith on his skills and knowlege which gave him tremandous courage to fight for the rights of Muslims of India and also the Muslims of India had faith on his abilities that he was the man of valour and courage, can fights for our rights. This support kept the Quaid e Azam upright against any hardship and hindrance in his way to success.
The knowledge, courage and a lot of struggle is main thing which takes a person closer to the success. The lossers or lazy persons just want to spend a luxury life and pay no heed to struggle and this attitude takes them to the failure in every step of life. This maxim is still applicable to human life as it was many years ago. Empty bags are never welcomed in the society.

[B][I][COLOR="DimGray"]Dear members, How to start expansions.....Should we suppose to attempt on Current affairs topics, what are the topics of expansions? or it consist on the topics of Idioms, phrase, or what?


Thanks.....
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[QUOTE=ssara;463317][B][I][COLOR="DimGray"]Dear members, How to start expansions.....Should we suppose to attempt on Current affairs topics, what are the topics of expansions? or it consist on the topics of Idioms, phrase, or what?


Thanks.....
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[B]Topics of expansions are proverbial statements and quotations. [/B]

For further, scroll back to 2nd post. Read topics of expansion to get exact idea of expansion writing.