rom was not built in a day . . . .
 

anything of desired goal ,can't be acheived in short entrval of time,they need continous efforts and strategy to over come the task.this expantion clearly indicate that rom is the result of continous ,and proper results..
Our Holy prophet MOHAMMAD s.a.w made a proper strategy and planing to spread the message of be loved islam,his rol model, personality,activeness, attractected the people towards islam.a group of few persons to convey the message of islam, their tireless efforts brought a day ,when the Prophet s.a.w said in his last sormon that, "today the relgiön Islam is completed. ."this is the series of travelles made by prophet s.a.w and his team to acheiv the goal.
Slow and steady wins the race, all the world heroes ,like, newton, einstein, hitler, etc were motivated by their imagination,and the struggled for their acheivments, and proved.every task needs propper time and shedule. .

[QUOTE=hullio arif;634159]anything of desired goal ,can't be acheived in short entrval of time,they need continous efforts and strategy to over come the task.this expantion clearly indicate that rom is the result of continous ,and proper results..
Our Holy prophet MOHAMMAD s.a.w made a proper strategy and planing to spread the message of be loved islam,his rol model, personality,activeness, attractected the people towards islam.a group of few persons to convey the message of islam, their tireless efforts brought a day ,when the Prophet s.a.w said in his last sormon that, "today the relgiön Islam is completed. ."this is the series of travelles made by prophet s.a.w and his team to acheiv the goal.
Slow and steady wins the race, all the world heroes ,like, newton, einstein, hitler, etc were motivated by their imagination,and the struggled for their acheivments, and proved.every task needs propper time and shedule. .[/QUOTE]


Dear, recheck your paragraph. Try to avoid spelling and punctuation mistakes.

[QUOTE=eshaaladan;634153]Beautiful effort dear,
l just have confusion with love ‘which’ can, l think there would be ‘that’ and ‘human kind’, tell me the reason behind your usage of that worDs, no doubt beautiful effort.[/QUOTE]

thx a lot for highlighting my mistakes.basically,i interchange the two words often misleadingly.however, i would like to know what prompted you to think the words are wrong?i have no logic to justify my selection of these words.if you can tell me your reason of objection,it would be a great help.

love is a beautiful but baleful god
Love conquers all until it is within limits but when it becomes madness, it causes pain, suffering, chaos and bloodshed. Love is divine, a feeling of purity and essence of commitment and care, accomplished solely between two people. Love is the only way to win the hearts of people.It is the much talked about feeling of writers, authors and philosophers. Love is the first feeling of the universe, when Allah created the world out of love for Holy Prophet.Kings ruled over countries because of love for the masses. It is a source of happiness, but when it develops for worldly things and selfish motives, it leads to annihilation, carnage and ruins. Kings destroyed empires because of love for women, wealth and virtue. The Trojan war was one such example. United states entered world war II because of love for the country. Mahmood ghaznavi attacked India seventeen times because of love for wealth. The cold war, which destroyed U.S.S.R was just because of love for power. Love is the only feeling which turns friends into enemies and enemies into friends. Ergo, love is a feeling which when taken positive is divine and pure but when it develops, it causes a deluge that takes away everything with it. As an author said, “Love is hard to find, hard to keep and hard to forget”

@sadafnoorelahi, frankly telling you l don't know whether that words are right or wrong but l felt little problem with the plausibility of human kind because l heard mankind, human beings or man etc. thanx

stay blessed


seniors plz do confirm us.

[QUOTE=sadafnoorelahi;634486]love is a beautiful but baleful god
Love conquers all until it is within limits but when it becomes madness, it causes pain, suffering, chaos and bloodshed. Love is divine, a feeling of purity and essence of commitment and care, accomplished solely between two people. Love is the only way to win the hearts of people.It is the much talked about feeling of writers, authors and philosophers. [/QUOTE]

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Dont forget to mention the pretext about which you're going to work.

[FONT="Arial Black"][SIZE="4"]Self done is well done[/SIZE][/FONT]

Self reliance is the greatest virtue. A man who is self reliant wins a kind of a glorius independence. For he is not to wait to be helped by others. He is full of adventure, interest and excitement. He is never dull and dispirited as Cicero rightly said,” most happy is he, who is entirely self reliant, who centres all his requirements in himself”. Thrown to his own resources, he develops many virtues. All his latent qualities flourish and thrive. He is ever ready to take intiative, always confident and finding a way out of difficuilties.Great heroes, great scientists and great business men were all self made. Thomas Edison started off as a book binder to become the greatest scientist of all times. Vidyasagar,was a poor brahmin’s son, but he made himself one of the most honored man of his age by dint of his own efforts. From the shackles of slavery to pinnacle of success requires monumental hardwork, tenacity and passion, and Fredrick douglas had these qualities in spades. He knew nothing in life would ever be handed to him. He learned to read by interacting with white children or through any written material he could find. He took the greatest risk of his life by escaping from slavery to massachusettes. Soon he rose to prominence to become a great abolitionist leader, spectacular orator and a successful newspaper publisher. In post civil war era, he served as the president of a savings bank. He rose to become one of the greatest black men of his time by trusting no one but himself. Even emerson, the great American essayist wrote in his essay self reliance, that “whosoever be a man, be a nonconformist” and again, ”the best lighting rod for your protection be your own spine”.The society views one self as one sees himself. if he portrays himself weak and relies on others, they too show no respect. Therefore,the best course is to start working in our own capacity.

[QUOTE=eshaaladan;634496]@sadafnoorelahi, frankly telling you l don't know whether that words are right or wrong but l felt little problem with the plausibility of human kind because l heard mankind, human beings or man etc. thanx

stay blessed


seniors plz do confirm us.



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Dont forget to mention the pretext about which you're going to work.[/QUOTE]

hmmmmmm? what do you mean by the pretext i want to work on? are you asking me the context in which i would take expansion forward?.i think the proverb itself has two meanings so i cannot choose one on my own.please seniors correct us.

Pretext mean any line/issue/topic/quote/adage etc. about which you are going to write :) pretext is not any high sounding term related to grammar, l just wrote that in a wide sense. cheers :)

[B]Where there is a will, there is a way
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Human being is born with a desire to excel and stand out in the race of life. This strong inclination helps him finding out the ways to reach his destinations and owing to his nature he seldom loses hope. Will is the soul of the success stories of this world. This was the will that lead Quaid-e-Azam to earn Pakistan for the Muslims of subcontinent. He fought with all obstacles with sheer determination and made his way towards the achievement of his ultimate goal. This was the will that made Henry Ford to build a giant motor company, starting from just as a repairman. Bill Gates did not earn fame overnight rather it was the zeal to surpass the rest of the world and to outshine everybody else. And the examples are countless.

The way of success is not a smooth way. There come many hindrances and bumps in it. Sometimes darkness surrounds. Only determined and eager people can find their way out of the darkness, using the light of their utmost efforts and purposefulness. A person without any will do not have any aims at all. And when there is no aim, it goes without saying that such a person can never rise in the ocean of zestful people. Winston Churchill has very rightly said that “Success is walking from failure to failure with no loss of enthusiasm.” So, the steady ones fight with impediments with courage and win the race.

[QUOTE=Jolie Dame;635489][B]Where there is a will, there is a way
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Human being is born with a desire to excel and stand out in the race of life. This strong inclination helps him [COLOR="Red"](to find)[/COLOR]finding out the ways to reach his destinations and owing to his nature[COLOR="Red"](,)[/COLOR] he seldom loses hope. Will is the soul of the success stories of this world. This was the will that lead (led) Quaid-e-Azam to earn Pakistan for the Muslims of([COLOR="red"][COLOR="red"]the[/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR] subcontinent. He fought with all obstacles with sheer determination and made his way towards the achievement of his ultimate goal. This was the will that made Henry Ford to build a giant motor company, starting from just as a repairman. Bill Gates did not earn fame overnight rather it was the zeal to surpass the rest of the world and to outshine everybody else. And the examples are countless.

The way of success is not a smooth way( [COLOR="red"]repetition of words in same sentence)[/COLOR]. There come many hindrances and bumps in it. Sometimes darkness surrounds. Only determined and eager people can find their way out of the darkness, using the light of their utmost efforts and purposefulness. A person without any will do not have any aims at all. And when there is no aim, it goes without saying that such a person can never rise in [COLOR="red"](above)[/COLOR] the ocean of zestful people. Winston Churchill has very rightly said that “Success is walking from failure to failure with no loss of enthusiasm.” So, the steady ones fight with impediments with courage and win the race.[/QUOTE]

i have tried to point out the mistakes to the best of my abilities

Hope is the buoy of life
 

Our whole universe, the world, human lives and the events that occur in in are so unpredictable in their nature that if one were to look at them through the lens of a realist, he might lose the will to carry on his work. However, what we observe is quite the contrary. Man has surmounted mountains, ventured in deep space and explored the depths of the ocean just because of his optimism, his disposition of having faith in the unseen events and his hope for a desired outcome.
It is hope that gives people the motivation to stand against rough tides; it is hope which persuades human beings to tapping the unlimited resources. Holistically, whole system on earth will collapse without ‘hope’. A fisherman persists in his work for many hours, sometimes even days, with such poor chances of success, knowing that he might have to face storm or return to home empty handed. Yet, he remains hopeful; in the end he is rewarded for his undwindling faith.
The pages of history are full of such men who remained defiant against despondency. Allama iqbal was one such man. He exhibited great confidence against ordeals and firmly believed that Muslims will soon resurrect. His hope and dream is what we call,today, Pakistan.
It is hope which aspires people to perform great feat, attain glory and change the course of history. It is the essential ingredient of human soul and basic trait of their personality, without which the whole life will come to a halt.

"Umeedain tor kar kitna sukoon milta hai
Tuwaqaat ke gham main azab kitnay thay"

I believe it is strong will, coupled with hard wotk that that makes every thing possible;
for "where there is a will there is a way!"