Salam to all seniors. This is my first attempt of comprehension.pls check and evaluate it.

A Fool may learn a wise man wit
fool and wise are two extremes of human mental abilities.fool person is the one who make minimum use of analytic abilities, mis percieve and misunderstand things. in fact, he consider himself the most wise person on the earth.while on the other hand wise man look at things in wider perspective calmly,make wise decisions and respect the opinion of others.
in reality every individual is a fool at some stage of his life.e.g in childhood,innocent babies use to fight over sweets ask foolish questions from parents and then later they laugh at their cheerful foolish memories.
similarly a teacher at start of his career might get aggressive and angry at questions and behavior of his students but after experiences ad learning from seniors he became the one who prepares nations.
But in entire journey of becoming wise person from fool,one should be open minded,flexible and whole heartily accept his mistakes and learn from them. similarly by listening to senior and experienced one can easily cover up his mistake and take wise decisions.finally being Muslim it is our duty to follow our Holy Prophet(P.B.U.H) so that we can become a wise and true Muslim.

A Fool may learn a wise man wit
fool and wise are two extremes of human mental abilities.fool person is the one who make minimum use of analytic abilities, mis percieve (misperceive,do not use two words that give same meanings,Exempt mispercieve) and misunderstand things. in fact, he consider himself the most wise person on the earth.while on the other hand wise man look at things in wider perspective calmly,make wise decisions and respect the opinion of others.
in reality every individual is a fool at some stage of his life.e.g in childhood,innocent babies use to fight over sweets ask foolish questions from parents and then later they laugh at their cheerful foolish memories.
similarly a teacher at start of his career might get aggressive and angry at questions and behavior of his students but after experiences and learning from seniors he became the one who prepares nations. (not getting the sense)
But in entire journey of becoming wise person from fool,one should be open minded,flexible and whole heartily accept his mistakes and learn from them. similarly by listening to senior(seniors) and experienced ,one can easily cover up his mistake and take wise decisions.finally being Muslim it is our duty to follow our Holy Prophet(P.B.U.H) so that we can become a wise and true Muslim. (Do not conclude it this way instead use this sentence as an example)


@Pearl013, I have pointed out some minor mistakes as per my caliber , Try to write more precise to drag out the actual meaning of the topic.And you have written very well .You could have done better .

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thanks for ur valuable suggestions.i'll try to avoid these mistakes in future.

its my request to seniors pls check my expansion.especially sir arif awan,usman khalid and mano g.

Mistakes are coloured and written in bold.

Try to use present indefinite tense correctly. When you start a new sentence, capitalize first letter of word of new sentence.

Stay within the Topic. Don't derail.

Overall good efforts.

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http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...xpansions.html

Is it a comprehension or expansion

Suggested corrections have been coloured:
Zuhaib and Braveheart have also pointed out some mistakes. Try to avoid those in future and act upon the suggestions given by both.

Use the link given by Zuhaib to post any further expansion for evaluation.

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ONE IS AS YOUNG AS ONE FEELS




To determine weather one is young or old one’s age is not a reliable test. Ordinarily , of course, an old man is that one who is advanced in years, while a young man is one who is, we might say , in the twenties of his life. But there are many people in twenties of their lives who are ready feeling sick of life and whose interest in the world is already on the decline. Such people cannot be called young despite their youthful years. Youth is synonymous with hope, enthusiasm, zest of life, they desire to love, a sprit of adventure, a capacity to take risk, a tendency to make light of one’s misfortunes, etc.

There people in forties , fifties and even sixties of their lives, who are buoyant, light hearted, inquisitive, and merry. Such persons are surely young. Years are no handicap them. They wish to squeeze out the maximum from life. They may even become physically weak and may no longer enjoy the energy of their earlier years. But their sprit remains strong, their enthusiasm for life has not become damp, their good cheer has not diminished. They ever ready to participate in any programme or activity which is suggested to them.

These person are truly young. George Bernard show did not lose his interest in life even at the age of ninety. Sir Winston Churchill and Quaid-e-Azam did not lose their enthusiasm till the end of their lives. Indeed, a centenarian may feel younger then a man of thirty years.

Youth is a matter not age so much, as of certain outlook on life. A man of twenty five years of age may be gloomy, morbid and cynical, in which case he is no longer young. Another at the age of seventy may be cheerful, hopeful and optimistic which shows he is still young. It is the condition of one’s heart that determines weather one is young or old


check it........

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