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[noomee]

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Where there is a will, there is way

This is the proverb of hope. Whensoever we face great troubles and problems, mostly we can not come out with good results, because at that time we use to give up all our efforts and we find out that it is impossible to face those troubles. But this is not a good way to react in this manner, because nothing is impossible in this world. Inspite of giving up hopes, we should out some solutions, because every problem in this world has atleast one solution and no problem is without solution. And it should also be kept in mind that God has given the power of thinking and reasoning to every one equally. So we should utilize that power of thinking and reasoning and certainely we will find its solution.

For instance there is a person, who wants to do CSS, but in the start, he is afraid of it and he is thinking that how can he qualify that examination, because there are 12 subjects and hence it is very difficult for him to pass. So in the begining he is becoming hopeless and hence it is totally impossible for him to pass such examination. Inpite of being hopeless, he should be determinant in his aim and he should also think there is way to pass such examination and that is only hardworking. So it means every problem in this world has atleast one solution.

So all the people whose names are shining in the history, did not loose their hopes and they remained determinant on their wills and they ultimately found thier solutions. They also kept it in their minds that ups and downs are the parts of life. Similarly we should react in positive manner that if we have will to do something, then should be determinant on our wills and then we will certainely find its solutions and way to success.
If we will loose our hopes, certainely there will be no any way for success. The more we will be determinant, the sooner we will find its solution.

[kamran_shaikh]

The will power plays pivotal role in man's life. It gives impetus to preserverance and hardwork. Man often faces intractable problems in this day to day life. He engulfed by the unplatable stumbling blocks tries to find vistas for overcoming the hurdles.It is, in fact, the power of will that enables him to think over the solutions and deal with the despicable situations with iron hand. The success of Bill Gates is archetypal example in this respect. He had to confront failures in the university life and was driven out of it because of his pathetic performance.Beyond all shadows of aspersions, it was the will power that enabled Bill Gates to muster up the courage and do untiring struggle to achieve towering heights. Resultantly, he rose to immense heights by establishing Microsoft Corporation and tendering break through in technological world. Thus, will power augered him plausible results.Similarly, Alexander The Great would not have successfully conquired more than half of the world, had he lacked confidence in him and his magnificent strategies.


On the contrary, absence of will power pesters man to teeter on the brink of disasters.True, the lack of will power makes him despondent and a pessimist one. The daunting challeges that engulf man are dealt with reluctance,lack of confidence, lack of determination and uncertainty. The rule of the muslims who were scanty in the sub-continent as compare to Hindus over the latter bears the vindication of the fact. The lack of will power on the part of Hindus procured the muslims with oppotunity to prolong their rule and govern over them unflinchingly. Same was the case with Muslims when britians came into the skirts of power. The lack of stern will power to develop the capablities and take concrete steps in order to control the widening influnce of Britians on part of the Muslims enabled the latter to rule over Sub-continent by the hook or by the crook that reduced the rule of Muslims to naught.thus, absence of will spawns nothing but failures and miseries.


The crux of the matter is that the will power is stepping stone to success in life. Man has to be willful, if he wants to whittle away his reprehensible problems. The desire to achieve certain goal leads towards the articulation of ways that may usher his destiny in right direction. However, the lack of will exacerbates the already pathetic situation for man. He continues to face the music, if there is no will. Thus, it is rightly said that where there is a will, there is a way.

[noomee]

plz dear members check my expansion and i required your suggesstions. waiting still

[kamran_shaikh]

Originally Posted by kamran_shaikh

The will power plays pivotal role in man's life. It gives impetus to perserverance and hardwork. Man often faces intractable problems in his day to day life. He engulfed by the unpalatable stumbling blocks tries to find vistas for overcoming the hurdles.It is, in fact, the power of will that enables him to think over the solutions and deal with the despicable situations with iron hand. The success of Bill Gates is archetypal example in this respect. He had to confront failures in the university life and was driven out of it because of his pathetic performance.Beyond all shadows of aspersions, it was the will power that enabled Bill Gates to muster up the courage and do untiring struggle to achieve towering heights. Resultantly, he rose to immense heights by establishing Microsoft Corporation and tendering break through in technological world. Thus, will power augered him plausible results.Similarly, Alexander The Great would not have successfully conqured more than half of the world, had he lacked confidence in him and his magnificent strategies.


On the contrary, absence of will power pesters man to teeter on the brink of disasters.True, the lack of will power makes him despondent and a pessimist one. The daunting challeges that engulf man are dealt with reluctance,lack of confidence, lack of determination and uncertainty. The rule of the muslims who were scanty in the sub-continent as compare to Hindus over the latter bears the vindication of the fact. The lack of will power on the part of Hindus procured the muslims with oppotunity to prolong their rule and govern over them unflinchingly. Same was the case with Muslims when britians came into the skirts of power. The lack of stern will power to develop the capablities and take concrete steps in order to control the widening influnce of Britians on part of the Muslims enabled the latter to rule over Sub-continent by the hook or by the crook that reduced the rule of Muslims to naught.thus, absence of will spawns nothing but failures and miseries.


The crux of the matter is that the will power is stepping stone to success in life. Man has to be willful, if he wants to whittle away his reprehensible problems. The desire to achieve certain goal leads towards the articulation of ways that may usher his destiny in right direction. However, the lack of will exacerbates the already pathetic situation for man. He continues to face the music, if there is no will. Thus, it is rightly said that where there is a will, there is a way.

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[noomee]

dear members and seniors i have cleared following topics of expansions. are these enough or should I go for more? need ur suggesstions.

1. where there is a will, there is way
2. an empty vessel makes much noise
3. a little learning is a dangerous thing
4. a man is known by the company he keeps
5. tell me the name of his friend and i will tell you what kind of a man he is
6. to err is human, to forgive divine
7. those who live in glass house should not throw stones on others
8. the child is the father of man
9. handsome is that handsome does
10. honesty is the best policy
11. man is the architect of his own fortune
12. god helps those, who help themselves
13. cut your coat according your cloth
14. charity begins at home
15. money is a good servant but a bad master
16. if winter comes, can spring be far behind
17. all that gilters is not gold
18 Rome was not built in a day
19. failures are the stepping stones of success
20. barking dogs seldom bite
21. the pen is mighter than the sword
22. necessity is the mother of invention
23. a bad workman quarrels with his tools
24. a good tune can be played on a fiddle
25. laugh and the world laughes with you, weep and you weep alone
26. revenge is wild justice
27. consistency is the virtue of fools
28. make hay while the sun shines
29. example is better than percept
30. do what i say and not what i do
31. a ship without rudder is like a life without a philosophy
32. lack of real purpose causes people to fail in life
33. the nearer the church , the farther from God
34. some books are to be tasted, others are to be swallowed and some to be chewed and digested
35. bravity is the soul of wit
36. the crown and glory of life is character
37. a little knowledge is a dangerous thing
38. a little learning is a dangerous thing
39. sweet are the uses of adversity
40. truth is stronger than fiction
41. to travel hopefully is better than to arrive
42. character is fate
43. life is action, not contemplation
44. where ignorance is bliss, it is folly to be wise
45. a thing of beauty is joy forever
46. the violence of war can be diluted with love
47. poverty is the parent of revolution and crime
48. It is hard for an empty bag to stand upright

[manan shaikh]

Originally Posted by noomee

check my expansion and give suggestions




Where there is a will, there is way

This is the proverb of hope. Whensoever we face great troubles and problems, mostly we can not come out with good results, because at that time we use to give up all our efforts and we find out that it is impossible to face those troubles. But this is not a good way to react in this manner, because nothing is impossible in this world. Inspite of giving up hopes, we should out some solutions, because every problem in this world has atleast one solution and no problem is without solution. And it should also be kept in mind that God has given the power of thinking and reasoning to every one equally. So we should utilize that power of thinking and reasoning and certainely we will find its solution.

For instance there is a person, who wants to do CSS, but in the start, he is afraid of it and he is thinking that how can he qualify that examination, because there are 12 subjects and hence it is very difficult for him to pass. So in the begining he is becoming hopeless and hence it is totally impossible for him to pass such examination. Inpite of being hopeless, he should be determinant in his aim and he should also think there is way to pass such examination and that is only hardworking. So it means every problem in this world has atleast one solution.

So all the people whose names are shining in the history, did not loose their hopes and they remained determinant on their wills and they ultimately found thier solutions. They also kept it in their minds that ups and downs are the parts of life. Similarly we should react in positive manner that if we have will to do something, then should be determinant on our wills and then we will certainely find its solutions and way to success.
If we will loose our hopes, certainely there will be no any way for success. The more we will be determinant, the sooner we will find its solution.

Nomee:
Never start your expansion with sentences like,''This is proverb of hope.''Such openings are ''dull, flat, and unprofitable,'' and indicates lack of originality.Begin expanding in the most natural and striking way possible.I found some irrelevant matter as well.You have also misquoted/referenced wrong at some places like quoting example of CSS.Over all your attempt was average.You need to enhance your written expression.

[SA Haider]

Originally Posted by noomee

dear members and seniors i have cleared following topics of expansions. are these enough or should I go for more? need ur suggesstions.

1. where there is a will, there is way
2. an empty vessel makes much noise
3. a little learning is a dangerous thing
4. a man is known by the company he keeps
5. tell me the name of his friend and i will tell you what kind of a man he is
6. to err is human, to forgive divine
7. those who live in glass house should not throw stones on others
8. the child is the father of man
9. handsome is that handsome does
10. honesty is the best policy
11. man is the architect of his own fortune
12. god helps those, who help themselves
13. cut your coat according your cloth
14. charity begins at home
15. money is a good servant but a bad master
16. if winter comes, can spring be far behind
17. all that gilters is not gold
18 Rome was not built in a day
19. failures are the stepping stones of success
20. barking dogs seldom bite
21. the pen is mighter than the sword
22. necessity is the mother of invention
23. a bad workman quarrels with his tools
24. a good tune can be played on a fiddle
25. laugh and the world laughes with you, weep and you weep alone
26. revenge is wild justice
27. consistency is the virtue of fools
28. make hay while the sun shines
29. example is better than percept
30. do what i say and not what i do
31. a ship without rudder is like a life without a philosophy
32. lack of real purpose causes people to fail in life
33. the nearer the church , the farther from God
34. some books are to be tasted, others are to be swallowed and some to be chewed and digested
35. bravity is the soul of wit
36. the crown and glory of life is character
37. a little knowledge is a dangerous thing
38. a little learning is a dangerous thing
39. sweet are the uses of adversity
40. truth is stronger than fiction
41. to travel hopefully is better than to arrive
42. character is fate
43. life is action, not contemplation
44. where ignorance is bliss, it is folly to be wise
45. a thing of beauty is joy forever
46. the violence of war can be diluted with love
47. poverty is the parent of revolution and crime
48. It is hard for an empty bag to stand upright

Enough. You just need to have concept how to write and then no matter which topic is given to write on.

[manan shaikh]

Originally Posted by kamran_shaikh

The will power plays pivotal role in man's life. It gives impetus to preserverance and hardwork. Man often faces intractable problems in this day to day life. He engulfed by the unplatable stumbling blocks tries to find vistas for overcoming the hurdles.It is, in fact, the power of will that enables him to think over the solutions and deal with the despicable situations with iron hand. The success of Bill Gates is archetypal example in this respect. He had to confront failures in the university life and was driven out of it because of his pathetic performance.Beyond all shadows of aspersions, it was the will power that enabled Bill Gates to muster up the courage and do untiring struggle to achieve towering heights. Resultantly, he rose to immense heights by establishing Microsoft Corporation and tendering break through in technological world. Thus, will power augered him plausible results.Similarly, Alexander The Great would not have successfully conquired more than half of the world, had he lacked confidence in him and his magnificent strategies.


On the contrary, absence of will power pesters man to teeter on the brink of disasters.True, the lack of will power makes him despondent and a pessimist one. The daunting challeges that engulf man are dealt with reluctance,lack of confidence, lack of determination and uncertainty. The rule of the muslims who were scanty in the sub-continent as compare to Hindus over the latter bears the vindication of the fact. The lack of will power on the part of Hindus procured the muslims with oppotunity to prolong their rule and govern over them unflinchingly. Same was the case with Muslims when britians came into the skirts of power. The lack of stern will power to develop the capablities and take concrete steps in order to control the widening influnce of Britians on part of the Muslims enabled the latter to rule over Sub-continent by the hook or by the crook that reduced the rule of Muslims to naught.thus, absence of will spawns nothing but failures and miseries.


The crux of the matter is that the will power is stepping stone to success in life. Man has to be willful, if he wants to whittle away his reprehensible problems. The desire to achieve certain goal leads towards the articulation of ways that may usher his destiny in right direction. However, the lack of will exacerbates the already pathetic situation for man. He continues to face the music, if there is no will. Thus, it is rightly said that where there is a will, there is a way.

Kamran:
You have certainly an impressive written expression. Your Expansion sounds good and attractive too.It fulfills the requirement of a good.Keep it up.Meanwhile, there are some words and sentences in your expansion, meaning of which is totally ambiguous(may be for me).I also found some spelling mistakes, which can be pointed out easily. These maybe your typing mistakes.Spelling of Some words like:
Preseverance(Incorrect): perseverance (correct)
Unplatable(Incorrect): Unpalatable (correct)
Conquired(Incorrect):Conquered
Never underestimate such littler blunders, concentrate on your spellings, punctuations, and avoid using any ambiguous words and, you will be able to compose an outstanding expansion..
tc

[manan shaikh]

Originally Posted by noomee

dear members and seniors i have cleared following topics of expansions. are these enough or should I go for more? need ur suggesstions.

1. where there is a will, there is way
2. an empty vessel makes much noise
3. a little learning is a dangerous thing
4. a man is known by the company he keeps
5. tell me the name of his friend and i will tell you what kind of a man he is
6. to err is human, to forgive divine
7. those who live in glass house should not throw stones on others
8. the child is the father of man
9. handsome is that handsome does
10. honesty is the best policy
11. man is the architect of his own fortune
12. god helps those, who help themselves
13. cut your coat according your cloth
14. charity begins at home
15. money is a good servant but a bad master
16. if winter comes, can spring be far behind
17. all that gilters is not gold
18 Rome was not built in a day
19. failures are the stepping stones of success
20. barking dogs seldom bite
21. the pen is mighter than the sword
22. necessity is the mother of invention
23. a bad workman quarrels with his tools
24. a good tune can be played on a fiddle
25. laugh and the world laughes with you, weep and you weep alone
26. revenge is wild justice
27. consistency is the virtue of fools
28. make hay while the sun shines
29. example is better than percept
30. do what i say and not what i do
31. a ship without rudder is like a life without a philosophy
32. lack of real purpose causes people to fail in life
33. the nearer the church , the farther from God
34. some books are to be tasted, others are to be swallowed and some to be chewed and digested
35. bravity is the soul of wit
36. the crown and glory of life is character
37. a little knowledge is a dangerous thing
38. a little learning is a dangerous thing
39. sweet are the uses of adversity
40. truth is stronger than fiction
41. to travel hopefully is better than to arrive
42. character is fate
43. life is action, not contemplation
44. where ignorance is bliss, it is folly to be wise
45. a thing of beauty is joy forever
46. the violence of war can be diluted with love
47. poverty is the parent of revolution and crime
48. It is hard for an empty bag to stand upright

You just need to improve your quality of work, rather than quantity.Try to practice these expansions as much as possible and let those assessed by Seniors.

[kamran_shaikh]

Originally Posted by manan shaikh

Kamran:
You have certainly an impressive written expression. Your Expansion sounds good and attractive too.It fulfills the requirement of a good.Keep it up.Meanwhile, there are some words and sentences in your expansion, meaning of which is totally ambiguous(may be for me).I also found some spelling mistakes, which can be pointed out easily. These maybe your typing mistakes.Spelling of Some words like:
Preseverance(Incorrect): perseverance (correct)
Unplatable(Incorrect): Unpalatable (correct)
Conquired(Incorrect):Conquered
Never underestimate such littler blunders, concentrate on your spellings, punctuations, and avoid using any ambiguous words and, you will be able to compose an outstanding expansion..
tc

Thank you brother for pointing out my mistakes.However,i think that u havenot read my other copy of expansion in which i have made corrections of the words that u mention. But, iam still thankful to you for giving time to check the expansion.