Seniors please point out the mistakes

For the Muslims of Subcontinent, getting the right of separate electorate was an achievement. They could never think of getting independence from parochial Hindu majority. But when the Muslims, led by Quaid-e-Azam accomplished the impossible dream of their own homeland, every mired situation seemed feasible and viable. It needed a toil, a try.
People often scared of failure or lack of optimism never try the hard coarse path. They imitate the great achievers and dream of success over night, without putting in efforts. This lack of confidence and bold actions had always led to predicament circumstances. What one needs to posses is mere courage and sublime vigor coupled with intellect, every impossibility would relinquish the path of Man with earnest dedication.
A time past, people were living the life of subjugation and suppression through the hands of despotic rulers in England. Their properties and titles confiscated, lives impoverished and had to earn for the rich land owners. Gradually a wave of revolution struck the minds and hearts of Commons. They protested and fought for their right and entitlements. With in a decade period, they became the masters of their own future. What lacked was not resources or guidance, but the aim to make things possible and live a cherished and serene life. They could do it before, but they Never tried.
In a net shell, men who are persistent in their perspective and put in hard work, their chances of culminating in failure are limited. Scare of defeat and failure has always undermined the success. People never opt for the untried course of action, that may be in any capacity. Things turn out difficult, spirits tremble and mind goes wild. But if one is bold enough to let it go and is not encompassed by fear, Impossible will turn out into success. As someone has rightly said
" If there is will, there is a way "

First sentence should define the maxim in simple and clear words....
Good attempt.

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"Mind is everthing;what you think,you become". Budhha

1)The topic should have been briefly explained in the first one or two sentences.
2)There are some grammatical errors in some places but the good expressions and sublime organization has made it a good peace of writing.


well attempt!!!!!!!!!