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[sasas098]

A CONTENTED MIND IS A BLESSING KIND

A man who have vast knowledge and so many ideas in his mind and his creativity surrounds all his mind then surely it is a blessing of God on him. As Hazrat Ali (R.A) said that, "If i start writing on the word Al-Hamd of Surah Al Fatiha then hundred camels can take the load of those books", it explains the richness of knowledge which Hazrat Ali (R.A) possessed.
Pakistan is also the outcome of some rich contented minds. Allama Iqbal gave the idea of two nations, Quaid Azam also demanded a separate homeland for the muslims in the name of Pakistan, on the basis of ideas which emerged in his mind, Chaudhary Rehmat Ali suggested the name of Pakistan for the muslim's independent state. These all were based on the ideas and thoughts of the fertile and nourished minds.
Today, we also want the fertility and nourishment of mind to exterminate all those things in our system, who are harming the very basis of our motherland. The prosperity of our country is also hidden in this thing that we can persuade our youth to seek knowledge and can fill their minds with useful ideas and thoughts and can participate to make prosper this country.

[holy sinner]

The way you proceed looks that Pak affair is your greatest intrest.
As far as this topic is concerned it explores the philosophies of soul in this world of restlessness.
Samuel Jhonson says:
"In this world every body want to be somebody else". Contented mind gives us satisfaction that leads to peaceful existence in this world. It also developes thankfullness to God,etc.
hope this will prove helpfull to you

[hafeezullah solangi]

Originally Posted by sasas098

A CONTENTED MIND IS A BLESSING KIND

A man who have vast knowledge and so many ideas in his mind and his creativity surrounds all his mind then surely it is a blessing of God on him. As Hazrat Ali (R.A) said that, "If i start writing on the word Al-Hamd of Surah Al Fatiha then hundred camels can take the load of those books", it explains the richness of knowledge which Hazrat Ali (R.A) possessed.
Pakistan is also the outcome of some rich contented minds. Allama Iqbal gave the idea of two nations, Quaid Azam also demanded a separate homeland for the muslims in the name of Pakistan, on the basis of ideas which emerged in his mind, Chaudhary Rehmat Ali suggested the name of Pakistan for the muslim's independent state. These all were based on the ideas and thoughts of the fertile and nourished minds.
Today, we also want the fertility and nourishment of mind to exterminate all those things in our system, who are harming the very basis of our motherland. The prosperity of our country is also hidden in this thing that we can persuade our youth to seek knowledge and can fill their minds with useful ideas and thoughts and can participate to make prosper this country.

dear,u have made a good effort to expand your thought in surrounding of the topic that u approached:neither gramatical error,nor any confilct of idias,excep a little misunderstanding about the topic.Try to Read between the lines:the contended mind demands something like peace,tolerance,patience and satisfication not the power or knowlege of power.you should deal with spirtual or psychological character of mind,instead temporal or physical.hope,ur next effort will be the best.