matlab ap ki angrezi aisi gayi guzri b nae,it is called "kasr e nafsi":D
Next please.

buhut gayi guzri hai, kasr-e-nafsi nahin haqeeqat hai ke main "Sindhi" school main parha hua hoon, aur maine kabhi kisi se angrezi seekhi nahin, sirf CSS ke liye article parhte parhte jo aayi hai wohi hai :(. Mujhe angrezi grammer kaa to qatai nahin pata, andaza hota bhi hai to kabhi yaqeen nahin hota ke sahi hai yaa nahin :(.

Khair

When public transport is better developed, there will no longer so many cars driving people to work.

The subject of my paper is about air pollution.

The princess's father was a good man and who was kind

A morality play is where the characters represent virtue and vices.

A square is whe all four sides are the same length.

(CSS 1996)

kahani dard bhari hai ap ki:cry lekin jo agay barhnay k liye himmat karen wo e tou hain kamyaab:king..kher..


[QUOTE]The subject of my paper is about air pollution.[/QUOTE]
The [B]topic[/B] of my paper is about air pollution.

[QUOTE]The princess's father was a good man and who was kind[/QUOTE]
The princess's father was [B]a good and kind man[/B].

[QUOTE]A morality play is where the characters represent virtue and vices.[/QUOTE]
A morality play is where the characters represent [B]virtues[/B] and vices.

[QUOTE]A square is whe all four sides are the same length.[/QUOTE]
A square is whe(when or where?) all four sides are [B]of[/B] the same length

Great, here goes how I would have attempted:


The subject of my paper is [B](about)[/B] air pollution

The princess's father was a good man [B](and)[/B] who was kind

A morality play is where the characters represent virtues and vices.

(typo in the last, the question was "A square is when all four sides are the same length".)
A square is when all four sides have the same length.

(what would be my score:( ).

[QUOTE=mhmmdkashif;269473]Great, here goes how I would have attempted:


The subject of my paper is [B](about)[/B] air pollution

The princess's father was a good man [B](and)[/B] who was kind

A morality play is where the characters represent virtues and vices.

(typo in the last, the question was "A square is when all four sides are the same length".)
A square is when all four sides have the same length.

(what would be my score:( ).[/QUOTE]

score batatay hue mujh pe riqqat taari ho gayi hai:cry.
2/4:clap
1st one dekh k I'm confused.shayed mera ghalat ho:(
Next please

:confused: 2/4. Allah hee hafiz hai mere papers main

Evil and suffering has always troubled man.

Why does such disturbing things exist.

Neither her cousins nor her aunt were at home.

Neither Tariq nor Khalid are worthy of her (:laughing)

The first fleet of cars were made of copper.

To be honest, lies must never be told.

(remaining ones from CSS 1996)

[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;269464]

The [B]topic[/B] of my paper is about air pollution.

[/QUOTE]

[B]The subject of my paper is air pollution.[/B]

Isn't it right??

Evil and suffering [B]have[/B] always troubled man

Why [B]do[/B] such disturbing things exist[B]?[/B]

Neither her cousins nor her aunt [B]was[/B] at home.

Neither Tariq nor Khalid [B]is [/B]worthy of her (:laughing)

The first fleet of cars [B]was[/B] made of copper.

To be honest, lies [B]never[/B] be told.
[QUOTE]
(remaining ones from CSS 1996)[/QUOTE]
1996 mein tou logon ne top ker lia ho ga:D:ohmy:

@Arain I'm not sure about that one:(

[QUOTE=mhmmdkashif;269446]
The vast extent of steppes of Central Asia is enormous.
Nobody didn't ought to lose their way so easy in a small town.
correct those[/QUOTE]

The steppes of Central Asia is vast/enormous.
Nobody ought not lose their way so easily in a small town.

[QUOTE=Eager;269787]The steppes of Central Asia is vast/enormous.
Nobody ought not lose their way so easily in a small town.[/QUOTE]

Eager don't you think excluding two words simultaneously would seem inappropriate?

2nd walay mein Nobody(negative) don't need "not"(another negative).
Kindly give reasons