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1.A ten feet long snake made people run here and there
2.We are going to the concert, and so they are.
3.Enclosed with this letter was a signed Affidavit and a carbon copy of his
request to our main office.
4.Fear from God.
5.Pakistan has and will support the Kashmiris.
6.He has come yesterday.
7.Arshad's down fall was due to nothing else than pride.
8.Do not avoid to consult a doctor.

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1.A ten feet long snake made people run here and there
2.We are going to the concert, and so they are.
3.Enclosed with this letter was a signed Affidavit and a carbon copy of his
request to our main office.
4.Fear from God.
5.Pakistan has and will support the Kashmiris.
6.He has come yesterday.
7.Arshad's down fall was due to nothing else than pride.
8.Do not avoid to consult a doctor.

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1.A ten foot long snake made people run here and there.
2.We are going to the concert, and so are they.
3.No Idea - - - - - - Kindly correct it
4.Fear God. (No preposition)
5.Pakistan has supported and will support the Kashmiris.
6.He came yesterday.
7.Arshad's down fall was due to nothing else but pride.
8.Do not avoid consulting a doctor.
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1.A ten foot long snake made people run here and there.
2.We are going to the concert, and so are they.
3.No Idea - - - - - - Kindly correct it
4.Fear God. (No preposition)
5.Pakistan has supported and will support the Kashmiris.
6.He came yesterday.
7.Arshad's down fall was due to nothing else but pride.
8.Do not avoid consulting a doctor.
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3. Enclosed with this letter were a sign affidavit and a carbon copy of his request to our main office.
7.Arshad's down fall was because of nothing else other than pride.
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4.Fear from God.

what if u write here "fear of God"
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6.He came yesterday.

he had come yesterday......

and

aslam downfall was due to nothing but pride ....

dear members kindly comment and make me correct if i am wrong.
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1.A ten foot long snake made people run here and there
2.We are going to the concert, and so are they?
3.Enclosed this letter was a signed Affidavit and a carbon copy of his
request to our main office.
4.Fear of God.
5.Pakistan has supported and will support the Kashmiris.
6.He came yesterday.
7.Arshad's downfall was due to nothing else other than pride.
8.Do not avoid to consult with a doctor.
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He had come yesterday.



seniors plz cooect me with explanations.
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1.A ten foot long snake made people run here and there
2.We are going to the concert, and so are they?
3.Enclosed this letter was a signed Affidavit and a carbon copy of his
request to our main office.
4.Fear of God.
5.Pakistan has supported and will support the Kashmiris.
6.He came yesterday.
7.Arshad's downfall was due to nothing else other than pride.
8.Do not avoid to consult with a doctor.
2.We are going to the concert,and so are they. (no question mark)
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He had come yesterday.



seniors plz cooect me with explanations.
simple past tense is used for those events which had completed in the past. like " i passed my ma exams last year" I saw a movie yesterday.
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1.A ten foot long snake made people run here and there
2.We are going to the concert, and so are they?
3.Enclosed this letter was a signed Affidavit and a carbon copy of his
request to our main office.
4.Fear of God.
5.Pakistan has supported and will support the Kashmiris.
6.He came yesterday.
7.Arshad's downfall was due to nothing else other than pride.
8.Do not avoid to consult with a doctor.
1. Its FEET not foot
2. No comma before and
3.Enclosed with
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is it correct to say that

"we are going to the concert, so they are"
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