sentence correction

[ssara]

“Kids for sale”, a helpless needy mother with tears in her eyes holding a banner along the busy roadside.


Please correct this sentences.

Thanks.........

[Ammasiub]

A helpless mother was holding a banner "kids for sale" along busy roadside with tears in her eyes.

[ssara]

Originally Posted by Ammasiub

A helpless mother was holding a banner "kids for sale" along busy roadside with tears in her eyes.

It is not a past tense....

[Muhammad Baqa Qazi]

if you know this than share it....
In my opinion it is correct...

[sapphireg]

Originally Posted by ssara

“Kids for sale”, a helpless needy mother with tears in her eyes holding a banner along the busy roadside.


Please correct this sentences.

Thanks.........

According to my knowledge 'A helpless needy mother with tear in her eyes hold a banner "kids for sale"along the busy roadside.wesay Ammaisub wala b theek hey.I am not sure about mine it may be wrong.

[sapphireg]

Plz check it out.
1.The poor is neglected.
2.One of the player is injured.
3.I am senior than him in service.
4.I read the same book which you purchased.
5.Lahore a is worth-seeing city.
6.He has any book.
7.None of the boys were naughty.
8.His hairs are brown.
9.The lion attacked at him.
10.She is more cleverer than he.
Answers
1.The poor are neglected.
2.one player is injured or one player got injury.
3.I am senior then him in service.
4. I read the same book which you bought.
5.?
6.He has many books.
7.None of the boy was naughty.
8.His hair is brown or his hair are brown.
9.The lion attacked him.
10.she is more clever than him.

[Raja Bahar]

2.One of the player is injured.
2.one player is injured or one player got injury.(Incorrect

The correct sentence will be;
One of the players is injured.

[Raja Bahar]

3.I am senior than him in service.
3.I am senior then him in service.

I think it will be;
I am senior to him in service.

[Raja Bahar]

5.Lahore a is worth-seeing city.
Lahore is a worth-seeing city.

[Raja Bahar]

6.He has any book.
6.He has many books.

The correction will be;
Has he any book?