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Passage:

Besant describing the middle class of the 9th century wrote " In the first place it was for more a class apart. "In no sense did it belong to society. Men in professions of any kind (except in the Army and Navy) could only belong to society by right of birth and family connections; men in trade—bankers were still accounted tradesmen—could not possibly belong to society. That is to say, if they went to live in the country they were not called upon by the county families and in the town they were not admitted by the men into their clubs, or by ladies into their houses… The middle class knew its own place, respected itself, made its own society for itself, and cheerfully accorded to rank the deference due."

Since then, however, the life of the middle classes had undergone great changes as their numbers had swelled and their influence had increased.

Their already well –developed consciousness of their own importance had deepened. More critical than they had been in the past of certain aspects of aristocratic life, they wee also more concerned with the plight of the poor and the importance of their own values of society, thrift, hand work, piety and respectability thrift, hand work, piety and respectability as examples of ideal behavior for the guidance of the lower orders. Above all they were respectable. There were divergences of opinion as to what exactly was respectable and what was not. There were, nevertheless, certain conventions, which were universally recognized: wild and drunker behaviors were certainly not respectable, nor were godlessness or avert promiscuity, not an ill-ordered home life, unconventional manners, self-indulgence or flamboyant clothes and personal adornments.


Precis:

Title: The Emergence of Middle Class

As per the writer, in the early times, middle class was allienated from the society. One could only belong to them (society) if (s)he was from the sacred professions or from their family. Middle class was not welcomed in the society. They recognized their place and originated their own society. Soon, they emerged in the society and showed their influence and importance. They became the light of guidance , due to their values of life, for the adherents of lower class. Moreover, middle class was respected just on the differentiation of good and ill deeds of their people.

Total Passage words: 282
Precis Words: 97

Suggested Title:
1) The Rise of Middle Class in 9th Century
2) The Place of Middle Class in the Society