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Make a precis of the following passage and give it a suitable title


Any one who trains animals recognize that human and animal perceptual capacities are different. For most humans, .seeing is believing, although we do occasionally brood about whether we can believe our eyes. The other senses are largely ancillary; most of usdo not know how we might go about either doubting or believing our noses. But for dogs, scenting is believing. A dog's nose is to ours as the wrinkled surface of our complex brain is to the surface of an egg. A dog who did comparative psychology might easily worry about our consciousness or lack thereof, just as we worry about the consciousness of a squid.
We who take sight for granted can draw pictures of scent, but we have no language for doing it the other way about, no way to represent something visually familiar by means of actual scent. Most humans cannot know, with their limited noses, what they can imagine about being deaf, blind; mute or paralyzed. The sighted can, for example, speak of a blind person as "In the darkness", but there is no corollary expression for what it is that we are in relationship to scent. If we tried to coin words, we might come up with something like "scent-blind". But what would it mean? It couldn't have the sort of meaning that "colour - blind", and "tone –deaf” do because most of us have experienced what "tone" and "colour" mean in those expressions, but we don't know what "scent" means in the expression "scent-blind". Scent for may of us can be only a theoretical, technical expression that we use because our grammar requires that we have a noun to go in the sentences we are prompted to utter about animals tracking. We don’t have sense of scent. What we do have is a sense of smell-for food and skunks and a number of things we call chemicals.
So if my dog and I are sitting on the terrace, admiring the view, we inhabit World with radically different principles of phenomenology. Say that the wind is to our backs. Our world lies al! Before us, within a 180 degree angle. The dog's……….well wedon't know, do we?
He sees roughly the same things that Isee but he believes the scents of the garden behind us. He marks the path of the black - and -white cat as she moves among the roses in search of the bits of chicken sandwich I let fall as 1 walked from the house to our picnic spot. 1 can show that the dog is alert to the kitty, but not how for my picture -making modes of thought too easily supply falsifyingly literal representations of the cat and the garden and their modes of being hidden from or revealed to me.

Ans: Difference between Human and Dogs is of smell sensation, because dog led trust on his smell sensation and his smell sensation made him sharp and correct but human believes on his eyes that made cause of misguidance. Dog's smell sensation locates exactly than human.

Title of Precis: "Dog's smell sense is sharper than Humans"

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Ans: Difference between Human and Dogs is of smell sensation, because dog led trust on his smell sensation and his smell sensation made him sharp and correct but human believes on his eyes that made cause of misguidance. Dog's smell sensation locates exactly than human.

Title of Precis: "Dog's smell sense is sharper than Humans"
dear ur precis is too short i guess.n there are gramatical mistakes too.e.g in ur last sentence we dont do comparison f two things this way.you could better had said something like,its not perfect just pointing out ur error, "Dogs' sences are more sharper than those of human's"....
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thanks dear for response and correction but help me further in this regard, how i may make my mistakes correct.

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i hope it sound friendly.but dear i do think u need some tutor.are u taking exam this year?if yes then put u maximum effort into it.no need to be disappointed.ur problem is english grammer.read some good books n practice correction f errors.it helped me i hope it ll assisst u too.Regards
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sorry bro u hv not made a good attempt.try to improve ur ideas and comprehending approach otherwise precis like this may not bode more than a sorry figure.
take the criticism positive and show the guts of a hyderabadi munda.....hit the road brothercome on turn the corner....
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Dear, i am very thankful of your response, i will inshahallah improve soon by removing mistakes regarding this. and dear Kawish, i am not going to appear in CSS in this year. but help me further in this regard.

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Dear, i am very thankful of your response, i will inshahallah improve soon by removing mistakes regarding this. and dear Kawish, i am not going to appear in CSS in this year. but help me further in this regard.

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aoa Azhar u r always welcome.i ll be glad if can be of any help.just keep on posting ur querries.Regards
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aoa Azhar u r always welcome.i ll be glad if can be of any help.just keep on posting ur querries.Regards
I will send soon my other precis, then your help will be needed.

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