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Syeda Bukhari · #1 Friday, February 22, 2013

2007
The author of a work of imagination is trying to effect us wholly, as human beings, whether he knows it or not; and we are affected by it, as human beings, whether we intend to be or not. I suppose that everything we eat has some effect upon us than merely the pleasure of taste and mastication; it affects us during the process of assimilation and digestion; and I believe that exactly the same is true of any thing we read.The fact that what we read does not concern merely something called our literary taste, but that it affects directly, though only amongst many other influences , the whole of what we are, is best elicited , I think, by a conscientious examination of the history of our individual literary education. Consider the adolescent reading of any person with some literary sensibility. Everyone, I believe, who is at all sensible to the seductions of poetry, can remember some moment in youth when he or she was completely carried away by the work of one poet. Very likely he was carried away by several poets, one after the other. The reason for this passing infatuation is not merely that our sensibility to poetry is keener in adolescence than in maturity. What happens is a kind of inundation, or invasion of the undeveloped personality, the empty (swept and garnished) room, by the stronger personality of the poet. The same thing may happen at a later age to persons who have not done much reading. One author takes complete possession of us for a time; then another, and finally they begin to affect each other in our mind. We weigh one against another; we see that each has qualities absent from others, and qualities incompatible with the qualities of others: we begin to be, in fact, critical: and it is our growing critical power which protects us from excessive possession by anyone literary personality. The good critic- and we should all try to critics, and not leave criticism to the fellows who write reviews in the papers- is the man who, to a keen and abiding sensibility, joins wide and increasingly discriminating. Wide reading is not valuable as a kind of hoarding, and the accumulation of knowledge or what sometimes is meant by the term ‘a well-stocked mind.’ It is valuable because in the process of being affected by one powerful personality after another, we cease to be dominated by anyone, or by any small number. The very different views of life, cohabiting in our minds, affect each other, and our own personality asserts itself and gives each a place in some arrangement peculiar to our self.

Precise:
Human beings are affected by the literature they read. Literature influences the thoughts and consequently the personality of the reader. A person gets more influenced when his thoughts are immature. The influence of author on personality is not the factor of age but the quantity of reading. As reading increases we develop our thoughts and no more get under the influence of the author instead began to analyze them critically. We being the good critics no more depend on the views of others. With vast reading maturity of thoughts occurs we don't get carried away by the creative writings rather we develop our own perception and believe it well.

Title:
The effect of literation on personality

ruman wajid · #2 Monday, February 25, 2013

title;myth of literature

Prince Roghani · #3 Thursday, March 14, 2013

punctuation should be heeded by u , keep ur sentences short and avoid repeatition such as u have done on the word (influence). anyways , it's a satisfactory attempt, much more improvment needed.

Regards ...........
Roghani

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