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All humans are born equal in dignity and rights but hTHey are in shackles everywhere.
OUTLINE

INTRODUCTION
Equality of mankind
1 Equal rights must be given
i BASIC RIGHTS
ii Right of expression
iii Right of security
vi Right of love and affection
Islamic teachings about human equality
Human dignity
i Each life is sacred
ii Man should be respected for sake of mankind
Why it is necessary to put shackles
I Freedom breeds responsibility
ii Man is evil by nature
Shackles in human life
i Society
ii religion
iii Family
To what extent freedom is necessary and to what extent shackles will work
Conclusion
Freedom is a good master but bad servant.Perks and privileges of freedom are many.It not only ensure basic human rights but also give human dignity its due place.The advocates of freedom have raised the slogan of food shelter and clothing for each individual without any distinction of color, class and creed.They further emphasize that right love and affection ,security of life and property have their worth in human life.Bur with rights come responsibilities.Freedom, if goes unchecked breed anarchy and chaos. When freedom of conflicting groups clash result are horrible.Thus, it is necessary to put some check on freedom.Thus law religion and society come forward to put unbridled freedom in shackles.Hence it is right to say A man is born free but from everywhere in chains.

Man is born free but found in chains everywhere.