Seniors have your say Critically on my Outline "Great nations win without fighting"

[Tahir Nabi]

Great Nations Win without Fighting
Outline
A. Thesis Statement.
B. What is a nation?
C. How a Nation becomes great?
D. Nations which lost form fighting.
a. Napoleonic France
b. Hitler’s Germany
c. Russia as USSR
d. USA in Iraq and Afghanistan
e. North Korea Vs South Korea
E. Nations which won without Fighting.
a. China’s epitome: Rise of Economic red Giant
b. Japan’s renaissance after the Hiroshima and Nagasaki catastrophe
c. Europe after the Bloodshed and disastrous World Wars
d. Asian Tigers and ASEAN
e. USA-Iran’s glorious Nuclear Deal
F. How great nations win without Fighting.
a. Avoiding hostile and belligerent attitude; Keeping Sovereign, Peaceful and Harmonious FP.
b. Economic regionalism and Globalization, Holistic infrastructural growth and Inclusive institutional policies.
c. “Great Nations fore mostly seeks to fight in classrooms of Universities”.
d. Political and Public stable government; rule of People and Acme of Governance by achieving MGDs and SDGs.
e. Dialogue only way forward and best approach to mitigate and curb any impasse, gridlock, bone of contention and war (Civil or conventional).
f. Freedom of Speech, pluralistic society, secured human rights and Gender equality.
g. Last but not least a Deterrent security policy, Minimum yet comprehensive defence capability; Bulwark of Deterrence.
G. Islamic Teachings and Prophet Muhammad’s role as Peacemaker.
a. Islamic concept of welfare (Great) state.
b. Conquest of Makkah: Bloodless Conquest in the World’s History
c. Treaty of Hadiyba: epochal epitome of Diplomacy of a Great nation
H. How Pakistan can become Great Nation.
a. Balancing the odds of Security and Welfare state.
b. Facing the menace of Terrorism with dialogue as first priority and force as last.
c. Peaceful and non-confronted relations with neighbours including India.
d. Exploiting the Issue of Kashmir diplomatically, morally and politically only, at UN and other IOs.
e. Acme of Governance, Inclusive Institution, Exports-based Economy.
f. Completing and achieving MDG of Education, health, Socio-political Development.


Conclusion.

[Meeshak]

Very Good Effort. However, you should also assert why great nation should not drive into war and the consequences for such reckless driving. Additionally, also mention what is need of an hour at global dimension. Don't forget to lay your emphasis on the word 'win' and elaborate the context in which it should be analysed. Rest is very comprehensive and to the point. Keep it up.

[Tahir Nabi]

Originally Posted by Meeshak

Very Good Effort. However, you should also assert why great nation should not drive into war and the consequences for such reckless driving. Additionally, also mention what is need of an hour at global dimension. Don't forget to lay your emphasis on the word 'win' and elaborate the context in which it should be analysed. Rest is very comprehensive and to the point. Keep it up.

thanks for your kind words of compliment and suggestion. First, i have tried to put that suggestive theme of your's in my paragraph. In how nation becomes great; i have contextualize this theme vividly and briefly that why and how a nation should avoid this predicament of war. Second, your Global dimension point is worth to add in. Third, Actually i have written this whole essay and eventually i have explained this whole epochal episode of "Win" in many paragraphs; like in thesis statement, starting paragraphs and then in How nations can win without fighting.

[Monk]

Originally Posted by Tahir Nabi

Great Nations Win without Fighting

Outline

A.Thesis Statement.

B.What is a nation?

C.How a Nation becomes great?

D.Nations which lost form fighting.

a.Napoleonic France

b.Hitler’s Germany

c.Russia as USSR

d.USA in Iraq and Afghanistan

e.North Korea Vs South Korea

E.Nations which won without Fighting.

a.China’s epitome: Rise of Economic red Giant

b.Japan’s renaissance after the Hiroshima and Nagasaki catastrophe

c.Europe after the Bloodshed and disastrous World Wars

d.Asian Tigers and ASEAN

e.USA-Iran’s glorious Nuclear Deal

F.How great nations win without Fighting.

a.Avoiding hostile and belligerent attitude; Keeping Sovereign, Peaceful and Harmonious FP.

b.Economic regionalism and Globalization, Holistic infrastructural growth and Inclusive institutional policies.

c.“Great Nations fore mostly seeks to fight in classrooms of Universities”.

d.Political and Public stable government; rule of People and Acme of Governance by achieving MGDs and SDGs.

e.Dialogue only way forward and best approach to mitigate and curb any impasse, gridlock, bone of contention and war (Civil or conventional).

f.Freedom of Speech, pluralistic society, secured human rights and Gender equality.

g.Last but not least a Deterrent security policy, Minimum yet comprehensive defence capability; Bulwark of Deterrence.

G.Islamic Teachings and Prophet Muhammad’s role as Peacemaker.

a.Islamic concept of welfare (Great) state.

b.Conquest of Makkah: Bloodless Conquest in the World’s History

c.Treaty of Hadiyba: epochal epitome of Diplomacy of a Great nation

H.How Pakistan can become Great Nation.

a.Balancing the odds of Security and Welfare state.

b.Facing the menace of Terrorism with dialogue as first priority and force as last.

c.Peaceful and non-confronted relations with neighbours including India.

d.Exploiting the Issue of Kashmir diplomatically, morally and politically only, at UN and other IOs.

e.Acme of Governance, Inclusive Institution, Exports-based Economy.

f.Completing and achieving MDG of Education, health, Socio-political Development.





Conclusion.

Please discard ' How Nations become great ' and include 'Nations who rejected this philosophy and learned this lesson hard way'

[Tahir Nabi]

Originally Posted by Monk

Please discard ' How Nations become great ' and include 'Nations who rejected this philosophy and learned this lesson hard way'

Any reason for that brother. In how a nation becomes great? i have mentioned the all desideratum for any nation to become great and i think that is what your point is in your suggestive phrase. and what about other portion of outline ? have your comments on it.

[Monk]

Originally Posted by Tahir Nabi

Any reason for that brother. In how a nation becomes great? i have mentioned the all desideratum for any nation to become great and i think that is what your point is in your suggestive phrase. and what about other portion of outline ? have your comments on it.

Examiner didn't ask about how nations become great. He simple stated that Great Nations win without fighting

[Tahir Nabi]

Originally Posted by Monk

Examiner didn't ask about how nations become great. He simple stated that Great Nations win without fighting

what about the other portion of outline. is that is relevant and accurate ?

[Monk]

Originally Posted by Tahir Nabi

what about the other portion of outline. is that is relevant and accurate ?

Almost

[Demonstrative]

Good attempt. Here is my take on few things:

Focus a bit on the dark and desolate side of wars; how wars obviate nations from attaining acme by diverting their intellectual and financial capital, sapping the citizenry of its vim etc should be included.

Aren't your points kind of verbose or is it something wrong with the punctuation? That said, I am sure you can rely more on your repository of adjectives and less on jargons and relatively obscure terms (economic regionalism etc). My observation is that a good essay is usually devoid of jargons and is inundated with flowery expression.

Last but not the least, I admire your use of adjectives in the outline for this could give you an edge over those who write prosaic lines.

[Tahir Nabi]

Originally Posted by Demonstrative

Good attempt. Here is my take on few things:

Focus a bit on the dark and desolate side of wars; how wars obviate nations from attaining acme by diverting their intellectual and financial capital, sapping the citizenry of its vim etc should be included.

Aren't your points kind of verbose or is it something wrong with the punctuation? That said, I am sure you can rely more on your repository of adjectives and less on jargons and relatively obscure terms (economic regionalism etc). My observation is that a good essay is usually devoid of jargons and is inundated with flowery expression.

Last but not the least, I admire your use of adjectives in the outline for this could give you an edge over those who write prosaic lines.

Thanks dear for your kind and constructive critic. yes i am working on the punctuation as i haven't full grip on it expect using comma and semi colon. moreover i guess Economic regionalism is not a vague term but it is widely used in geopolitics as it implies regional economic integration. albeit you are right essay must be free from verbose and jargon. will surely give a eye at them.