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Sharp outline Arsalan - that was backed by evidence and facts. Excellent. I just learned how such a naive sounding topic can be invigorated with life.

Beautiful.
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I think you're talking about too many things here. You spread your essay thin. If it were focused it could've done the trick. Your outline shows that you're no short of ideas but were perhaps oversupplied that day.
then how i could be focussed? with all these ideas mujhe kia nahi likhna chaye tha?
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E.g. WWs were not related to the kinds of abuses brought in by the Afghan War (WOT)... A general war is very different from this stupid suicidal exercise ensuring terror feeds on terror with no state directly taking responsibility...

Moreover, it is somewhat convoluted. It doesn't neatly guide the reader through a downward slope that ends in destination. It's too hilly for smooth sailing.

Nevertheless I think it's a good effort with some sophisticated arguments : )
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Arsalan, how much did you score in essay? And also please share with us how much time did you allocate to making the outline... And do you do it on a rough paper first?
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E.g. WWs were not related to the kinds of abuses brought in by the Afghan War (WOT)... A general war is very different from this stupid suicidal exercise ensuring terror feeds on terror with no state directly taking responsibility...

Moreover, it is somewhat convoluted. It doesn't neatly guide the reader through a downward slope that ends in destination. It's too hilly for smooth sailing.

Nevertheless I think it's a good effort with some sophisticated arguments : )
thankyou soo much for your valuable views, seek your guidance in future as well regarding essays
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Do check mail. I will email to you some stuff regarding essay.
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So what is it respected fellows? Do we have to tell the examiner what he already knows or something exotic will make it a compulsion to give passing marks? My question might seem stupid but it is still relevant.
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Something exotic but not in a very exotic way.
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True that.
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Is there any way of knowing that how many students actually passed the essay paper? This doesn't imply clearing the whole css exams. I mean apart from 379 acing candidates, how many more have passed the essay exam?
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