I tried to write essay on some topics, here is the outline for one. please give your valuable feedback and suggestions to improve it.


Outline:
1) What is a Nation?
2) Factors on which great nations depend
a) nationalism
b) Leadership
c) culture
d) education
e) Hard work
f) Resources
g) Strategies and policies
3) What do we mean by winning
a) Economical win
b) Cultural win
c) Power
4) Revolution to win
5) Example of China and Japan
6) God help those who help themselves
7) Conclusion


Positive advice would be highly appreciated

Brother the outline is ABC as essay is............... ...... Intro. Great nations win without fighting how when why and where? 1 know how many beans make five. 1 through intelligence. 2 foresightedness 2 bring home the beacon. Through courage and determination. Discipline and devoted. 3 don't cry over split milk. 1 with no regret 2 with remorse. 4 know what bare bones are of this world to win without fighting. 1 tactful not deceptive 2 moderate not mean. Conclusion