Please check my outline of the topic "Not economy by politics is key to success" and comment.

*Introduction

*What is politics?

*Relationship between economy and politics

*Some examples of developed countries owing to political stability

*How politics ensures success?
•Politics strengthens democracy
•Political stability brings foreign direct investment (FDI)
•There is no space for feudalism
•Closes doors of military intervention
•Policies are made in the best interest of the country
•Keeps check on terrorism
•Ensures freedom of media
•Builds social infrastructure

*Why politics in Pakistan failed to achieve substantial sucess?
•Presence of avaricious and incompetent political leadership
•Frequent military interventions
•Persistent Growth of feudalism ever since independence
•Rampant Corruption in the name of democracy
•Absence of strong and effective sytem of accountability
•Terrorism acting as an impediment to the political activity

*How Pakistan can achieve success in politics?
•Educating people
•Strengthening democracy
•Closing doors of military intervention
•Eliminating corruption
•Ensuring the rule of law
•Abolishing feudalism
•Creating employment opportunities
•Establishing supremacy of law

*Conclusion

Not only economy but politics is better key to success

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The outline is a good one, indeed. Shall I ask which book or books are you two consulting to understand structure of essays? And Miss Durya, are you going to take CE 2017?

Although your begnining is pretty good, in the end you you are detracted from the topic. I attempted same topic in CE~13 & got 53 score. Mine was a bit different. However, everyone has his own way. Good luck and keep working hard.

Kindly share your outline for the topic. Thanks in advance.