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[QUOTE=waqarabbasi;915247]We have to learn to be our own best friends because we have fallen too easily into trap to be our enemies.
Thesis statement
Success of humanity is determined by the level of its self friendship. Disasters have been invited by none but by humanity’s enmity against its own self.
A. Self- friendship determines success
B. Humanity suffers because it becomes its own enemy
1. Security and armaments
2. Green revolution and health hazards
3. Industrialization and challenged existence of life on earth
4. Nuclear power and endangered peace
C. Friendly approach towards itself can save humanity
1. End of insecurity and perpetual peace
2. Universal efforts to save the life on earth
There were two more headings which I can’t recall
3……………………………………..
4………………………………………..
D. Humanity is a victim of its own enmity
E. Salvation lies in being our own friend
Conclusion
Details; my outline consumed two pages and the essay took 16 pages.
It was connected and coherent but I have done one blunder I wrote the word ‘enemity’ instead of enmity.
Please give your opinion about essay, marks , pass, fail ,whatever you feel; introduction and conclusion both were solid .one thing more which I did wrong as writing own self as ‘ownself’[/QUOTE]
No clarity

[QUOTE=zealot;915882]No clarity[/QUOTE]
It is clear. See points ABCDE, all are to the point, in a logical sequence, then look at the sub points, almost all points are clearly relevant.

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@Waqar
Your outline seems fine to me. It is crystal clear, coherent and simple. I pray, you pass it this time.
I just saw a superb outline on the same topic somewhere on the forum, however, I feel that it was only based on an individual being.

You said self friendship.i asked how? Is it relevant to topic? Topic asked we need to our own best friend because we fall into enemy trap easily.you said through self friendship how?it not clear Through self evalution making self friendship It is clear .then you said maintaing security how then? It is not clear ..maintaing security via unity through experience or via learning it is clear.remember be smart and simple next time

Bhai yeh clear nai hai....thats my view point

Check my outline .please on this thread

[QUOTE=zealot;915888]You said self friendship.i asked how? Is it relevant to topic? Topic asked we need to our own best friend because we fall into enemy trap easily.you said through self friendship how?it not clear Through self evalution making self friendship It is clear .then you said maintaing security how then? It is not clear ..maintaing security via unity through experience or via learning it is clear.remember be smart and simple next time[/QUOTE]

""Topic asked we need to our own best friend because we fall into enemy trap easily""

Wrong understanding of the topic. It does not say that we fall into enemy trap, rather it says that we become our own enemies.

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This guy is going to get low marks even below urusla

[QUOTE=zealot;915269]We fall in traps of enemy
1being careless rather comitted
2being evasive rather explicit
3being submissive rather smart
4being haughty rather humble
5being coveteous rather contended
Khatam shud[/LIST][/QUOTE]
Is it all that you wrote ?

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