Check this essay introduction and outlines plz

[idrees khan]

"One could only know if a pair of shoes are good by wearing them "

Experiences enrich the very flavor of one's mental outlook by opening new corridors of prosperity , creativity , uniqueness and diversity . Humans can speculate more about the authenticity and worth of diverse things but when they practically give vent to such things it makes the path less tortuous and more defined.
Empires , nations ,civilizations , societies , cultures , religions , ideas , beliefs all have to bear the the phase of experiencing divers things which can not only enhance the life span of such entities but also extol and embellish it to the brim.

Outlines :
Outcomes of Cave's man life and early speculations and experiences
Concept of fire and language
Evalotion Society ,
Tribes system,
Family life ,
Culture ties ,
Civilizations .
Religion and religious experiences

Concept of Monarchy and religion and fruit of experiences
Concept of monarchy and Democracy and experiences
Democracy and
Dictatorship with bitter and sweet experiences
Relam of education :
Science ,
Wave of Nationalism and imperialism and Globalisation and its impacts
Reace superiority leading to lethal wars
Value of experiences:
Wisdom
Shrewdness
Diversity of opinion
Culture enrichment , pluralism
Political consciousness
Social awareness
Solidifying the roots of institutions
The pros and cons of experiences on
National level
Individual level
Conclusion

[Abuturab]

Originally Posted by idrees khan

"One could only know if a pair of shoes are good by wearing them "

Experiences enrich the very flavor of one's mental outlook by opening new corridors of prosperity , creativity , uniqueness and diversity . Humans can speculate more about the authenticity and worth of diverse things but when they practically give vent to such things it makes the path less tortuous and more defined.
Empires , nations ,civilizations , societies , cultures , religions , ideas , beliefs all have to bear the the phase of experiencing divers things which can not only enhance the life span of such entities but also extol and embellish it to the brim.

Outlines :
Outcomes of Cave's man life and early speculations and experiences
Concept of fire and language
Evalotion Society ,
Tribes system,
Family life ,
Culture ties ,
Civilizations .
Religion and religious experiences

Concept of Monarchy and religion and fruit of experiences
Concept of monarchy and Democracy and experiences
Democracy and
Dictatorship with bitter and sweet experiences
Relam of education :
Science ,
Wave of Nationalism and imperialism and Globalisation and its impacts
Reace superiority leading to lethal wars
Value of experiences:
Wisdom
Shrewdness
Diversity of opinion
Culture enrichment , pluralism
Political consciousness
Social awareness
Solidifying the roots of institutions
The pros and cons of experiences on
National level
Individual level
Conclusion

Your points are extremely good but only some are logically connected with the flow of the essay. You started off well with the caveman and his experiences moving onto evolution of society(through experience). I propose you make headings and sub-headings to your outline. Say

A. Evolution of Society through experiences

i. Families, tribes, cultures and civilizations
ii. Religion-aiding societal experiences

B. Evolution of States

i. Monarchy and religion
ii. Monarchy and Democracy
iii. Democracy and dictatorship

C. Sciences: a pseudonym for our five senses.

i. (Pointers you would discuss under your outline "realm of education")

D. Benefits of Experiences

i. Wisdom and Shrewdness.
ii. Diversity of Opinion and pluralism
iii. Political awareness and social consciousness
iv.Solidifying the roots of institutions (did not get what this means)

E. The pros and cons of experiences AT

i)National level
ii)Individual level

F. Conclusion

[idrees khan]

You gave it a nice shape .I will work on the structure of making outlines as it should be like a compact whole in itself.
Thanks for sparing your time brother . It felt nice seeing selfless people aiding and rescuing aspirants' ships in the tumultuous ocean of CSS

[Abuturab]

Originally Posted by idrees khan

You gave it a nice shape .I will work on the structure of making outlines as it should be like a compact whole in itself.
Thanks for sparing your time brother . It felt nice seeing selfless people aiding and rescuing aspirants' ships in the tumultuous ocean of CSS

Haha I know that feel bro getting my outlines analyzed as well :p

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