[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036344]Brother tell me is intro and thesis is one thing or separate[/QUOTE]



Both are separate.

And what should be given first and what is thesis statement?

[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036346]And what should be given first and what is thesis statement?[/QUOTE]



Thesis statement is the core of your essay. You prove that statement with your essay. Thesis should address the topic directly. Always identify the essay question, thesis statement is your answer to that question. In turn, your essay is an expansion of your thesis.

Thesis statement (in my opinion) should come at the end of your introductory paragraph.

And was my approach good?

[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036349]And was my approach good?[/QUOTE]



No.

Brother please elaborate!!!

Help me brother

Now where he went i m stress now🙀

Zealot

You need to get a full-fledged orientation lecture on essay writing, brother. You seem to have only a vague concept about basic things related to essay. On this forum, I can help with small mistakes or issues. I cannot deliver full lectures. Even if I try to write it all briefly for you, you will be confused.


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Thanks for help brother Agay Allah Malik hai

Brother last thing Have you made thesis headings?
After intro

Have you appeared how much marks you got?

Can you share your outline

Please!!!!