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Modernity is an unending project

A-Through discoveries
B-Inventions
C-Experiments
D-oberservations
E-Analysis
F-Innovations
G-Thus to Improve to ensure Reliability
H-To Upgrade to Ensure Stability
I-To modifiy to amend
J-To Bring Change To Make New
K- To Bring Versatility To bring Variation

K-Thus to Prevent
Inactivity
Outdatness
Wastage
Stagnation

CONCLUSION
MODERNITY IS AN UNENDING PROJECT

[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036280]Modernity is an unending project

A-Through discoveries
B-Inventions
C-Experiments
D-oberservations
E-Analysis
F-Innovations
G-Thus to Improve to ensure Reliability
H-To Upgrade to Ensure Stability
I-To modifiy to amend
J-To Bring Change To Make New
K- To Bring Versatility To bring Variation

K-Thus to Prevent
Inactivity
Outdatness
Wastage
Stagnation

CONCLUSION
MODERNITY IS AN UNENDING PROJECT[/QUOTE]Thanks for sharing

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Please comment anyone if it is Correct or Not?😸

[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036292]Please comment anyone if it is Correct or Not?😸[/QUOTE]Its would be good if u can elaborate it

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[QUOTE=zealotx7;1036280]Modernity is an unending project



A-Through discoveries

B-Inventions

C-Experiments

D-oberservations

E-Analysis

F-Innovations

G-Thus to Improve to ensure Reliability

H-To Upgrade to Ensure Stability

I-To modifiy to amend

J-To Bring Change To Make New

K- To Bring Versatility To bring Variation



K-Thus to Prevent

Inactivity

Outdatness

Wastage

Stagnation



CONCLUSION

MODERNITY IS AN UNENDING PROJECT[/QUOTE]



Share your thesis statement for thorough feedback. As far as what you have given here is concerned, it seems to the point but it lacks in detail and begs elaboration. How you expanded these points would decide the fate of your essay.

Brothers i just made an outline yet,

Elaborating each point would be tiresome right now,

Anyway few points i may elaborate

Thesis statement
Modernity is an aspect of life,a Requirement of Time and A system created by God,A universal Truth that cant be denied and on which human existence depend

(I consider it appropriate because i consider modernity isnot a Qoute said in context of any movement )


So how Modernity is an unending project?

A-Observation
Whenever we want to Create something we Observe How?why,Where,When The Particular thing Can be Created

Is its creation can be good or not? What,How,Where and When it would be beneficial and dangerous and what,When,Where it would create an impact,Either Its impact would be good or not,If it would be benefical to greater or smaller extent and This process continued with ages
Example
Today the important medicines made based on Observation of Past scientist and process of Observation in feild of medicine and other feilds continued and unending




B-Inventions
Has been made With the Passage of time and is sole proof that modernity is an unending project as it manifest itself today

The reasons of inventions based on
Need,
Requirement of Situation
And to create room for successors to continue to Justify that modernity is an unending project

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If you have attempted this essay in your exam, I would advise you to be modest in your expectations...


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[QUOTE=PartyPooper;1036339]If you have attempted this essay in your exam, I would advise you to be modest in your expectations...


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Ofcourse brother but i didnot appear🙀

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Brother tell me is intro and thesis is one thing or separate