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Promotion of tourism in Pakistan; opportunities and challenges

1. Introduction
2. What is tourism?
3. Opportunities of tourism in Pakistan
3.1 mountainous regions
3.2 historical places
3.3 cultural diversity
3.4 religious places
3.5 food diversity
3.6 sports as opportunity

4. How opportunities of tourism can help in development of Pakistan
4.1 revival of foreign direct investment
4.2 employment opportunities

5. Challenges toward promotion of tourism in Pakistan
5.1 hard image of Pakistan
5.2 weak infrastructure
5.3 security issues
5.4 weak administrative policies
5.5 economic problems

5 recommendations for promotion of tourism in Pakistan
5.1 use of media to generate soft image of pak
5.2. provision of E.visa's and visa on arrival
5.3 subsidies for tourism industry
5.4 provision of language guides
5.5 efficient utilization of cpec and kartarpur corridor

6. Conclusion.
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Promotion of tourism in Pakistan; opportunities and challenges

1. Introduction
2. What is tourism?
3. Opportunities of tourism in Pakistan
3.1 mountainous regions
3.2 historical places
3.3 cultural diversity
3.4 religious places
3.5 food diversity
3.6 sports as opportunity

4. How opportunities of tourism can help in development of Pakistan
4.1 revival of foreign direct investment
4.2 employment opportunities

5. Challenges toward promotion of tourism in Pakistan
5.1 hard image of Pakistan
5.2 weak infrastructure
5.3 security issues
5.4 weak administrative policies
5.5 economic problems

5 recommendations for promotion of tourism in Pakistan
5.1 use of media to generate soft image of pak
5.2. provision of E.visa's and visa on arrival
5.3 subsidies for tourism industry
5.4 provision of language guides
5.5 efficient utilization of cpec and kartarpur corridor

6. Conclusion.
My opinion:
Your heading 4 is a main heading, but you have shortened it.
May be i am wrong, but your 3rd heading should be: different aspects of tourism in Pakistan
Opportunities due to tourism should be social, political economic, cultural, religious and others, which you have already mentioned in the 4th heading, albeit in a brief manner. Your challenges and recommendations are fine. One more thing we usually use small 'e'like e-visas, e-finance, etc.
Kindly write a thesis statement and introduction to make things clearer. And post it on the currently running thread: Essay CE-2021
I request others to evaluate this outline further.
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