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Dear Senior & Friends,

I have made outlines for Essay " Islam is a Threat to West".
I humbly request all the participants to read outlines carefully then instruct me accordingly, and do pinpoint any mistake made without hesitantly.

"ISLAM IS A THREAT TO WEST"

1. Islam Introduction
2. Islamic History
3. Comparision between Islam and Other Religions
4. The relationship between Islam and Humanity
5. Contribution of Muslims in Science and Technology
6. Islam (Quran) and its Teachings
7. West and their grievances
8. Islam and Grievances
9. The relationship between Extremism and Islam
10. Islam and Terorrism
11. Other religions and Terorrsim
12. Cocept of Jihad
13. Scenario Of Conflicts
14. West conspiracies
15. Differences between Islam and West
• Cultural Differences
• Educational differences
• Judgemental Differences
• Differece of Jurisprudence
16. Dichotomy of Beliefs between Islam and West
17. Muslims’ Beliefs; Threat to West
18. Muslim as Power; Threat to West
19. Mulims Control on Natural Resources; ; Threat to West
20. Muslim Unity; Threat to West
21. Wether differences may be eliminated or would persist generation to generation
22. Conclusion

Note: All the parcipators are requested to evaluate my efforts in making outlines. Please do intruct me if any mistake found. I would always be thankful to you all.
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Dear Zeeshan,
Sorry for late reply.Infact,i made a detailed reply(critical appraisal) to your outline but power breakdown put every thing to hell.now i ve made an outline.Please go through it and then let me know what diffference do u feel.You may disagree with my stance,but one has to go straight to the topic instead of going back into history.You have to make it clear right from the outset which side or view are u going to take.


Islam is a threat to West

Outline

1-The proposition is technically wrong:
It is the Muslims not Islam that the West fears

2-Proponents of the proposition:
a-Prejudiced Western political rulers
e.g America,France,Switzerland etc.
b-Parochial religious scholars and ideologues
e.g. clash of civilization

3-Role of Western media

4-No religion is a threat to anybody

5-Role of Islam(past to present)

6-Wayforward for Muslims(tow-pronged approach)
a-Intra-Muslim approach
b-International approach

7-Epilogue

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Well mate your outline is a bit too long. Try to choose only 11-13 main body headings with roughly 200 words each.
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Dear Senior & Friends,

"ISLAM IS A THREAT TO WEST"

1. Islam Introduction
2. Islamic History
3. Comparision between Islam and Other Religions
4. The relationship between Islam and Humanity
5. Contribution of Muslims in Science and Technology
6. Islam (Quran) and its Teachings
7. West and their grievances
8. Islam and Grievances

9. The relationship between Extremism and Islam
10. Islam and Terorrism
11. Other religions and Terorrsim
12. Cocept of Jihad

13. Scenario Of Conflicts
14. West conspiracies
15. Differences between Islam and West
• Cultural Differences
• Educational differences
• Judgemental Differences
• Differece of Jurisprudence
16. Dichotomy of Beliefs between Islam and West
17. Muslims’ Beliefs; Threat to West
18. Muslim as Power; Threat to West
19. Mulims Control on Natural Resources; ; Threat to West
20. Muslim Unity; Threat to West
21. Wether differences may be eliminated or would persist generation to generation
22. Conclusion
Brother, It is nice outline and enough to fail in essay paper.
Your outline is not relevant and I have bold headings in your outline which are totally irrevelant.
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aoa zeeshan its nice effort but make it a bit more relevant as suggested by the other member.secondaly try to keep ur tone mild,ur indignation is obvious.critically analyising both sides,give some suggestions too.i hope it ll be useful.regards Noor
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Dear Senior & Friends,

I have made outlines for Essay " Islam is a Threat to West".
I humbly request all the participants to read outlines carefully then instruct me accordingly, and do pinpoint any mistake made without hesitantly.

"ISLAM IS A THREAT TO WEST"

1. Islam Introduction
2. Islamic History
3. Comparision between Islam and Other Religions
4. The relationship between Islam and Humanity
5. Contribution of Muslims in Science and Technology
6. Islam (Quran) and its Teachings
7. West and their grievances
8. Islam and Grievances
9. The relationship between Extremism and Islam
10. Islam and Terorrism
11. Other religions and Terorrsim
12. Cocept of Jihad
13. Scenario Of Conflicts
14. West conspiracies
15. Differences between Islam and West
• Cultural Differences
• Educational differences
• Judgemental Differences
• Differece of Jurisprudence
16. Dichotomy of Beliefs between Islam and West
17. Muslims’ Beliefs; Threat to West
18. Muslim as Power; Threat to West
19. Mulims Control on Natural Resources; ; Threat to West
20. Muslim Unity; Threat to West
21. Wether differences may be eliminated or would persist generation to generation
22. Conclusion

Note: All the parcipators are requested to evaluate my efforts in making outlines. Please do intruct me if any mistake found. I would always be thankful to you all.

Check this please....
If am going right?

Yes Islam is a threat to west.

Why:
Arguments:
1. Holy Quran and Sunnah for guidance (for whole life)
2. Unity of Muslims
3. Intelligence of Muslims
4. Islamic teachings and moral values adopted by Muslims are threat also
5. Strong faith and belief of Muslims
6. Bravery of Muslims
7. Ready to die (Shaheed) for right
8. Judicial and Punishment system like punishment for theft, lie, zinnah etc
9. Islamic customs and systems like
10. People are now more towards Islam and started embracing Islam
11. Ideology of Muslins
12. Factor guaranteeing Islam’s onward march is the West’s dependency on the material resources of Arab and Muslim countries
13. science is proving Quran's facts which have already been said in Quran
14. Jihad is a great threat to west: which they have named as “Terrorism & Extremism”
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aoa sumera g not jihad,which is misinterprated by both the muslims n non muslims,but its misintrpratation cn b threat to west.if u r making an outline try to build a positive argument.please comment on my outline regarding nuclear proliferation n disarmament.thnx regards
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@Sumaira and Zeeshan Hyder.

i think that islam is a threat to no one.it is a threat to only one thing,that is, evil.wherever the evil and the devil exist , islam seeks to nip both in the bud.if the west is doing evil,then yes ISLAM is a threat to it.on the following arguments we can assume that yes islam is really a threat to west:

1:-Yes islam is a threat to the West if the latter is bent upon promoting terrorism in the world.

2:-Yes islam is a threat to the USA,if it supports the killing of innocent kashmiri ppl in india.

3:-Islam is a threat to the West if it is involved in collusion with Israel in crushing the innocent homeless and helpless Palestinians.

4:-yes we all the muslims are a threat to the West if the latter is trying to subvert our political systems and seeking to subjugate us and capture our oil resources in Iraq, in Iran, in Central Asia and anywhere in the Muslim world.

5:-yes we all the muslims are the enemies of the West if it is hankering after damaging the growing image of Islam through questionable free western media.

6:-yes Islam is a threat to the west if the west promotes the war on terror and justifies the killing of innumerable Muslims under the cover of that controversial war.

7:-yes Islam is a threat to the west if the agencies like CIA and Black-Water are present in muslim countries with a view of regime-chaging policies and destabilizing the muslim world in order to fish in the troubled waters.

8:-Yes Islam is a threat to the West if the west bans muslims' traditional and culturally sacred dressing in the countries like france and the switzerland.

9:-Yes Islam is a threat to the west if the west views nuclear technology of Pakistan and Iran as a threat to the world peace and overlookes it in case of Israel.

10:-Yes Islam is a threat to the west if these all the evils and animosities continue on the part of the West.

then conclude it.
now i also need some feedback from aal of the viewers.
waiting...

it must be kept in mind that this is an argumentative essay....



@kawish...
everything that serves against the interests of the west is a threat to them (the western countries).
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QUA... Very nice and convincing arguments.. I am impressed!
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Thumbs up very nice effort

wow too good and its impressive yar if i check ur essay on this topic u l definetely get 75+
nice effort keep it up
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