Outline : Accountablity without truth finding commission is un-achievable

[DPO LARKANA]

Dear friends,

Accountablity without truth finding commission is un-achievable.

Outline:

Introduction

-Function of watch dog commities.
-To protect the rights of peopel and their welfare.
-Punish those who are offenders and corrupt.
-keep the system in check and balance.
-pakistan's no one problem
-Menace of corruption
- un-checked and un-punished institutions

Areas of Corruption

1. Postings and Transferres.
2. Recruitment, Selection and Placements.
3. Construction Contracts: Bridges, roads, buildings.
4. Welfare and development funds.
5. Foreign Aid, IMF (Kerry Lugar Bill)

Failure of Watch dog commities
NAB, Audit and Accounts Commission of Pakistan, FIA,
Federal Ombudman etc.

Institutionalised Corruption
-Backbone institutions
-Corruption in Judiciary
-Corruption in Education
-Corruption in Police
-Corruption in Health.
-Corruptin in Wapda, PIA etc.

Recommendations:
1. Severe punishments should be awarded to trangressors regardless of power, status and position.
2. Islamic Punishments.
3. Demotions, Termination, Hanging, Death sentence, and Life Sentence.
4. China Punishing corruption charges Hanging till the death.
5. Watch dog committies should be formed for each department who should directly report to President, Prime Minister of Pakistan, Chief Justice of Pakistan responsible for

Conclussion.


Accountability is a check on the office bearers or responsibilty holders for the welfare and well being of people and nation. Any thing un cheked is fatlly dangerous.

[Faseeh Muhammad]

Outline:

Introduction

-Function of watch dog commities.
-To protect the rights of peopel and their welfare.
-Punish those who are offenders and corrupt.
-keep the system in check and balance.
-pakistan's no one problem
-Menace of corruption
- un-checked and un-punished institutions

This is very abrupt start...In my opinion order should be this..

-pakistan's no one problem
-Menace of corruption
-To protect the rights of peopel and their welfare.
-Function of watch dog commities.
-keep the system in check and balance.
-Punish those who are offenders and corrupt.
- un-checked and un-punished institutions


Areas of Corruption

1. Postings and Transferres.
2. Recruitment, Selection and Placements.
3. Construction Contracts: Bridges, roads, buildings.
4. Welfare and development funds.
5. Foreign Aid, IMF (Kerry Lugar Bill)

This section is OK.

Failure of Watch dog commities
NAB, Audit and Accounts Commission of Pakistan, FIA,
Federal Ombudman etc.

Should come under title "Structure to curtail corruption: Accountability in Pakistan"

Institutionalised Corruption
-Backbone institutions
-Corruption in Judiciary
-Corruption in Education
-Corruption in Police
-Corruption in Health.
-Corruptin in Wapda, PIA etc.

What does back bone institutions mean?? U meant to say the Judiciary, Administration & Legislature??

Recommendations:
1. Severe punishments should be awarded to trangressors regardless of power, status and position.
2. Islamic Punishments.
3. Demotions, Termination, Hanging, Death sentence, and Life Sentence.
4. China Punishing corruption charges Hanging till the death.
5. Watch dog committies should be formed for each department who should directly report to President, Prime Minister of Pakistan, Chief Justice of Pakistan responsible for

6. We can learn from our neighbor countries, we can use the SAARC forum etc etc.
7. To remove the loop-holes in our Law that protect corruption.
8. More transparency to have a watch by independent observers.
9. Role of Ulema to mention the effects of corruption on our life here-after.

[rishzzz]

Originally Posted by SPIDERMAN

Dear friends,

Accountablity without truth finding commission is un-achievable.

Outline:

Introduction

-Function of watch dog commities.
-To protect the rights of peopel and their welfare.
-Punish those who are offenders and corrupt.
-keep the system in check and balance.
-pakistan's no one problem
-Menace of corruption
- un-checked and un-punished institutions

Areas of Corruption

1. Postings and Transferres.
2. Recruitment, Selection and Placements.
3. Construction Contracts: Bridges, roads, buildings.
4. Welfare and development funds.
5. Foreign Aid, IMF (Kerry Lugar Bill)

Failure of Watch dog commities
NAB, Audit and Accounts Commission of Pakistan, FIA,
Federal Ombudman etc.

Institutionalised Corruption
-Backbone institutions
-Corruption in Judiciary
-Corruption in Education
-Corruption in Police
-Corruption in Health.
-Corruptin in Wapda, PIA etc.

Recommendations:
1. Severe punishments should be awarded to trangressors regardless of power, status and position.
2. Islamic Punishments.
3. Demotions, Termination, Hanging, Death sentence, and Life Sentence.
4. China Punishing corruption charges Hanging till the death.
5. Watch dog committies should be formed for each department who should directly report to President, Prime Minister of Pakistan, Chief Justice of Pakistan responsible for

Conclussion.


Accountability is a check on the office bearers or responsibilty holders for the welfare and well being of people and nation. Any thing un cheked is fatlly dangerous.

I have attempted this essay in css-2010

By and large Mr Faseeh has guided you in right direction, follow him or otherwise if you detailed your essay i ll let you know where you stand!!!

[Sudhan]

Without Independent Truth Finding Commission Accountability is unachievable

Introduction
‘It’s not the time for the IMF and World Bank to be lending Money to Pakistan to what Pakistan need is an Accountable Government’
1. Features of Truth Finding Commission.
2. Extent Of Corruption In Pakistan.
• Transparency International Reports.
• Corruption in Major Departments.

3. Promulgation Of PRODA
Promulgation Of EBDO

4. How to bring Transparency
• NAB to be depoliticized.
• Non PCO Judges to be appointed as Chairman.
• NAB to Function Independently.
• Internal Checks and Balances.
• Multiple reporting.
• Decentralization of Discretionary Powers.
• Media as a tool to curb Corruption.
• Independent Judiciary.
• Executive Judiciary And Legislature Check and Balances.
• Making Of Commissions Without Army Influence.
• E-Filling Of Complaint’s.
• National Call Center .


5. Reason of Corruption in Pakistan
• No Checks and Balances.
• Corrupt judiciary.
• Media is in Chains ( If we Chain The press we chain ourselves).
• Feudalism.
• NRO to legalize corruption.
• PCO judges.
• Involvement of Army in Politics.
• Corruption Inherited from India.
6. What Truth Finding Commission can do:
• Accountability will be Possible.
• Economic Development would be possible.
• Proper Revenue Allocation and It’s Usage
• Reduce Inflation.
• Rule Of Law/ No one is Superior to law


7. Conclusion
‘Public is like a Fish Bone it get struck in the Throat’

[Miss_Naqvi]

Originally Posted by Faseeh Muhammad & Spiderman

Outline:

This is very abrupt start...In my opinion order should be this..

-pakistan's no one problem (Its highly vague term showing poor writing expression, It seems you wanted to write about "negligence of Pakistanis about institutionalization in Pakistan')

-Menace of corruption (Itz the problem associated to poor accountability)

-To protect the rights of peopel and their welfare. (It is the function of accountability)

You should not discuss 2 different dimensions of the topic under one head.

-Function of watch dog commities. (Its how independent accountability commssion can be established)

-keep the system in check and balance. (Again its answre to how and the writing expression isnt effective)

-Punish those who are offenders and corrupt. (Its more like a comment than a heading for outline)

- un-checked and un-punished institutions (highly vague statement & rough use of vocabulary)

Spiderman & Faseeh to me even its not a good start because first you have to open the topic either by agreeing or disagreeing you cant directly plunge into the problems that we are facing due to the poor accountability system. Re-write essay outline with balance and coherence.


I have made some suggestions for the same essay you can check them out here http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-past-...tml#post199281