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FUTURE OF DEMOCRACY IN PAKISTAN

1. Introduction

a) What is Democracy
b) Why democracy is not successful in Pakistan

2. Past of Democracy in Pakistan

a) Initial Problems faced by Pakistan
b) Constitutional Problems in Forming Government
c) Incomprehensive Process of Electorates
d) Fuedals, Rais, Chaudris, Khans in Politics
e) Corruption
f) Political Instablity
g) Military take overs

3. Effects of Past on Democracy

a) Self-imposed Constitutional Amendments
b) Ayub Martial Law
c) Zia Called constitution as a mere piece of paper
d) Musharraf Referendum
e) Imposition of Emergency
f) Weak Democratic Parties
g) Mid-term Elections
h) Rigging in Elections
i) Blame Game
j) Politics of power and revenge

4. Future of Democracy in Pakistan

a) Under developed Democracy
b) Regional politics
c) Ethnical based Political Parties
d) Disharmony on national interests
e) Bad Governance
f) Politics on Religion, Sectarianism, and Ethnical Diversity

5. Steps for forming strong, stable and viable Democracy in Pakistan
a) Comprehensive Electorate System- As of USA
b) Potential Candidates- True degrees
c) Politics to serve the nation
d) Strong Accountability
e) Transparency
f) Active Judiciary
g) Role of Media- Awareness
h) People Participations

Introduction

Democracy is a system of government. It is popularly known as “Government for the people of the people and by the people”. Quaid-e-Azam envisaged a democratic form of government suitable for Pakistan. Democratic history of Pakistan has witnessed many ups and downs of its rule, since independence. Due to Initial problems as a new born state, constitutional problems, Bad Governance, Corruption, Political Instability, Military take over’s and a dominant monopolitc group of Fuedals, Chudhris, Rais, and khans in politics.

Conclusion:

Transition of underdeveloped democracy can be directed towards a successful Future of democracy which is mainly dependent on a true sprit to implement the democratic principles of Democracy such as: Installation of Good Governance, a comprehensive electorate system to meet the threshold of meritocracy. Transparency in implementation of policies. Politics should be based on serving the interest of people prioritizing over self interests. Active role of judiciary is required to confirm the practices based on constitution and justice. Besides, Role of media is required to direct the people objectively about functioning, the progress and development of democracy. As people are major stack holders and can mood survival of democracy.

All respected members of this forum are requested to please give critical view of my essay.

All respected members of this forum are requested to please give a critical view of my essay.

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1. reasons for failure of democracy in pakistan
2. sovereignty of people
3. absence of democratic political process
4. lack of democracy at gross root level
5. ethnicity & caste system
6. role of feudalism
7. pak vs india


main to ye reasons mention karti for "failure of democracy in pakistan"

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@DPO. Remove the first three headings from the outline and essays. you are gona write on FUTURE. why are you discussing past and other irrelevant topics?
Dont need to write.

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@DPO. Do not write introduction. Just hit the topic with the some expressive sentences and start writing on future of democracy in Pakistan.

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Future of Democracy in Pakistan
a) Lack of masses support
b) Non-democratic forces can try to replace it with another system

Ur point c and f are intervening so u can replace one of them with above mentioned points, if u want to.

Steps for forming strong, stable and viable Democracy in Pakistan

a) Democratic training of Politicians: need of time
b) Democratic institutions should be given enough time to get mature
c) Intervening of Non-democratic forces should be strongly condemned

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@aariz & @call for Change

Thank you so much my respected senior members for giving enough time for analysis and you both of have rightly pointed out; the points which should be included.

Still looking for analysis of outline sturcture, Grammar mistakes, and conclusion.

More members are requested to guide me in this regard.

@DPO Larkana

I liked your essay. However, one problem with outline is that the reader does not know which points you are going to emphasize and which you wont. For example your outline consists of four parts excluding introduction. Problem is that, it seems that you are giving equal importance to past and future, which you are not supposed to do, because main theme is about future not the past.

However, at the same time one cannot just through away history, as it is those events which brought us to this state of affairs. So you have to include the history of political events, but my point is to stress more on your main theme i.e. future of democracy.

Try to make an outline, where each heading should explain one idea. The sub-headings are not needed, however, these subheadings are good points for you to remember. In my opinion, you should write these sub-headings on rough page for your own reference and not on the paper.

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