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Post Seniors plz check my outline on Socio-economic problems faced by PAKISTAN

Outline
(a) introduction

(b) Social Problems

1) Infectious inflation
2) abject poverty
3) swelling population
4)rampant corruption
5) illiteracy
6) improper health facilities
7) Terrirorism/Extremism and ethnic violence
8) Feudalism
9) nefarious culture of child labour
10)merciless honour killing of women/ karo-kari
11) media hype

b)Economic problems

1)Agriculture Sector
2)Water crisis
3)Unindustrialization
4)Energy Crisis
5)Unemployment
6)Poverty
7)Import instead of Export
8)Foreign Un-investment
9)Aid instead of Trade
10)Massive Debt
11)Huge budget deficit
12) Massive burden of foreing loans i-e
IMF loans, World bank loans
c)CONCLUSION
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scarcity of food ,
Freedom movement in Baluchistan
could be added in the social problems , on the whole the effort is good ....
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Outline
(a) introduction

(b) Social Problems

1) Infectious inflation
2) abject poverty
3) swelling population
4)rampant corruption
5) illiteracy
6) improper health facilities
7) Terrirorism/Extremism and ethnic violence
8) Feudalism
9) nefarious culture of child labour
10)merciless honour killing of women/ karo-kari
11) media hype

b)Economic problems

1)Agriculture Sector
2)Water crisis
3)Unindustrialization
4)Energy Crisis
5)Unemployment
6)Poverty
7)Import instead of Export
8)Foreign Un-investment
9)Aid instead of Trade
10)Massive Debt
11)Huge budget deficit
12) Massive burden of foreing loans i-e
IMF loans, World bank loans
c)CONCLUSION
quite impressive
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dont u think we may extend it by writting consequences,remedial measures,before conclusion or this iz enuf to write?

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one more thing iz it important to mention every key point in outline if our key point lengthens too much will it effect on marking ? or it izs fine na to attempt paragraph wise with all sub headings mention in outline along with major ones, plz set my confusion

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dont u think we may extend it by writting consequences,remedial measures,before conclusion .....???????????? ...or this iz enuf to write .......????????
it is imperative to include consequences along with remedies as well.
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dont u think we may extend it by writting consequences,remedial measures,before conclusion .....???????????? ...or this iz enuf to write .......????????
I will second u. We need to write on those points too but the weight should be given much more on Problems than on those ones. The essay should be extended on this weight age: 60% Problems and 40 % Consequesncies, Remedies, n Conclusion.

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one more thing iz it important to mention every key point in outline ......if our key point lengthens too much will it effect on marking ???????or ....it izs fine na to attempt paragraph wise .....with all sub headings mention in outline along with major ones .... plz set my confusion .....
1) No need to point out every thing in OUTLINE but just main point n central point of heading n sub heading. One main points is one IDEA on which whole paragraph is dependent. This Idea is to be mentioned in ur thesis statement in ur first sentence of ur essay except for Introduction...

2) The length of good outline is just one n half sides.
3) To attempt paragraph is quite fine but there should be UNITY, COHERENCE, AND sequence in ur sentences and paragraphs..
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thanks m confused in 20 marks essay in english paper ,does length matter? or shud b to the point more than to emphasize on length. u may b call me goof as m asking this all but really these thing may b not bothering fo people but fo me i havnt joind any academy so no one iz my competitor with whom i may jesay uni main hota tha so how can i check where m standing nobody there with whom i may compare m in distress rather than i m able even to finish any unknown sbjct completely within 5 dayz but stil log kahty hain css yai wo itna difficult huh nothing like that as much but jo mental stress hota hai wo e aik sb ka hurdle hai i jst hav taken 3 mnths or sb kahty hain k is k liyai tu pora saal b km hota hai help me plz

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thanks .... m confused in 20 marks essay in english paper ,,,....does length matter,,,,...??????????or shud b to the point more than to emphasize on length ...u may b call me goof as m asking this all but really these thing may b not bothering fo people...but fo me ... i havnt joind any academy ...so no one iz my competitor .... with whom i may ...... jesay uni main hota tha ... so how can i check where m standing .... nobody there with whom i may compare ....m in distress rather than ......i m able even to finish any unknown sbjct completely within 5 dayz ....but stil ...........log kahty hain css yai wo ...itna difficult ..huh nothing like that as much but ...jo mental stress hota hai wo e aik sb ka hurdle hai ...i jst hav taken 3 mnths ...or sb kahty hain k is k liyai tu pora saal b km hota hai ......help me ......plz
No 1 can help u. U just help ur self. U r better than any other to help urself. Just get ur self into practice of writing Paragraphs..... Just trust ur self n go ahead. Just follow the footsteps of successful and failures(who lost the game by luck) candidates.
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brother same here, i also have started preparation in January, n no one is here to guide me, i too have not consulted any academy, but i think it is not much difficult as people say!
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