My Outline is as under:-

Introduction
(a precise of my essay)
Causes of Energy Crisis
-Present Energy Production ( proper figures)
-Terrible differences between Demand and Supply ( with authentic figures)
- Electricity
- Gas shortage
- Oil
-Reasons of increased demand
-Economic growth
-Increase in Population
- Overall development
- Consumption oriented culture
- Policies of Mismanagement
-No big dam after 1970s
-No new projects in Last regime
- coal mines under utilized
-nuclear power under utilized
-no alternative sources utilized
-Transmission losses

- Soaring Oil prices
- No new investment in Power Sector

Consequences
On Indutries
- Shutdown of industries
- Price hikes in every sector due to electricity prices
- Low production
On Agriculture
- Food Inflation
- Low production
Political Turmoil
- Dam Politics
Social Problems
- Low per capita income
- street agitation
- psychological problems
Remedies/ Proposed Strategies
- Short term
- Energy conservation compaign
- Circular Debt clearance
- Full utilization of resources
- Long term measures
-Building dams
- Alternative energy sources
- underground wiring
Conclusion

(My Essay was too long, it was around having 4000 words, I was scared because of its length but Allah Almighty helped me and I have passed.
Moreover, candidates were talking after the paper that "remedies" are not asked and should not be written, but I wrote them and wrote 3 pages of remedies. and most of those who did not write remedies could not clear)
My vocabulary is not good and I use simple English, but free of grammar and spelling mistakes

"Democracy is a culture rather than a process"

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let the beauty we love be what we do.......!

Can you please share the outline of the said essay. It seemed to me one of the least attempted topic.

I request you to share your outline whenever you get free.

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Apni Matti Pay Hi Chalnay Ka Saleeqa Seekho
Sang-e-Marmar Py Chalo Gy To Phisal Jao Gy

Out Line

Introduction:
Democracy Defined:
Why Democracy at all/ Preferred:
Quest for Democracy “The forefathers”
Deep rooted Democratic Manifestations Develop Over the years:
Democracy as a Full blown Culture:
Process vs. Culture Debate:
• Failure in underdeveloped Countries
• An alien Phenomenon
• Democratic values still Missing
• Democracy turned into Mob Rule
• Present in letters, Missing spirit!
• Disenchantment Prevails
• As a process democracy failed to deliver what it owed
“Democracy for the People” They have to own it!
Conclusion:

Here is the outline which i wrote in the exam. I wrote 19 pages. I could not pass written part, failed in English (P&C). I secured 41 marks in Essay with following outline.

A critical analysis of education systems in pakistan

Outline

1. Introduction
2. Forms of education
a. Formal educaion
i. Schools
ii. Colleges
iii. Universities
iv. Other recognised intitutes
b. Informal education
i. Distance educaion
ii. unrecognised madarsahs
iii. educaion at home and society
3. Importance of education
4. Defects/shortcoming of eduction systems in pakistan
a. Disorinted system
b. No uniformity
c. No check and balance
d. lack of financial resources
e. lack of infrastucture
f. No research and development
g. Less training facilities to teachers
h. Neglect of agriculture section
i. Mismatch of syllabus
j. Poor examination system
5. Outcome of poor education system
a. low literacy rate
b. lack of knowledge
c. high drop out rate
d. low agriculture and industrial output
e. less econmic growth
g. increase in poverty
h. increase in unemployment
i. increase in crime
6. Remedial Measures to improve education system
a. Government steps
i. ministry of education
ii. HEC
iii. NEVTEC
b. increase in fund allocation
c. development of infrastructure
d. Establishment of new education institutions
e. Uniformity in education
f. more research and development
g. training facilities to teachers
h. Emphasis on agri and industrial education
i. revamping of syllabus
j. effective controls
k. reforms in examination system.
7. Conclusion

energy crises in 2012 and passed ,,,40 marks

plz mntn ur score also mates

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ch farrukh shehzad

Plz Share Actual and complete outline..

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"Our Lord, give us the good in this world and the good in the hereafter." (Al-Qur'an, 2:201).

energy crises in Pakistan. couldnt pass. been able to secure 32.
my blunder was that i didnt make outline in exam.
AND i think this is the reason i failed. otherwise my essay was good.
Can anyone please guide me how much an effective outline matters in English essay???

It plays a vital role not only in securing good marks but also for merely passing the paper. It was mandatory as they had mentioned that MAKE AN OUTLINE. Besides, paper checkers do not have that much time to read the essay thoroughly. Outline makes it easy for them to have a an idea about the content of your essay.