That's good.You should keep practicing.

Good Luck!

I don't agree.

It's communication between you and the examiner.You want to tell him in detail about the topic so you should gradually come to the main points rather than jumping directly to it.Telling him straightway,"Pakistan is bla bla bla" will not be an appropriate way to communicate in effective manner.

Baat shuru karnay se pehlay 'Tamheed' he baandhi jati hai.ap kisi se baat shuru kartay hain tou kia tareeqa hota hai?

" Pakistan aik corrupt mulk hai.awaam ro rahi hai.muaashi tangdasti door hogi tou sayaasi aur samaaji manzer bhi tabdeel hoga.Muaashi haalat darust karnay k lye khud'kafeel hona hoga.hamaray paas bht wasaayil hain etc" ye ho gayi summary.

doosra tareeqa,

Muaashi istehkaam kisi bhi mulk ki taraqqi ka zaamin hota hai.Ye ik din ki baat nae balkay saal ha saal ki jaddo'jehad ka samar hota hai.muaashi taraqqi ka samaaji aur sayaasi behtari se bohat gehra talluq hota hai etc.

Phr ap zara sabar k sath Pakistan ko discuss karen.

The latter para started in indirect way and the former one directly jumped to the topic.If you start in indirect way,the listener or reader will take interest in your intro that what are you going to say onward.

Being a student of English literature and Teacher of English as well,I have my own point of views.But if you don't agree with me,you may go ahead with your own perception

Aoa
first of bundles of thanks for ur precious time.
Will u throw some light on outline of an essay.
it is feasible to start your essay with a shair I mean poetry since I have deep understanding of poetry.

Thanks in advance

sister thanks a lot for your valuable comments. i don't disagree with you. i am much confused about essay . i want to clear my ambiguities. so i discussed with you.
kindly write down the format that you consider correct for writing essay

I had requested the Mods to merge that thread into this one so that members may find answer of all their queries in a single thread.

Kher.. ! see it here,

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...art-essay.html

I will explain it soon as I'm trying to post points one by one.

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Bid Bitter Adieu to Cramming !

If you think that cramming 2,3,4 or even 10 essays would ensure your success,then you are mistaken,seriously !

Let's see how much you will have to suffer.

Hello A ,do you have any notes of essay?

Hi B,Please please give me your notes of essay?

My dear,I would share my first pay with you if you please share your essay notes with me ?

Minnaten,tension,ghabrahat etc etc.Okay finally you got some essays after struggling hard.Now what will happen?

Notes in hand,cramming starts !

One line,tough vocabulary,repeating 20 times minimum,okay finally you are done with it.Next line,then the next and it goes on.

Okay okay fine.You have memorized 10 essays after spending about two months.One minute! Are you sure the examiner is going to ask any one of them?

That's risk,the biggest risk!

Let's suppose,luckily one of them is asked in the paper.Very happily you start the paper and there you forget one line,that beautiful line which is main soul of the paragraph.What's now?Your fellow isn't writing the same essay You lose your confidence.In this dilemma,you forget the next para too.Where would it lead you?

Do you really afford such adventures in that hard game which you are allowed to play just thrice?

Cat will always be there,open your eyes please !

Make your fear your strength.It's just an essay writing.When you can think,why can't you write?

You have thoughts,you have vision,you have brain.You just need 'Practice'.


Next post will be about,if not cramming then what to do?

To be continued....

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Self Writing is an art,try to develop it !

Nothing is impossible!To develop your skill of self writing,you need to follow a few points.


-->To write in your own words,you need knowledge.

-->To increase your knowledge,you need to read a lot.

-->To polish your writing skill,you need practice.

-->Practice writing randomly in the beginning.Then make it a habit.

-->Whenever you read any important article,try to write it in your own words.

-->Step by step,start organizing your writing.

-->Add quotations to make it worthy and impressive.

-->Make your every piece of writing check by any good teacher.


Bacon has rightly said,

Reading Maketh a full Man; Conference a ready man; and writing an exact man

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http://www.cssforum.com.pk/511647-post475.html

farah ,kindly check it and correct it

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Sadia ! Sorry to say but It's not possible for me to check the whole essay.I can check intro or conclusion or even outline but that should be a literary or general topic.I don't consider myself an authority for such technical topics.

Well,sher mein garbar hai

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thanx for correcting it .My dear you are not authority but i have found your capabilities more then many ..so you can if u may intend.And i `ve requested u plz

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My routine is very tough,seriously

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