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Default The introduction of new digital technologies has radically altered identities

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Introduction:
What are new digital technologies
a: Internet
b: Social Media
c: Smartphones
d: Laptops
e: Google Smart Watch & Google Glass etc
How the new digital technologies have reshaped the world
Social Media Giants
a: Google
b: Facebook
c: Twitter
Positive Impacts of Social Media
a: on Students
b: on Professional
c: Organizational Level
Negative Impacts of Social Media
a: By Terrorists
b: By Students
c: Keyboard Warriors
d: Fake Profiles
e: e-Jihadists
Impacts of new Digital technologies at Individual level
Impacts of new Digital technologies at Industrial/Business level
Super Powers, the leading countries to use new digital technologies
Pakistan & New Digital Technologies
a: Over 10 Million Facebook Users
b: Over 18 Million Internet Users
c: Over 8 Million smartphone users
d: 3g & 4g launching
Suggestions to stop misuse of social media/internet
a: Cyber Laws
b: parental check and balance
c: Law enforcement agencies role
Suggestions to use new digital technologies for a positive change
a: at personal level
b: business level
c: at society level
Conclusion
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I attempted it.

Excellent outline!

I can't recall the exact outline I wrote. But I divided it into 3-4 main points, which were then broken down in sub points and I worked back the outline at the end.

Here are some of the points

- Intro - The information age
- Altering perceptions of identity
- How digital is altering it
- Technologies and apps
- Media
- Cases (several practical scenarios)
- Government initiatives (CNIC, Driving License, SECP, FBR)
- Conclusion
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Thanks and Good luck buddy!

Looks like it is also the least attempted topic.
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Thanks and Good luck buddy!

Looks like it is also the least attempted topic.

Outlines:

1. Preamble
2. Rise of the new technologies
3. Identity damages:
3.1 Media as a watchdog
3.2 Broken social ties
3.3 Dissimulation
3.4 Capturing of young minds
4. Transformation to the country side
5. Intellectuals worry
6. Recommendations to make the rise use of technologies to some extent
7. Conclusion

i wrote 9 pages excluding outline page. more or less 1800 words

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The introduction of new digital technologies has radically altered identities.
Outline:
1. Introduction
2. Meaning of digital technologies
3. Examples of digital technologies
( laptop, android mobile, digital electronic machines, computer, internet, Medical machines, Ultrasound, MRI, CT Scan, super computers, digital and spy cameras, drone cameras, automatic electronic cars, automatic navigators, Digital dialysis machines, smart TV, etc.
4. Effects of new digital technologies on individuals.
5. Effects of new digital technologies on society.
6. Effects of new digital technologies in industry.
7. Effects of new digital technologies in Agriculture.
8. Effects of new digital technologies in transportation.
9. Effects of new digital technologies in hospitals.
10. Effects of new digital technologies in education system.
11.Effects of new digital technologies in communication.
12.Effects of new digital technologies in sports.
13. Effects of new digital technologies in private institutions.
14. Effects of new digital technologies in Government institutions.
15. Merits of new digital technologies.
A. Better communication
B. Better transportation facilities.
c. Better education system
D. improvement in quality.
E. Increase in production.
F.saving of time
G. saving of Cost
H. Best usage of resources
I. Better medical facilities
J. Increase in efficiency
K. Increase in effectiveness
L. Automatic systems
16. Demerits of new digital technologies.
A. Dependence on machines
B. Lack of moral values
C. Unemployment
D. Decrease in men's importance
E.Destruction of nature
F. Increase in artificial life
17. Conclusion
Total 15 pages including outline.
I am worried about this phrase; Altered identities.
This phrase is creating doubt in my mind that my outline is wrong.
Please give me some hope because my precis paper is gone very well.
Precis Title: The Cost of Wars
To me, your outline looks very fine!

Rest, God knows!
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But why are people stressing on social media? It is confusing me.
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What if you pass and you haven't given other papers with full commitment?

How would you feel?

Buckle down and revise whatever you need to and take a good night's sleep
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But why are people stressing on social media? It is confusing me.
Because its about Technology altering our identities!

And our digital identity is now tied to Digital Media and other integrated networks
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Anyone who attempted this Essay? Feel free to share your outline, comments and corrections and suggestions are most welcomed!

Introduction:
What are new digital technologies
a: Internet
b: Social Media
c: Smartphones
d: Laptops
e: Google Smart Watch & Google Glass etc
How the new digital technologies have reshaped the world
Social Media Giants
a: Google
b: Facebook
c: Twitter
Positive Impacts of Social Media
a: on Students
b: on Professional
c: Organizational Level
Negative Impacts of Social Media
a: By Terrorists
b: By Students
c: Keyboard Warriors
d: Fake Profiles
e: e-Jihadists
Impacts of new Digital technologies at Individual level
Impacts of new Digital technologies at Industrial/Business level
Super Powers, the leading countries to use new digital technologies
Pakistan & New Digital Technologies
a: Over 10 Million Facebook Users
b: Over 18 Million Internet Users
c: Over 8 Million smartphone users
d: 3g & 4g launching
Suggestions to stop misuse of social media/internet
a: Cyber Laws
b: parental check and balance
c: Law enforcement agencies role
Suggestions to use new digital technologies for a positive change
a: at personal level
b: business level
c: at society level
Conclusion
Well done friend, your topic justification is comprehensive as per topic statement. You made it dear. What about your composition paper, are you satisfied with that?

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the essay demands how technology has altered our identity, hence it is imperative to first identity then the effects of technology on it be discussed. identity is the sum total of our religious, social and cultural values that make us distinct from other societies.
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