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[peshawari]

essay gender equality is a myth
outlines

1 introduction
( in intro i wrote that nowhere in world we can see gender equality, in body of essay I go against gender equality)
2 gender discrimination and the western countries
a citizen ship right
b early marriages
c immobility
d divorse
e custody rights
f front line forces
3 gender discrimination and Pakistan
a city vs villages
b honor killing
c early marriages
d infanticide
e job discrimination
f enrollment in schools
4 gender discrimination before Islam
a burden on family
b chattels
c infanticide
5 gender equality in Islam
a as a daughter
b as a mother
c education right
6 gender discrimination as a culture bias
a one child policy
b dowery
7 causes of gd
a physical weakness
b poverty
c lack of education
d religious unawareness
8 consequenses
a economics
b political
9 steps taken by Pakistan
a paf
b army
c css allocation
10 recommendation
a media role
b increase in education
c poverty alleviation
d islam in ife
e prohibit early marriages
f credit facility for women
e JOB OPPORTUNITIES
g social mobilization
h strong measure against infanticide
i media role
11 conclusion