Problem of education system in Pakistan

Education plays important role in development of the nation or country. Political stability and socioeconomic progress is brought by it. Education helps to aware the people about there national and civic rights and duties. Educated person knows his obligation to wards the country and try to build up the healthy society.
The biggest problem of Pakistan is its weak education system. According to experts poor education system is the major cause of political instability and economic backwardness in the country. Terrorism, which has shaken the very foundation of the country, is the product of poor education system and poverty.
Education system of Pakistan is confronting with many problems; lack of funds, corruption in education departments and inefficient utilization of the funds. Moreover the education disparity in the country has further aggravated the situation. The private or elite institutions are very expensive and impart education on western style. However the government’s education institutions have obsolete syllabus. The students of government institutes unable to cape up the standard of elite institutes in this way a huge bay creates and produces harming effects for the society.
Moreover the higher education institutions aren’t equipped to cope up with required standard. The stress is put on the subjective type of education and research is rarely done. The scrambling situation of the education is further aggravated by the government ill advice step to curtail 60% funds of Higher education Commission, which has been performed well for last 5 years to per mote education in country. Many developing countries; India and Fareast Asian nations put great stress on research and got the sunny outcomes. The education development scheme of these nations should be followed in order to make progress in this regarded.
The tumbling education system should be improved on war footing; the government as well as civil society should take active part to up hold the education in the country. Pakistan has plenty of natural and human resource. The need of the hour is to utilize the natural and human resources efficiently and effectively to develop the country. and in this regard standardized education could play act role other wise the country would hardly flourish.

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