Members plz checkout of Outline of my 1st essay

[SameerAhmed]

Dear members i know myself that this outline is low level approach and i have not command over English and 1st time posting my outline so plz suggest me how can i make it more suitable and which steps should i take for writing an essay.




PROBLEMS FACING PAKISTAN

INTRODUCTION:
CRISIS:
I- Energy crisis
a) Industrial Sector
b) Agricultural Sector
c) Unemployment
d) Poverty
ii-Economic Crisis
iii- water crisis
iv- Political Unstability Crisis
v- Inflation
TERRORISM:
i- Extremism
ii- Lack of Education
iii- Lack of tolerance
iv- Social and Political Injustice
CORRUPTION:
i- Financial Corruption
ii- Moral Corruption
EDUCATIONAL PROBLEMS:
I-Inadequate Funding
ii- Faculty
iii- Disparity

Conclusion:

[BaLooch Salman]

Originally Posted by SameerAhmed

Dear members i know myself that this outline is low level approach and i have not command over English and 1st time posting my outline so plz suggest me how can i make it more suitable and which steps should i take for writing an essay.




PROBLEMS FACING PAKISTAN

INTRODUCTION:
CRISIS:
I- Energy crisis
a) Industrial Sector
b) Agricultural Sector
c) Unemployment
d) Poverty
ii-Economic Crisis
iii- water crisis
iv- Political Unstability Crisis
v- Inflation
TERRORISM:
i- Extremism
ii- Lack of Education
iii- Lack of tolerance
iv- Social and Political Injustice
CORRUPTION:
i- Financial Corruption
ii- Moral Corruption
EDUCATIONAL PROBLEMS:
I-Inadequate Funding
ii- Faculty
iii- Disparity

Conclusion:

dear if it was your first try then its very very nice and absoultely covers all the details come under this topic...i suggest you to keep reading more and more essays from newspapers and books and write their outline and keep posted here.

[SameerAhmed]

dear can u suggest me the essay's book and newspaper where i can get essay?

[BaLooch Salman]

Originally Posted by SameerAhmed

dear can u suggest me the essay's book and newspaper where i can get essay?

dear i recommend only one book for essays written by a local author.
name of the book is

" Popular Paragraphs and Essays "with outline(including previous css & pcs essays from 1955 to date) by prof. Iftikhar ahmad M.A.English (Oxon, England)
it's a very comprehensive book go through it you will surely find this very beneficial. read an essay daily from this book and then write down your own outline.

newspaper is for those essays which are current affair related you read it on daily basis and collect material for your essay paper. you can't find a complete essay with outline written in any newspaper. you have to read those editorial pages and articles and collect relevant material for it.

[naila cheema]

sir plz help me regarding essay writing.I,ve been reading dawn n other sources for essay writing since last 2 months but i, ve not been able to write any essay.can u plz give me some tips how should I start writing. I,m really worried.

[BaLooch Salman]

Originally Posted by naila cheema

sir plz help me regarding essay writing.I,ve been reading dawn n other sources for essay writing since last 2 months but i, ve not been able to write any essay.can u plz give me some tips how should I start writing. I,m really worried.

madam pls go through the following links on this forum written by csp's and scholars of this forum.

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...y-writing.html

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...ssay-tips.html

also buy the above mentioned book and start practicing outlines from it.