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It is very nice essay. Keep it up and keep on practicing. I would suggest to choose current affairs topics to comment on.
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@ zuhaib ahmad
i noticed you english is very good.plz give some sugesstions for imrovement of my english specially grammer and essay writing..... |
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My first attempt...
The Future Of Democracy in Pakistan Outlines: Introduction," What is democracy" Roles of democracy Principles of democracy To respect the freedom of speech and thoughts To involve people in developing a strong democractic government in Pakistan The progress of democracy in Pakistan Hurdles in the way to success of democracy in Pakistan In Pakistan democractic system is western democracy or Islamic democracy? Conclusions Recommendations |
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Nice use of quotations to support your argumentation - something I did not do. I scored 40 marks in this one. Best wishes for you! |
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zuhaib ahmed (Monday, October 22, 2012) |
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@ Usman Khalid & Seniors
Kya ham Essay men headings de sktey hen????? ya just Paragraph
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Dear zuhaib! how many marks you got in this essay?? if you have appeared...
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@ UZMAUZI
My first attempt... The Future Of Democracy in Pakistan Outlines: Introduction," What is democracy" Roles of democracy Principles of democracy To respect the freedom of speech and thoughts To involve people in developing a strong democractic government in Pakistan The progress of democracy in Pakistan Hurdles in the way to success of democracy in Pakistan In Pakistan democractic system is western democracy or Islamic democracy? Conclusions Recommendations YOUR MARKS IN THIS ESSAY PLEASE???????????
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zuhaib ahmed (Monday, October 22, 2012) |
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sir can u guid me how to make synopsis of a litarary essay....
reply at ur earliest convience..
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zuhaib ahmed (Monday, October 22, 2012) |
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To be honest, there are some grammatical mistakes like 'If fish is gotten out of water and thrown on dried and burning ground, it will feel panic and die', here 'feel panic' should just be 'panic'.
There are structural mistakes as well in some sentences and sentence completion is abrupt. However, overall attempt is good but still needs some improvement. Hope you rectify your mistakes and march towards excellence.
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