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Here is the outline which i wrote in the exam. I wrote 19 pages. Seniors are requested to comment whether it can get passing marks or otherwise.

A critical analysis of education systems in pakistan

Outline

1. Introduction
2. Forms of education
a. Formal educaion
i. Schools
ii. Colleges
iii. Universities
iv. Other recognised intitutes
b. Informal education
i. Distance educaion
ii. unrecognised madarsahs
iii. educaion at home and society
3. Importance of education
4. Defects/shortcoming of eduction systems in pakistan
a. Disorinted system
b. No uniformity
c. No check and balance
d. lack of financial resources
e. lack of infrastucture
f. No research and development
g. Less training facilities to teachers
h. Neglect of agriculture section
i. Mismatch of syllabus
j. Poor examination system
5. Outcome of poor education system
a. low literacy rate
b. lack of knowledge
c. high drop out rate
d. low agriculture and industrial output
e. less econmic growth
g. increase in poverty
h. increase in unemployment
i. increase in crime
6. Remedial Measures to improve education system
a. Government steps
i. ministry of education
ii. HEC
iii. NEVTEC
b. increase in fund allocation
c. development of infrastructure
d. Establishment of new education institutions
e. Uniformity in education
f. more research and development
g. training facilities to teachers
h. Emphasis on agri and industrial education
i. revamping of syllabus
j. effective controls
k. reforms in examination system.
7. Conclusion

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I hope and pray that they will take this in a positive way and will be careful next time.

Anyways there are numerous methods employed by various counties to counter (Taiwan, Italy, U.S.A) this problem.

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