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sound and careful reading like a way to consider all aspects.........
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thank you zafar,
but try to pin point negative points as well.
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AoA @ll. Another attempt on short essay/idea expansion.







Causes of Pakistan Backwardness.

Pakistan became an independent state in 1947. Broadly speaking, the people of Pakistan rendered colossal sacrifices for its independence. Pitifully, Quaid’s vision of Pakistan to see it as a great power , never fulfilled. Political rivalaries, incompetency on the part of political leadership, corruption, illiteracy, military intervention, extremism and now terrorism never let Pakistan to prosper. Conversely, several other states particularly china and Indonesia,which got their independence after Pakistan, have witnessed progress tremendously. It is really astonishing that a country which is rich in natural resources, having gigantic manpower and pivotal geo-strategic importance could not progressed in a manner as was expected. Poverty rate in Pakistan is very high. According to one estimate, 1/3rd of the population is living below the poverty line. Besides Poverty, widespread unemployment has broken the backbone of the poor. Similarly, corruption has permeated in the nook and corner of the country and has posed serious challenges to its very survival. Country’s progress ratio is still very slow. However, all this does not mean that there is no way out. Realistically speaking,It would require hurculean efforts to pull the country out from the shackles of backwardness . To say, Government should rise to the occasion and deal the problem with iron hand. Firstly, Corruption should be rooted out. Secondly,equal opportunities of employment should be given to all. In addition to this, free education should form priority of the government. Last but not least, people should participate in welfare activities and shed the feelings of intolerance and extremism. No doubt, by taking such steps our country will be set out on the right track.
Make paragraphs divide your points in a symmetric way .
Use direct rather indirect way of expression (not from past to current except in historical essay)
Give figures "inflation rate is high" how much ?
outline is essence and way to impress examiner try that
your expression is good but yes you are right you lack a bit professional vocab . seems like you are good speaker so you can manage a good bunch of words to use in your writings stay blessed
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shortage of time never let me to improve my english writing expression. i can speak very well but having problems in writing.
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Your essays and expansions are good. Your points are reasonable too.

With regards to spelling and grammar, I believe you have done well. But in my personal opinion, your expression requires improvement.
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shortage of time never let me to improve my english writing expression. i can speak very well but having problems in writing.
Your writing style depicts that you are good speaker i knew that
hey here is trick while reading newspaper or any paper underline words then use them in writing only three words on daily basis not more than three you will have a cavalry of vocab by the papers . And found few grammatical mistakes avoid them may be i am a bit harsh but its good for you stay blessed
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you have good writing skills and you can improve on it with practice. sometimes when one is a good speaker he uses infomal words in writing that does not leave good impression on the mind of examiner. try to sort that out
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dear you need to pay full attention on .... spelling as well as grammar, esp. structure of sentences...... however I believe you have done well. But check every word ..... what you have written in your para. like hurculean is not the exact word ....... herculean and so many minor mistakes are there...... but keep it up you can do a good job.....
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can someone write introduction on any topic here.. only intro..
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can someone write introduction on any topic here.. only intro..
yes why not but again will suggest you to master outline ? stay blessed it is requirement and mandatory as far intro is concerned that depends on the statement post here any topic with a statement not a single word topic ?
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